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    If I Fall: Chapter 9

    Story written on January 5, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Getting inside Dana’s head; A surprise party for Alice and Shane spills the beans to Dana; Dana & Lara’s steady decline

     

    Dana, Lara, Shane and Carmen were all seated at a small table outside The Planet, chatting as they enjoyed the lunch Lara had prepared for them before she took her break.

     

    "So, what are you guys doing tonight?" Dana waited expectantly for an answer from Shane and/or Carmen.

     

    Shane hesitated, unsure of how to respond as Carmen began to look rather uncomfortable. This wasn’t lost on Dana, and just as she was about to inquire further, Kit came rushing over to the table ranting about some emergency in the kitchen that she needed Lara to tend to. The chef excused herself and Shane prayed that Dana would forget she had yet to receive an answer to her question.     

     

    "So?"

    Shane raised her eyebrows at her friend as she stuffed her mouth full of food. "Hmm?" she managed to get out.

     

    "Shane! I asked what you and Carmen have planned for tonight. I was thinking if you didn’t have anything to do we should all go see that new Angelina Jolie movie."

     

    Shane quickly turned to Carmen, who recognized the need to step in and save her rather unnerved girlfriend. "Oh, we actually have a party to go to," Carmen explained quite nonchalantly.

     

    "Oh cool, anyone I know?"

     

    At that Shane dropped her fork on her plate and took a deep breath. She assumed that Dana would get wind of what was really going on tonight sooner or later, but she had hoped that it wouldn’t have to be through her. So much for that.

     

    "Helena Peabody is throwing Alice a surprise party tonight at her place." Shane figured that at least the cat was out of the bag now and Dana could do with the info whatever she wished.

     

    "Oh…," Dana trailed off. Of course the first thought that entered her head this morning was that today was Alice’s birthday. She had considered calling her, or even taking the coward’s way out and sending a quick email, but when she thought about what to say, the words just escaped her. Everything she had thought of had seemed inadequate and insincere. How do you convince the woman you still love very much that you want her to have a happy birthday even though you’re the reason she’s been so incredibly unhappy?

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    1. I’m liking this more and more every time you post, so yay or something. And I knew I could spot a fellow Helacious fan…but it’s so hard to write her properly while Dana’s still (rightfully) around. Well, for me it is, anyway. And you’re right, I do feel even worse for Lara, although I think she’s kinda digging her own grave by trying to be supportive. Poor soup chef just can’t win no matter what she does. Anyway, I hope Dana gets her head clear about the relationship she’s currently in before she goes making trouble with Alice’s new one…and yeah, I still like Jules. Please make her say “motherfucker” at least once, will ya?

    2. Poor soup chef muted? Poor soup chef my ass! If you ask me she’s the only thing keeping danish apart right now, that and Jules who seems to perfect to be true, can you make her have a penis or something so Alice can break up with her and danish get back together? Ok maybe not that, your story is doing ickedly awesome without my ‘ideas’. You describe Dana perfectly, there’s no other word aside perfect. I just hope she can get her shit together and realise that Alice is the one for her and she truly won’t find another woman better for her. You know I would be kinda happy with Helacious in season 4 since Dana is no longer around, I’ll put it that way since it hurts less :( Now I’m just typing for the sake of typing so I’ll stop and say awesome post, I need more of it, so you must do as Bradshaw says and write more :D xx

    4. Can’t wait for the party! I love where this is going! You’re doing a fantastic job my dear :D This was too short! I gotta know how the party goes damnit. lol. ok so great job and PPS. Oh and I’ll check for your PM. lol

    5. De_leish – if Jules has a penis, she may be the perfect one for Alice, and we’ll never see danish again. lolI can’t feel sorry for Lara because she’s going against her own nature, and she knows that Dana still has feelings for Alice, but hey she got what she wanted. She got Dana back, but not all of her. Dana’s ability to avoid things strikes a little too close to home, so I’m going to leave her alone on that one. lolLet’s get this party started! Soon, please. :-)

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