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I’ll Never Get Over You – Part 4
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Alice nodded and watched Dana and her new girlfriend. “So you guys like her then?”
“She makes Dana smile, Al. So for that, yeah I guess I like her.”
“Well then as long as she’s happy.” Alice looked at the couple one more time. “Well, I think I’m gonna bail.”
“Al”
“She’ll understand. Will you do me a favor though?” Alice waited for Shane’s nod. “Will you give this to her. Tell her you saw it and it reminded you of her.” Shane waited until Alice was gone before opening the box that Al had handed her.
Alice walked into her apartment and set her keys on the table and dropped her shoes on the floor as she made her way toward the kitchen. The light on her answering machine was blinking urgently at her and she made her way over to it so that she could stab the button and listen to whoever was looking for her. There were three messages from Mark wanting to know where she had gone and three messages from Adam. The first one asking where she was, the second one telling her that he was coming over after work and the third one telling her that he had stopped by, but she had been out and he would call her when he got out of work the next day. It had been four hours since she had left the party. Four hours since she had held Dana in her arms for what would probably be the last time. Alice couldn’t believe that it had been a year since she had broken both their hearts. She really did like Adam even though Mark said that he was an *****. And she knew that Dana liked Leisha. She knew that she was on the verge of falling for her. Dana was only ever comfortable with people that she cared about and she had seemed very comfortable with Leisha.
Alice was halfway to her bathroom to take a shower when she heard her doorbell. She grumbled thinking that it was probably Adam and right now she didn’t really want to talk to him. Even though she had told him to stop by after he got out of work because she thought that she might need the company, but now as she made her way to the door she was definitely regretting this decision. She reached for the handle priming herself for having to tell Adam that she just wanted to be alone, but swallowed when she saw who was actually at her door.
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Hey there everyone, like I said I almost left the last part out because sadly I blush at the word ‘naked’ but after taking it out and adding it in about a million times, I just found that I wanted it there. I was a little iffy because I didn’t know if I captured the feel of the scene right, and there’s that blushing thing, but as I requested please be gentle, I’m trying to expand myself here….
That was such a Kik ass post!..THNX4writing, jus need2get rid of Leisha&Adam& It’LL b all GooD :D this lst scene was grt dude..abso-fuking-lutely spectacular..Post soon I hope? mwah
This story gets better and better. And the end scene there was hot but realistic and tastefully done, quite beautiful really. Please post soon xx
Wow… Just wow!!!
Bravo. I don’t think the scene could have been written any better. So emotional. Can’t wait to see what follows.
that was just amazing…..the love scene was beautifully well written…..don’t think it could’ve been done any better than that
You’re back with a vengence lol. I adore the bittersweetness feel of this story, and that last scene was achingly tender and throughly satisfiying. You never have to worry ; )
that was great! especially the last page. ;) whew!
When this chapter came up I actually went back to read both stories. Now that I’m caught up, I hope Danish can finally work things out. Your writing keeps getting better and better, you portray their pain and emotions beautifully. And that last scene was truly amazing. Thanks for posting it =)
Wow, thanks the emotions are wonderful, love this secure and caring Dana.
that was great but what will they tell their partners about this but I am just glad to see that they have sort of made up and I can wait for the next post as I love this story please post soon
i love this story and i am so glad that you have time to write more. you are one of my favorite writers on here and this is my favorite story. you write with so much emotion and feeling. the last scene was hot and if you think this is the worst of your writing i think you are doing pretty good for yourself. great post. glad to see dana and alice reconnecting.
I was wondering if you were going to post again. I know it has been a long while but I want to know what was in that box!!!