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I’ll Never Get Over You – Part 4
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“Can I cut in?” Leisha felt Dana freeze in her arms before she even lifted her head she knew that this woman must be Alice. She stepped back without hesitation and presented her Date to the other woman and walked slowly off the dance floor without looking back.
Dana didn’t meet Alice’s eyes at first as she stepped into her embrace, but swallowed at the familiar feel of having Alice Pieszecki close to her. “I saw you play. You were incredible.” She said as they moved gently to the music. Dana finally looked up at Alice and smiled in appreciation for Al’s support.
Dana dropped her eyes again though and the two of them danced wordless for a few more minutes moving closer and closer to each other, both feeling things that they shouldn’t. Dana closed her eyes for a moment before taking a deep breath and a half step back from her former lover. She raised her head again and smiled fondly at Alice’s messy hair. “You dyed your hair.” She said wanting to break the spell that was slowly settling over them.
As soon as Dana spoke Alice remembered that she had not seen this woman in over a year. She remembered that she no longer had the right to hold Dana this way. “Was that your girlfriend?”
Dana was unable to look at Alice’s face, “Yeah. Sort of.”
“You like her don’t you?”
Dana finally met Alice’s eyes. “And you like him.” Neither one was really a question, just both of them observing the other, so neither question required an answer.
“I guess that meanswhat does it mean, Dana?”
Dana thought for a second before curling her mouth into a small smile of understanding. “I guess it means thatthe world doesn’t stop for broken hearts.” Dana stepped away from Alice and headed back toward where Leisha was standing, looking surprised that Dana had been able to walk away from the other woman.
Shane, who had witnessed the dance between her two friends and who could now see the sadness all over Alice’s face walked over to her friend and hugged her. “She knew about Adam.”
“She saw you guys a while ago. She asked me about him. It wasn’t fair to lie.” Shane said without apology.
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Hey there everyone, like I said I almost left the last part out because sadly I blush at the word ‘naked’ but after taking it out and adding it in about a million times, I just found that I wanted it there. I was a little iffy because I didn’t know if I captured the feel of the scene right, and there’s that blushing thing, but as I requested please be gentle, I’m trying to expand myself here….
That was such a Kik ass post!..THNX4writing, jus need2get rid of Leisha&Adam& It’LL b all GooD :D this lst scene was grt dude..abso-fuking-lutely spectacular..Post soon I hope? mwah
This story gets better and better. And the end scene there was hot but realistic and tastefully done, quite beautiful really. Please post soon xx
Wow… Just wow!!!
Bravo. I don’t think the scene could have been written any better. So emotional. Can’t wait to see what follows.
that was just amazing…..the love scene was beautifully well written…..don’t think it could’ve been done any better than that
You’re back with a vengence lol. I adore the bittersweetness feel of this story, and that last scene was achingly tender and throughly satisfiying. You never have to worry ; )
that was great! especially the last page. ;) whew!
When this chapter came up I actually went back to read both stories. Now that I’m caught up, I hope Danish can finally work things out. Your writing keeps getting better and better, you portray their pain and emotions beautifully. And that last scene was truly amazing. Thanks for posting it =)
Wow, thanks the emotions are wonderful, love this secure and caring Dana.
that was great but what will they tell their partners about this but I am just glad to see that they have sort of made up and I can wait for the next post as I love this story please post soon
i love this story and i am so glad that you have time to write more. you are one of my favorite writers on here and this is my favorite story. you write with so much emotion and feeling. the last scene was hot and if you think this is the worst of your writing i think you are doing pretty good for yourself. great post. glad to see dana and alice reconnecting.
I was wondering if you were going to post again. I know it has been a long while but I want to know what was in that box!!!