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I’ll Never Get Over You – Part 4
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He had arrived looking as tired as he said he was and Alice had hugged him close trying to apologize for her actions. They had just started making up when he had once again brought up meeting her friends. “I’m trying here, Alice, but I can’t make this work if you won’t let me be a part of your life.” Alice shook her head as his words invaded her brain. It wasn’t that she didn’t want Adam to meet her friends, it was just that she didn’t want to tell him that her friends already disliked him thanks to the very biased opinion of Mark. He had promptly let everyone know that she was dating an *****. It was just easier to keep them apart until Alice herself felt like the relationship was going somewhere. And that was where Alice truly became confused. She wanted it to go somewhere, but she still didn’t want to let go of Dana. She knew that she still loved her. She knew that her jaw still clenched with jealousy whenever anyone mentioned Leisha. She knew that she hated the fact that all her friends seemed to be so in love with this other woman.
Alice also knew that even though Dana was with someone else she didn’t want Dana to know that she was with Adam. She knew that Dana would be hurt that Alice’s first real relationship after her was with a guy. Alice knew that Dana would read into the fact too much and she didn’t want to hurt Dana anymore. She didn’t want to have to hear Dana ask if she had ever been enough for Alice, and she didn’t want to see her face when she would have to explain that the only reason that she had chosen Adam was because there was no other woman for her. And this was the truth. Alice didn’t think that she would ever be with another woman. There were no other woman after Dana Fairbanks. And knowing this would hurt Dana all over again, knowing that Alice loved her and had broken her heart anyway would make Dana a mess all over again. Alice wasn’t prepared for this at all. And then there was the problem of never having told Adam anything about her break up with Dana. Nothing about what had happened or how hurt she had been. And of course there was the tiny fact that Alice had never told Adam that her infamous ex was a woman. She just didn’t know how he would react. These were all the reasons that she couldn’t introduce Adam to the group, and they were all the reasons that she hadn’t been able to give Adam the previous night. These were all the reasons that Adam had left her sitting in her couch bed all alone with those words ringing in her ears
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Hey there everyone, like I said I almost left the last part out because sadly I blush at the word ‘naked’ but after taking it out and adding it in about a million times, I just found that I wanted it there. I was a little iffy because I didn’t know if I captured the feel of the scene right, and there’s that blushing thing, but as I requested please be gentle, I’m trying to expand myself here….
That was such a Kik ass post!..THNX4writing, jus need2get rid of Leisha&Adam& It’LL b all GooD :D this lst scene was grt dude..abso-fuking-lutely spectacular..Post soon I hope? mwah
This story gets better and better. And the end scene there was hot but realistic and tastefully done, quite beautiful really. Please post soon xx
Wow… Just wow!!!
Bravo. I don’t think the scene could have been written any better. So emotional. Can’t wait to see what follows.
that was just amazing…..the love scene was beautifully well written…..don’t think it could’ve been done any better than that
You’re back with a vengence lol. I adore the bittersweetness feel of this story, and that last scene was achingly tender and throughly satisfiying. You never have to worry ; )
that was great! especially the last page. ;) whew!
When this chapter came up I actually went back to read both stories. Now that I’m caught up, I hope Danish can finally work things out. Your writing keeps getting better and better, you portray their pain and emotions beautifully. And that last scene was truly amazing. Thanks for posting it =)
Wow, thanks the emotions are wonderful, love this secure and caring Dana.
that was great but what will they tell their partners about this but I am just glad to see that they have sort of made up and I can wait for the next post as I love this story please post soon
i love this story and i am so glad that you have time to write more. you are one of my favorite writers on here and this is my favorite story. you write with so much emotion and feeling. the last scene was hot and if you think this is the worst of your writing i think you are doing pretty good for yourself. great post. glad to see dana and alice reconnecting.
I was wondering if you were going to post again. I know it has been a long while but I want to know what was in that box!!!