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I’ll Never Get Over You – Part 4
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“You were awesome, Dane.” Carmen slapped Dana a high five as she came out of the locker room with a bag slung casually over her shoulder. Dana grinned.
“Well, no early celebrating. I almost lost. And I still have one more match to play in two days.”
Leisha walked over to Dana and kissed her sweetly. “You really were brilliant.” She whispered into Dana’s ear. “I can’t wait to get you alone so that I can congratulate you properly.” Dana grinned again and blushed slightly.
“So are you guys enjoying New York?” Dana questioned her friends as she reached down to grasp Leisha’s hand.
“Definitely.” Carmen said as they made their way to the car that Dana had to take them all back to the hotel.
“Yeah, definitely.” Shane added and then turned toward Dana, “In fact, we were thinking about ditching you guys and going to check out more of the city. I mean I’m sure that you have at least a little bit of celebrating that you want to do huh D?” Shane smiled slyly at her friend.
“Okay then I guess I’ll see you guys back at the hotel then?” Dana asked. Shane nodded and Dana watched Carmen and Shane disappear into the crowd.
Leisha smiled as she watched Dana’s friends disappear into the crowd. “So, now that I have you all alone. What am I going to do with you.”
“Well, I am really tired and I think that I just want to go back to the hotel and relax. Take a bath. Maybe some food.” Dana smiled tiredly and leaned her head against Leisha’s shoulder as they walked the rest of the way to the car.
Alice opened her eyes and found herself staring at her ceiling, her thoughts immediately picking up at the exact spot that they had left off at the previous night. Highly annoyed, Alice threw the blanket off of her and got off the couch to go put on a cup of coffee. She had spent the night thinking about Adam. She had called him after the match genuinely apologetic that she had made him wait so long. He told her that he was too tired to talk about the gaps in their relationship, but had finally agreed to come back to Alice’s apartment.
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Hey there everyone, like I said I almost left the last part out because sadly I blush at the word ‘naked’ but after taking it out and adding it in about a million times, I just found that I wanted it there. I was a little iffy because I didn’t know if I captured the feel of the scene right, and there’s that blushing thing, but as I requested please be gentle, I’m trying to expand myself here….
That was such a Kik ass post!..THNX4writing, jus need2get rid of Leisha&Adam& It’LL b all GooD :D this lst scene was grt dude..abso-fuking-lutely spectacular..Post soon I hope? mwah
This story gets better and better. And the end scene there was hot but realistic and tastefully done, quite beautiful really. Please post soon xx
Wow… Just wow!!!
Bravo. I don’t think the scene could have been written any better. So emotional. Can’t wait to see what follows.
that was just amazing…..the love scene was beautifully well written…..don’t think it could’ve been done any better than that
You’re back with a vengence lol. I adore the bittersweetness feel of this story, and that last scene was achingly tender and throughly satisfiying. You never have to worry ; )
that was great! especially the last page. ;) whew!
When this chapter came up I actually went back to read both stories. Now that I’m caught up, I hope Danish can finally work things out. Your writing keeps getting better and better, you portray their pain and emotions beautifully. And that last scene was truly amazing. Thanks for posting it =)
Wow, thanks the emotions are wonderful, love this secure and caring Dana.
that was great but what will they tell their partners about this but I am just glad to see that they have sort of made up and I can wait for the next post as I love this story please post soon
i love this story and i am so glad that you have time to write more. you are one of my favorite writers on here and this is my favorite story. you write with so much emotion and feeling. the last scene was hot and if you think this is the worst of your writing i think you are doing pretty good for yourself. great post. glad to see dana and alice reconnecting.
I was wondering if you were going to post again. I know it has been a long while but I want to know what was in that box!!!