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    Instinct part6

    Story written on June 12, 2008 by adicttosharmen.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=69894
    Author Notes:

    “So I’m asking… do you believe in the happily ever after?”

     

    “How do you know how much is too much?” she never shuts up now … SHUT UP SHANE SHU UP!  “Too much, too soon? Too much information? Too much fun? Too much love? …Like you said.. Our relationship was a rollercoaster… highs and lows… but isn’t that what makes it that good?…  nothing is easy… good things take work… you would never feel how I made you feel”  again… perfect…

     

    “I’m married…”

     

    “I am an optimist. I am hopeful. I’m not sure …If what you want is to be with Niky then I will do anything in my power to support you to make your marriage work. But because I considered my self your friend, because I want all the good things for you and because I love you…. I also have to say… that I’m in love with you… I can’t promise the future cant promises perfection, because we are us and I’m me and who knows what will happen. But in my heart, I’m sure… I’m in love with you Carmen de la pica Morales…  and I hope you’re in love with me too…….. say something”

     

    “…. Since when do you talk like that huh?”

     

    “Since I don’t have anything to loose, but you.”

     

    “….”

     

    “….When you were a kid is Halloween candy. You hid it from your parents and ate it until you got sick. In collage even thou I didn’t go, I have friends, was the heavy combo of youth, tequila and well you know… now you takes as much of the good as you can get. Because, it doesn’t come around nearly as often as it should. So you have to work for it… work hard for the good things… easy things are not real, they are just a distraction to get over the good things….”

     

     

    “So you’re big in metaphors now?”

     

    “Are you listening to what I’m trying to say?” YES FUCK YES I WISH I WASN’T BUT I AM!

     

    “YES!… yes Shane I am…. But what do you want me to say huh? I’m sure any other girl would fall to you feet for all the good things, wonderful thing you have just said… and they do get to me… they ARE making me feel Shane, where you’re coming from… I do believe you love me, but…. to be honest I don’t… I don’t want you to love me… I don’t want to love you Shane… I don’t… I don’t want to go back to that… I want you to live and to find the perfect girl for you”

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    1. yeah!! i was the first one to leave a commentÜ heehee.. i sooo fucking love your story!!!!Ü at first, i was hesitant to read it.. big mistake!!! and now i wanna say sorry for not reading it sooner!!Ü heehee.. i love the twists and turns.. i even love the fact that shane is going to have a heart transplant because that would make her and carmen get back together!!!! yahooo!!! please, please, please update soon!! or else i would have a heart attack!! hahahaha.. lAtEr!!! hOtFoRsHaNe!!!Ü

    2. Okay, let`s see… I`m from Germany and I`m no genius on the English language so I usually leave it at “loving it etc.”. Plus I`m gonna fly to Tunisia in exactly um… 10 hours which means I have to leave in 6 hours from now. In Germany it`s now midnight and I have 5 hours left to sleep. I promise you to comment, and I mean really COMMENT on your story the next time you update when I`m home again, but right now I`m just gonna say what I`m always saying (and I seriously mean it): Love your story and love the way you write it! PPS (by the way: I think that was actually the longest “comment” I`ve ever written) :) lol

    3. Stank iz in da houz to comment on diz fan-fuckin-tastic fic!!! LOL!! I’m fuckin’ lovin’ all da inner battling Carmen is goin thru… And in a way I’m supa happy my gurl Shane iz goin thru dis…. At least it gave ha time to realize wat a beautiful thang she had wit Carmen… but idk how diz iz gonna work cuz i mean Carmen iz kina married… but I’m a Sharmen shipper all da damn way, babez ;-) Whelp, I hope you iz bout 2 grace uz wit anotha update cuz I already need my fix!! LOL!! Like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS :p Stank, da’ one and only, chicka :D Holla at me if ya need anything, babez ;-)

    5. wow. i just read the last 2 chapters and i’m blown away. what can i say? honestly it’s like a crossroad for carmen; she has a wife and there’s shane. i love sharmen, i really do but carmen does have a point saying that shane can’t really come and go at her whim, expecting carmen to still feel the same way about her. that’s just not fair. 5 years is a hell lotta time. people move on.. i’m wondering how you’re gonna plan the next update. fantastic!

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