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Instinct part8
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“What are you thinking about?” Shane asked
“Sex” shit… did I just said that out loud?
“What?” she started smiling?
“Um-sorry… nothing.”
“I’m sorry…”
“For what?”
“Whatever I said yesterday with the others… Alice told me it was preatty funny so I take I said something”
“jaja… don’t worry you did good.”
“Did you talked to the girls”
“Yeah, Paige was nice-“ she cut me off
“No, I mean Tina Beth, Helena… does girls”
“Ohh… yea, yea we did… 2 days ago” they didn’t talked to much thou… I think they were afraid they said something about Shane that would offend me… Now they are outside waiting… thinking Shane needed time alone with me before… before… fuck… I’m so fucking scared right now… just don’t show that to her
“Are you ready?”
“For what?”
“Shane… they are taking out your heart in 3 hours”
“So are you trying to help me or scare me?”
“I’m sorry…”
“I was just kidding… I don’t know… it’s weird you know… in away I don’t want to loose my heart… but in away… maybe this would make me different…”
“I don’t want you to be different”
“Do you?… look, I know what you think of me… what they all do… maybe this would make me finally forget you, so you will have your happily every after”
“Why do you think my happily ever after doesn’t have you in the picture?” shit what the fuck am I saying, “I mean as a friend”
“I can’t be your friend Carmen…cause I can’t stop thinking of you… I just can’t stop… cant stop seeing you. And I know what you’re thinking… ‘its about the sex’ Its not about the sex… its not… about the sex… is about that moment afterwards. When my world stops… Just when I feel so safe… so safe… I’m not ready to give that up… does that make me sad week and pathetic?… What do I do?” what do you say…. What do you fucking say to that…. Why would I say something imperfect, not honest to respond something so perfect…
“….You can’t do anything…”
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My husband had a heart transplant and lived over 15 yrs. So if the right domor comes along,Shane could live a long time. If she takes her medicine and take care of herself. So you cant stop,you need to finish what you start and Dr Izzy will do the rest for Shane. It takes a life to save a life. Thanks
You REALLY can’t stop dur!!! Hell, I’ma need a damn heart transplant if you do stop hur…. lol!!! But, I’m lovin’ dis, babez, plez updat like now cuz I need my fix like now, lol. Like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS :p Stank, da’ one and only, chicka :D Holla at me if ya need anything, babez ;-)
i love ur stories, ive been reading them, please dont stop writting they rly are amazing. Sharmen!!
Oh no!!! Please update soon!
Okay, so I’ve FINALLY finished reading all the chapters. Whew! One major complaint about the updates: Why so short?? ;) Kidding, they’re not too short. I’m just greedy and want them to keep going and going and going. I’m really liking this story. Even though Carmen and Shane aren’t together, you can tell that they still care for each other immensely. I’m excited to see where Shane and Carmen’s lives are headed. Hope Shane makes it!! Super good story, hon. :)
Heart-stopping update (no pun intended). before the seriousness of it all, it was pretty light-hearted, yes i hope they do meet up for coffee and then dinner and slowly go on more dates. i’d love to see that. so please, don’t let shane die!!
Heart-stopping update (no pun intended). before the seriousness of it all, it was pretty light-hearted, yes i hope they do meet up for coffee and then dinner and slowly go on more dates. i’d love to see that. so please, don’t let shane die!!