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    Instinct part8

    Story written on June 16, 2008 by adicttosharmen.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=69940
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    You are not gonna die today…. You’re not gonna die today… say it… say it.

     

    “I don’t have much time Izzy…” shit, shit… no! no! FUCK! Tears fall from Shane’s eyes and mine don’t wait any longer to do the same… Izzy has a look on her face… like she hates the job right now… she really does care for Shane…

     

    “You do have time Shane… you are going to live… don’t doubt that, not even for a second”

     

    “You can leave Izzy… um Carmen you too I… um.. I want to be alone for a while”

     

    “Shane i-“

     

    “LEAVE!” we look at her feeling all her pain and we do just that… I know her and the last thing she needs right now its comfort… she knows she has it… but she doesn’t need it to be ok… strange but her. So we go out to the wait room to look for the others… they are not there

     

    “They are probably in the cafeteria”

     

    “I need a smoke, join me outside?” I aske her… yeah I smoke… big wup!

     

    “Yes… fresh air will do us good” we went down to the lobby and outside. I take out my cigarettes.

     

    “You know each cigarette will take 7 seconds of you life”

     

    “What would 7 seconds do? Or what if I get killed? 7 seconds are shit….” I take my cig and put it in my mouth and ligh it “Want one?

     

    “I’m a doctor I don’t smoke” I take out a cig and put it in front of her and she takes it… I light it

     

    “By far the hardest thing you can give a patient it’s the truth. The truth is hard, and very often the truth hurts. People say the want the truth but do they really? Sometimes we tell the truth because the truth its all we have to give. Sometimes we tell the truth cause we need to say it out laud to really hear it for our self. And sometimes we tell them because we owed them that much”

     

    “You’re a good doctor Dr. Stevens”

     

    “Izzy”

     

    “Izzy… but you had to tell her… you saved her life because what if you didn’t realized the heart was damaged and put it in Shane? she would have died… so you’re a hero Izzy…”

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    1. My husband had a heart transplant and lived over 15 yrs. So if the right domor comes along,Shane could live a long time. If she takes her medicine and take care of herself. So you cant stop,you need to finish what you start and Dr Izzy will do the rest for Shane. It takes a life to save a life. Thanks

    2. You REALLY can’t stop dur!!! Hell, I’ma need a damn heart transplant if you do stop hur…. lol!!! But, I’m lovin’ dis, babez, plez updat like now cuz I need my fix like now, lol. Like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS :p Stank, da’ one and only, chicka :D Holla at me if ya need anything, babez ;-)

    5. Okay, so I’ve FINALLY finished reading all the chapters. Whew! One major complaint about the updates: Why so short?? ;) Kidding, they’re not too short. I’m just greedy and want them to keep going and going and going. I’m really liking this story. Even though Carmen and Shane aren’t together, you can tell that they still care for each other immensely. I’m excited to see where Shane and Carmen’s lives are headed. Hope Shane makes it!! Super good story, hon. :)

    6. Heart-stopping update (no pun intended). before the seriousness of it all, it was pretty light-hearted, yes i hope they do meet up for coffee and then dinner and slowly go on more dates. i’d love to see that. so please, don’t let shane die!!

    7. Heart-stopping update (no pun intended). before the seriousness of it all, it was pretty light-hearted, yes i hope they do meet up for coffee and then dinner and slowly go on more dates. i’d love to see that. so please, don’t let shane die!!

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