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Instinct part9
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“I’m mentally retarded?”
“Yes”
“Would you kiss me?”
“Would you take this operation?” I got up
“Kiss me” so I got in her face. And I kiss her… slow… slow but so sweet. Her hands touch my face and my hand touch hers… she licks my bottom lib and all I think about is more and more… I need more… this can’t end like this… she can’t die I hold back a little
“Please don’t do this”
“Do what?”
“Please do the operation” tears in my eyes licking my lips, trying not to cry, “Please, please… I’ll beg, I’m begging”
“Carmen… I have to die…”
“Don’t fucking say that…”
“Don’t worry… when the times come I’ll be sure to follow the light” she said that like if it was funny… this, this is a joke to her
“This is not a fucking joke Shane…. that’s not even funny….We can be together… just do this… you’ll be alright and we’ll be together” I’m crying so hard now
“You are just saying that because I will not do it”
“Shane please, please do it… please do it for me”
I can’t stop crying I can’t come down
“We’ll be together in heaven”
“Don’t fucking talk to me about heaven… don’t… you don’t even believe in it…. and if you as so much say something about following the light I swear to god I will kill you myself”
“Carm… Carm, I’m going to be alright, ok… you don’t have to worry about me”
“ No, I get it, ok I get it… you be ok, you’ll be fine, but what about me? “
“Carm-” I’m crying at this point I can’t stop, I can’t breath and I’m talking way to fast
“But what about me?… What about me, when you go to the light? So don’t do it for your self, do it for me, please, please Shane do it for me, because if you die, oh my god, you have to do this, please do this for me please ok? I cant do this is you don’t, please do this for me you have to do this for me,
Or I will never be able to forgive you”
“For dying?”
“No… for making me love you…”
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your updates make the heart heavier (in a good way of course).. they are laced with so much emotions, it’s so real. i hope carmen will be able to convince shane to go for that operation. it’s .. it’s.. so sad! ):
I’m inlove with this storydef. keep it up~Broooklyn~
oh my god i know u want larger comments but im on the edge of tears so oh my god! please please don’t let shane die i’ll beg too
oh and by the way PPS!!! but really soon cause i need u to update please pretty please???
you made me cry…i love the sincerity, their vulnerability..the pure love that comes from both of them, the silly decisions and thoughts that cloud their judgement because of threats of NOT being able to pick up where they left off…how i wish to see Cramen back in season 6…sigh..please keep on updating!
oh my god, what a great update. i love this story. dont keep me hanging, please post soon!
okay, ima have 2 come back wit a comment bcuz im kina choked up right now, so yeah … but plz make it so dat Shane go thru wit da surgery …. datz all i can say atm….
I..uh..eff me that was powerful!!!
Holy Sh*t!!!! It’s freaking awesome. I hate to say this but I can understand Shane and Carmen either. Shane has might seen the light already when she got a heart attack badly. I just hope Carmen get won eventually.
OMG, if I could see through my tears I would send you a longer comment. This story is heartbreaking!
wow.. puh.. powerfull indeed! Loving the story!=) I’ve been watching a shot at love.. Brittany has been my favourite from day one! =D Though it sucked that Tila dumped her.. I think she’s better off without her.. she is too good for her! Go Brit! “I don’t want a shot at love, I want the whole damn bar!” lol..^^