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Instinct part9
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“Ladies… I don’t want a new heart…my time here is done… fate… fate wants what it wants and we can’t do anything about it… give the heart to someone who is going to use it…I can’t”
“Shane no, you are getting this new heart”
“no…”
“Fuck you Shane stop being a fucking ass, you are getting this new heart and that’s that!” Alice said at the verge of tears with me holding her back
“Alice come down she doesn’t know what she’s saying” I said… no one knew what to say…. They were just looking at Shane like is she was the most ignorant person on earth.
“I do know Carmen… I don’t want the heart”
“Fuck YOU!” Alice said crying hysterical getting out of the room. Helena and Tina followed her out side. We didn’t know what to say or what to do… we were all hoping Izzy would said something but she was just looking at Shane sadly
“Izzy.. say something” I said and she looked at me like if she just woke up from her though
“….Look Shane you need this heart… the first one was damaged… it didn’t have anything to do with you… so please, please don’t do this…”
“I’m sorry”
“Shane…”
“Bette” they look at each other and Bette goes away. Jenny gets closer to Shane and kiss her in the mouth.. sweet kiss… tears in her eyes
“Please don’t do this” Jenny said her head resting in Shane’s lap
“I love you” Shane said Jenny looked at her and went away
“Baby girl I hope you think about what you’re doing” Kit said getting away. Izzy Shane and me are the only one’s left. Izzy looked at me and left. I didn’t look at Shane… I walk to the other end of the room and sat down looking at the window
“You are not going to say something”
“I’m tired of talking Shane… I am…”
“So you’re ok with it?”
“You are going to have the operation”
“I am the one that have to decide that”
“I’ll say you’re mentally retarded and can’t take that decision” she laughs
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your updates make the heart heavier (in a good way of course).. they are laced with so much emotions, it’s so real. i hope carmen will be able to convince shane to go for that operation. it’s .. it’s.. so sad! ):
I’m inlove with this storydef. keep it up~Broooklyn~
oh my god i know u want larger comments but im on the edge of tears so oh my god! please please don’t let shane die i’ll beg too
oh and by the way PPS!!! but really soon cause i need u to update please pretty please???
you made me cry…i love the sincerity, their vulnerability..the pure love that comes from both of them, the silly decisions and thoughts that cloud their judgement because of threats of NOT being able to pick up where they left off…how i wish to see Cramen back in season 6…sigh..please keep on updating!
oh my god, what a great update. i love this story. dont keep me hanging, please post soon!
okay, ima have 2 come back wit a comment bcuz im kina choked up right now, so yeah … but plz make it so dat Shane go thru wit da surgery …. datz all i can say atm….
I..uh..eff me that was powerful!!!
Holy Sh*t!!!! It’s freaking awesome. I hate to say this but I can understand Shane and Carmen either. Shane has might seen the light already when she got a heart attack badly. I just hope Carmen get won eventually.
OMG, if I could see through my tears I would send you a longer comment. This story is heartbreaking!
wow.. puh.. powerfull indeed! Loving the story!=) I’ve been watching a shot at love.. Brittany has been my favourite from day one! =D Though it sucked that Tila dumped her.. I think she’s better off without her.. she is too good for her! Go Brit! “I don’t want a shot at love, I want the whole damn bar!” lol..^^