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Instinct part9
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I turn around… Izzy looks sad… I get past her and went to the waiting area were the girls were
“Carmen!” jenny…. “look… I’m sorry… I am… I didn’t-”
“Its ok… just forget about it”
“Carmen I have to ask you something”
“What Alice?”
“… Are Niky’s boobs real?”
“Alice!” Helena and Bette yell
“Because I think they are face but Helena says they are real-” I start laughing…. Good old Alice… always there to make you laugh. Always when we were in a bad situation she always said something funny to cheer everyone up… even if she’s broken inside
“Alice… the boobs are real.!”
“Are you sure”
“YES!” we all laugh
“Carmen…” I turn around to find…. to find Izzy…. She has the forms in her hand… and she smiles when she sees I see them
“She singed….” My eyes open widely and I jumped to hug her and I star laughing and crying and yelling… the guys are confused… so I turn to them
“We have a donor”
There were a lot of ‘oh my gods’ and they all got up and hugged Izzy and we were all exited.
“Lets go tell Shane the good news!” Izzy said
“YES!” we were almost running to her room. We got there and woke her up carefully. She smiled seeing everyone. Looking at her right now… makes me think about so many stuff… that is the kind of smile who makes you week inside… the kind of smile that wakes up the butterflies…
“Honey we got good news…” Bette said holding her hand… me and Alice were a little behind smiling like little kids.
“I’m alive?” she said in a week rusty voice… not like her normal voice… weaker
“Yes… and you are going to be for a long time… we found a donor…” then her smile faded… she looked serious…
“Are you sure?”
“YES!” Tina said. then she closed her eyes for 5 seconds and then she open them, we were all expecting laughter… something
“Guys… I’m…I… I can’t”
“What do you mean you can’t baby girl, you are getting a new freaking heart!” Kit said. we were all confused
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your updates make the heart heavier (in a good way of course).. they are laced with so much emotions, it’s so real. i hope carmen will be able to convince shane to go for that operation. it’s .. it’s.. so sad! ):
I’m inlove with this storydef. keep it up~Broooklyn~
oh my god i know u want larger comments but im on the edge of tears so oh my god! please please don’t let shane die i’ll beg too
oh and by the way PPS!!! but really soon cause i need u to update please pretty please???
you made me cry…i love the sincerity, their vulnerability..the pure love that comes from both of them, the silly decisions and thoughts that cloud their judgement because of threats of NOT being able to pick up where they left off…how i wish to see Cramen back in season 6…sigh..please keep on updating!
oh my god, what a great update. i love this story. dont keep me hanging, please post soon!
okay, ima have 2 come back wit a comment bcuz im kina choked up right now, so yeah … but plz make it so dat Shane go thru wit da surgery …. datz all i can say atm….
I..uh..eff me that was powerful!!!
Holy Sh*t!!!! It’s freaking awesome. I hate to say this but I can understand Shane and Carmen either. Shane has might seen the light already when she got a heart attack badly. I just hope Carmen get won eventually.
OMG, if I could see through my tears I would send you a longer comment. This story is heartbreaking!
wow.. puh.. powerfull indeed! Loving the story!=) I’ve been watching a shot at love.. Brittany has been my favourite from day one! =D Though it sucked that Tila dumped her.. I think she’s better off without her.. she is too good for her! Go Brit! “I don’t want a shot at love, I want the whole damn bar!” lol..^^