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Intercept(ed) [Valentine’s Day Challenge]
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“Hi, Dana,” Bette said. “Enjoying your night?”
“Oh, Bette, hey,” Dana said, smiling. She held up a finger. “Excuse me just one minute, let me finish this…” she added, making a show of hitting a few buttons before closing her phone. Bette gave Tina a half-lidded look, and Tina hid a smile behind her hand.
“Hello,” Dana said, turning her sparkle in Tina’s direction. She held out a hand. “I’m Dana Fairbanks.”
“Tina Kennard, nice to meet you. I’m a fan of yours.”
Dana’s smile got even bigger. “You are? I’m flattered.”
“That last match you played against Venus Williams was killer. She wasn’t ready for you at all.”
Dana waved a hand. “Oh, well, I like to keep them guessing. It’s better if they underestimate you.”
“Well I don’t think Venus, or her sister for that matter, are going to make that mistake again,” Tina said with assurance. And just like that, Bette could see that Tina had won Dana over.
Dana didn’t have much time to bask in Tina’s compliment for long, though, because Shane appeared and collapsed in a chair.
“Hey,” she said, by way of a general greeting. She took a long swig of beer.
“Shane, why are you so out of breath?” Dana asked, raising an eyebrow. “I didn’t see you out on the floor. Were you dancing?”
“Not quite.” Shane smiled her crooked smile at Tina and gave her a once over. “I haven’t seen you before.”
“She’s here with Bette,” Dana said, giving Shane a look.
“Oh yeah?” Shane looked at Bette for confirmation and Bette nodded. “Cool.”
“Shane’s a hairdresser,” Dana explained to Tina. “She can do awesome things to your hair.”
“That’s right,” Shane said, fishing a slightly bent business card out of her pocket and reaching over to slide it towards Tina.
“Call for an appointment if you want,” Shane said, looking at Tina from under her fringe. “You won’t even recognize yourself when I’m done.”
Bette broke up the moment before it went any further. “You had business cards made up, Shane? Really?”
“I just wanted to be sure that any of my… clients could get in touch with me as necessary. Seemed like a time saver. Plus if they call me at the salon, they’re not bothering me at home.”
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Love your story,amazing as always.Please continue writing.
looooovvveeeee your story very mutch amazing!!!
You should totally consider continuing this story!
Wonderful story, you are such a good writer. Another story please?
Loved it! Happy Valentine’s Day.
Nicely done! Where will this lead to?
Absolutely wonderful. Thank you.
LOVED IT! You should consider continuing the story, its been a while since we’ve had a an “alternate beginning for B & T.
I’m glad Bette put herself out there. I loved it. I would totally like you to continue this if you can. Thank you :)
perfectly marvellous!!!
What a special story. You really made me miss Dana and how adorable she could be. Thank you for sharing.
I think this should be continued!
L o v e l y !!
The end? I think not; the beginning…
Well done. Thank you – if you feel like writing more that would be great.
Sweet! No grasping, sweaty encounters in the bar bathroom. No hook up. Nice development and denouement. A lovely substitutionary romance for us, the lovelorn readers: Bette and Tina 4EVA! Somebody, tell us where we can get the bumpersticker! Thank you for the Valentine treat!
That was great! I liked the “flashdance” reference lol. I agree, this can’t be the end! Hope you do more with this! :)
This is good and like it, please continue, thanks!
Nice and fresh Tibette start