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Intercept(ed) [Valentine’s Day Challenge]
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Having had enough of Alice’s drama, Bette leaned towards Tina as another song started over the sound system. “Do you dance?”
Tina smiled somewhat shyly. “No, not really. I mean, I can do that thing that people who can’t dance do where they sway a little bit, but that’s all.”
“Show me?” Bette asked, standing up.
“I…” Tina glanced over to where Alice was still scanning the room, jabbering in Shane’s ear, and Dana and Shane were watching Tina and Bette out of the corners of their eyes. “Sure. Let’s dance.”
Bette led Tina out on the dance floor and shoving her self-consciousness to one side, started to dance. She felt a little bit bad – she was showing her friends that she could have a good time, and in a way she was using Tina to make them back off a little. On the other hand, though, she wanted to be there with Tina, and she was enjoying herself. This had been the most fun she had on a night out in months. Looking at her friends from the perspective a newcomer might have was showing her just how hilarious they were.
“Are you having fun?” Bette asked, leaning in close to Tina so that she could be heard over the music.
Tina nodded and smiled as she took in the scene around her.
“Is this better than The Intercept?”
Tina eyed a couple of pretty young things writhing in their proximity. “Definitely!”
They finished their dance and headed back to the table. Alice had apparently been filled in on the details in the meantime, because she had taken Shane’s now vacant seat and her eyes had a tell-tale sparkle.
Tina settled down in her chair with a smile for Bette. “You’ve got some moves. I’m impressed.”
Bette laughed. “So am I. You looked good out there.”
“Yeah, you guys looked great… together,” Alice chimed in.
“Subtle, Al,” Dana muttered.
“So!” Alice said, leaning forward toward Tina. “I don’t think I caught your last name.”
“Kennard,” Tina said.
Alice filed this vital piece of information away and smiled. “What do you do?”
It was a question even Bette hadn’t asked yet.
“I’m a screenwriter,” Tina said. “I just got a job out here about six months ago. I’m still adjusting to L.A.”
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Love your story,amazing as always.Please continue writing.
looooovvveeeee your story very mutch amazing!!!
You should totally consider continuing this story!
Wonderful story, you are such a good writer. Another story please?
Loved it! Happy Valentine’s Day.
Nicely done! Where will this lead to?
Absolutely wonderful. Thank you.
LOVED IT! You should consider continuing the story, its been a while since we’ve had a an “alternate beginning for B & T.
I’m glad Bette put herself out there. I loved it. I would totally like you to continue this if you can. Thank you :)
perfectly marvellous!!!
What a special story. You really made me miss Dana and how adorable she could be. Thank you for sharing.
I think this should be continued!
L o v e l y !!
The end? I think not; the beginning…
Well done. Thank you – if you feel like writing more that would be great.
Sweet! No grasping, sweaty encounters in the bar bathroom. No hook up. Nice development and denouement. A lovely substitutionary romance for us, the lovelorn readers: Bette and Tina 4EVA! Somebody, tell us where we can get the bumpersticker! Thank you for the Valentine treat!
That was great! I liked the “flashdance” reference lol. I agree, this can’t be the end! Hope you do more with this! :)
This is good and like it, please continue, thanks!
Nice and fresh Tibette start