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    Invincible

    Story written on July 23, 2015 by meloveslu.
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    It’s weird to hear him say that when my father was always so aloof when it came to me. “Then let’s get Helena Peabody on the phone and tell her the good news, shall we?”   ——-   I return home from a business dinner to find my empty apartment smelling of pine cleaner and

    It’s weird to hear him say that when my father was always so aloof when it came to me.

    “Then let’s get Helena Peabody on the phone and tell her the good news, shall we?”

     

    ——-

     

    I return home from a business dinner to find my empty apartment smelling of pine cleaner and soft fragrances from air fresheners in each room. Slipping off my boots, I make my way to the bathroom. The tile is cold against my bare feet and I reach to flip on the light switch. A message scrawled in lipstick across my mirror reads “Thanks for last night. Call me tomorrow” and a pair of lip prints punctuate the note.

    Smiling and shaking my head, I get to work scrubbing the mirror. Jodi is fun, but she is certainly shameless when it came to boundaries. Once I strip the day off in favor of a more leisurely look, I pull my cell phone out of my purse and see a text message waiting.

    Alice Pieszecki
    Today 7:21 PM
    Hey. It’s cool if I bring a date to your party, right?

    My eyebrows shoot up in surprise and wonder if this is a hypothetical question or if my dear friend actually scored herself an escort in the 10 hours since I last spoke with her. There was only one way to find out. Bring ‘em if you got ‘em, I respond. Knowing her inability to keep new information to herself, if she really does have a date, then my phone would likely ring in another 30 seconds.

    Relaxing on my bed and flipping through channels no such phone call comes, so I can only estimate that my friend was speaking in hypotheticals. Curiously enough though, my phone alerts me to another text message.

    Alice Pieszecki
    Today 7:42 PM
    Sweet. Henrietta Hudson if you’re up for it.
    Bring Jodi if you want.

    Chuckling at my friend’s attempt to get me out of the house, I politely decline. If Jodi is Alice’s dreamgirl, then I would be more than happy to arrange a set-up but not tonight.

     

    ——-

     

    The rest of the week was fairly uneventful. I spent most evenings dorking out on Xbox One and talking shit to 9 year-olds through the headset. I had several missed calls from Jodi and text messages that I answered with one or two word responses. I could tell she was getting frustrated with my ambivalence, but I enjoy my alone time when I have other things to occupy myself with.

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    1. Enjoyed your story even tho i know nothing of vanilla sky.This epihany that BETTE finally has regarding her company and the warning from a trusted friend makes for an enjoyable read.TINA appears to be the alter ego of BETTE the uncanny ability to read her and is spot on in that drawing.BETTE has some life altering/style changes to make so let’s see what happens becuz for a one off you left a lot unanswered yet it was thought provoking in a good way.

      • Thanks for your comment, Dunn! Perhaps not having seen the film makes for a better read, although I know what you mean by all the unanswered questions. Even though this is a one-off, I have not completely ruled out possibly coming back to it in the future for a follow-up. There’s no plan to do that right now, but it is always an option. I appreciate you taking the time to read it and offering your feedback!

      • Perhaps I prefer my readers not to have seen the movie. It’s definitely a weird one. But I thought these scenes of a hopeful budding relationship worked with Bette and Tina in those roles. Glad you liked it!

    5. Not seen Vanilla Sky but don’t feel it detracted from finding this story fascinating. I really enjoyed the read and hope that you do consider it as a base for more as this budding relationship between my favourite couple certainly has potential.

      Thanks

      • Don’t think I’ve ever had anyone comment that my stories were ‘fascinating’ so thank you for the compliment Sassy! A follow-up isn’t completely off the table, but just not actively in the works at present. Appreciate you taking the time to read.

    6. Waittttttt! No way!!! I love Vanilla Sky and the older one Abre los ojos! What can I say I can’t resist a naked Penelope Cruz (>ω< )!!!

      It wasn't THAT weird to me tbh, I freakin cracked up and cried my eyes out when Penelope said to Tom "I'll see you in another life when we're both cats."

      Ahhh old movie, good times! Didn't think I'd see the gay version of the story. Nicely done!

      • Hahahaha! I suppose the best reason to watch those films would be a naked Penelope. She’s not really my cup of tea, I’m more of a Salma Hayek fan, but she was great in these films. Like I said, I have a love/hate relationship with it. Thanks for reading, hope I did the story justice since you seem to be the only one who has seen the movie so far.

        MEEEEOOOOOWWW!

    7. yeeeeeeeeessssss….. you know how long I have agonised about seeing this piece come up…. I miss you my friend. I feel we have resumed our game of tag… you posted… I posted too! guees it’s your turn again ;0) xx

    8. Brilliant, as always, Mell. I have missed your amazing storytelling. I hope you will give us more, if not this story, something else. Oh wait!! Don’t you have something else you’re working on? Like just a chapter or two left? OMG, you do…. Yay!!
      Look forward to whatever you write.

      ps
      Salma Hayek? Nice.

      • Yes, Salma Hayek. I can’t quite put my finger on it (but I can definitely put my finger in it :p), but I have a thing for slightly older women. Just something about them I can’t get enough of. And thank you for your very kind words, even though they aren’t very subtle. I’ll try to write something or two somethings when I can.

    9. GREAT!!! I know and a like Vanilla Sky (with Tom Cruz and Penelope Cruz) . Vanilla Sky is a Hollywood remake of another great movie – the spanish movie “Abre Los Ojos” (with Penelope Cruz and Eduardo Noriega) And I like so much your story , Invincible with Bette and Tina :))) THANK YOU!!!

    10. I loved this new version of Vanilla Sky,
      I saw the movie however vaguely lenbro
      some scenes, it would be interesting if you
      continue to write its version.
      All Stars.

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