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    Invincible

    Story written on July 23, 2015 by meloveslu.
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    “I meant that to be your forehead.” She lies. I straighten up and feel new life breathed into my lungs. I open my eyes and see the object of my adoration. Up to this point in my life, I feel like I’ve wasted so much time without her in it. But as long as she

    “I meant that to be your forehead.” She lies.

    I straighten up and feel new life breathed into my lungs. I open my eyes and see the object of my adoration. Up to this point in my life, I feel like I’ve wasted so much time without her in it. But as long as she is, I have no doubt that I can conquer the world as well as my own inner demons. She truly has made me invincible. I’m overwhelmed with gratitude and have to express that to her in this moment.

    “Thank you for the inspiration tonight. I will now attempt to run my company showing compassion for the seething throng of my partners who root quietly for me to fail.” She’s looking at me curiously, but I can tell behind those hazel eyes that she’s quite aware of my personal and professional crossroads and is silently rooting for me to succeed. “And for things you don’t even know – Thank you, Tina. I’m going to go to work today. I have a company to run.” I declare with conviction. I back away towards her door and see her dreamily watching me.

    “Pleasure delayer.” She says as I reach clumsily for her doorknob and smile at her. This girl’s got my number alright. I’m still somewhat stunned by our evening, and by her. The anticipation just might kill us both, but damn, will it be worth it. I open the door letting the morning sun bathe the inside of her apartment and take one last look at the blonde thief who has undoubtedly stolen my heart.

    “When can I see you again?” I ask as I step across the threshold.

    Her cheesy grin grows wider. “Soon.”

    My heart almost stops as I’m reminded of a conversation with Jodi just hours before, and I finally understand why such a small word is so powerfully crushing. But unlike my former lover, I refuse to let it cloud my judgment when it comes to boundaries. I only smile and nod, closing the door.

    I almost skip down the shabby steps of Tina’s stoop and I swear I can hear a high-pitched delightful squeal coming from inside and it only makes me smile harder as I walk down the block to my car knowing she’s just as exhilarated as I am about our potential together. Everything good and great suddenly feels inevitable and life is just a great pop song. I’m a brand new woman with a brand new buzz and ready for my new life with Tina to begin.

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    1. Enjoyed your story even tho i know nothing of vanilla sky.This epihany that BETTE finally has regarding her company and the warning from a trusted friend makes for an enjoyable read.TINA appears to be the alter ego of BETTE the uncanny ability to read her and is spot on in that drawing.BETTE has some life altering/style changes to make so let’s see what happens becuz for a one off you left a lot unanswered yet it was thought provoking in a good way.

      • Thanks for your comment, Dunn! Perhaps not having seen the film makes for a better read, although I know what you mean by all the unanswered questions. Even though this is a one-off, I have not completely ruled out possibly coming back to it in the future for a follow-up. There’s no plan to do that right now, but it is always an option. I appreciate you taking the time to read it and offering your feedback!

      • Perhaps I prefer my readers not to have seen the movie. It’s definitely a weird one. But I thought these scenes of a hopeful budding relationship worked with Bette and Tina in those roles. Glad you liked it!

    5. Not seen Vanilla Sky but don’t feel it detracted from finding this story fascinating. I really enjoyed the read and hope that you do consider it as a base for more as this budding relationship between my favourite couple certainly has potential.

      Thanks

      • Don’t think I’ve ever had anyone comment that my stories were ‘fascinating’ so thank you for the compliment Sassy! A follow-up isn’t completely off the table, but just not actively in the works at present. Appreciate you taking the time to read.

    6. Waittttttt! No way!!! I love Vanilla Sky and the older one Abre los ojos! What can I say I can’t resist a naked Penelope Cruz (>ω< )!!!

      It wasn't THAT weird to me tbh, I freakin cracked up and cried my eyes out when Penelope said to Tom "I'll see you in another life when we're both cats."

      Ahhh old movie, good times! Didn't think I'd see the gay version of the story. Nicely done!

      • Hahahaha! I suppose the best reason to watch those films would be a naked Penelope. She’s not really my cup of tea, I’m more of a Salma Hayek fan, but she was great in these films. Like I said, I have a love/hate relationship with it. Thanks for reading, hope I did the story justice since you seem to be the only one who has seen the movie so far.

        MEEEEOOOOOWWW!

    7. yeeeeeeeeessssss….. you know how long I have agonised about seeing this piece come up…. I miss you my friend. I feel we have resumed our game of tag… you posted… I posted too! guees it’s your turn again ;0) xx

    8. Brilliant, as always, Mell. I have missed your amazing storytelling. I hope you will give us more, if not this story, something else. Oh wait!! Don’t you have something else you’re working on? Like just a chapter or two left? OMG, you do…. Yay!!
      Look forward to whatever you write.

      ps
      Salma Hayek? Nice.

      • Yes, Salma Hayek. I can’t quite put my finger on it (but I can definitely put my finger in it :p), but I have a thing for slightly older women. Just something about them I can’t get enough of. And thank you for your very kind words, even though they aren’t very subtle. I’ll try to write something or two somethings when I can.

    9. GREAT!!! I know and a like Vanilla Sky (with Tom Cruz and Penelope Cruz) . Vanilla Sky is a Hollywood remake of another great movie – the spanish movie “Abre Los Ojos” (with Penelope Cruz and Eduardo Noriega) And I like so much your story , Invincible with Bette and Tina :))) THANK YOU!!!

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