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Invincible
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She had graduated with honors and a degree in both Communications and English. As Editor-in-Chief of our university newspaper two years in a row, Alice had made her mark in the collegiate world of journalism having earned two Mark of Excellence Awards as well as a Hearst Journalism Award for a few of her investigative pieces. She also interned every summer with the New York Post which earned her a full time position as a copy editor and soon thereafter led to a promotion to staff writer.
Her knack for writing short stories that she shared with me in college convinced me that she would, one day, be an incredibly successful writer. My faith in Alice’s professional ability had actually earned her a book deal with my publishing house since she was serious about becoming a novelist. She deserved a shot, and I was more than happy to give it to her. As a result of the rather hefty advance from my company, Alice decided to take a sabbatical from the Post to finish up her novel.
Apart from our professional association, the social benefits of our camaraderie are also plentiful for Alice. Countless snowboarding trips, tropical island vacations, and VIP treatment at most clubs, casinos, and sporting events are some of our favorite pastimes. In fact, we had just returned from a week spent at my Aspen lodge not two days ago hoping to catch the first snow of the season.
The passenger door of my Mustang is unhurriedly pulled open. Alice swings her bag into my backseat before she climbs in.
“Morning, Sunshine.” I enthusiastically greet my friend as she grimaces and reaches a hand to her head. “Did you reserve a court for us?”
“Easy there, bubbly. I can’t handle heavy conversation at this ungodly hour.” My usually talkative friend squeezes her eyes shut and massages both of her temples once she has secured her seatbelt.
“Late night at Henrietta’s?” I inquire, knowing her favorite watering hole was likely the cause of her current state of unrest.
“And the Stonewall.” She replies. I nod my head in understanding.
“Sorry to do this so early, Al. I gotta be done by 10 though.” My phone rings through the Bluetooth system I had installed in my car. The volume of the ringer irritates Alice even more as she groans and sinks further into my front seat. I check the caller ID and see that it’s my office. “Shit.” I whisper then slide the screen to answer it. Before I can utter a word, my assistant’s voice cuts through the speakers of my stereo system.
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Enjoyed your story even tho i know nothing of vanilla sky.This epihany that BETTE finally has regarding her company and the warning from a trusted friend makes for an enjoyable read.TINA appears to be the alter ego of BETTE the uncanny ability to read her and is spot on in that drawing.BETTE has some life altering/style changes to make so let’s see what happens becuz for a one off you left a lot unanswered yet it was thought provoking in a good way.
Thanks for your comment, Dunn! Perhaps not having seen the film makes for a better read, although I know what you mean by all the unanswered questions. Even though this is a one-off, I have not completely ruled out possibly coming back to it in the future for a follow-up. There’s no plan to do that right now, but it is always an option. I appreciate you taking the time to read it and offering your feedback!
Great art work!
You never disappoint me. I enjoyed it a lot. You do know how to tell a tale. Thanks
You are too kind, wkm. I’m very happy that you enjoyed the story. Thanks for showin’ the love!
Hope you continue to post stories. I do love your tales.
This is so cool and sexy! I never watch Vanilla sky, but I’ll be damn, I think BnT suit the part so well.
Perhaps I prefer my readers not to have seen the movie. It’s definitely a weird one. But I thought these scenes of a hopeful budding relationship worked with Bette and Tina in those roles. Glad you liked it!
Not seen Vanilla Sky but don’t feel it detracted from finding this story fascinating. I really enjoyed the read and hope that you do consider it as a base for more as this budding relationship between my favourite couple certainly has potential.
Thanks
Don’t think I’ve ever had anyone comment that my stories were ‘fascinating’ so thank you for the compliment Sassy! A follow-up isn’t completely off the table, but just not actively in the works at present. Appreciate you taking the time to read.
Waittttttt! No way!!! I love Vanilla Sky and the older one Abre los ojos! What can I say I can’t resist a naked Penelope Cruz (>ω< )!!!
It wasn't THAT weird to me tbh, I freakin cracked up and cried my eyes out when Penelope said to Tom "I'll see you in another life when we're both cats."
Ahhh old movie, good times! Didn't think I'd see the gay version of the story. Nicely done!
Hahahaha! I suppose the best reason to watch those films would be a naked Penelope. She’s not really my cup of tea, I’m more of a Salma Hayek fan, but she was great in these films. Like I said, I have a love/hate relationship with it. Thanks for reading, hope I did the story justice since you seem to be the only one who has seen the movie so far.
MEEEEOOOOOWWW!
yeeeeeeeeessssss….. you know how long I have agonised about seeing this piece come up…. I miss you my friend. I feel we have resumed our game of tag… you posted… I posted too! guees it’s your turn again ;0) xx
Brilliant, as always, Mell. I have missed your amazing storytelling. I hope you will give us more, if not this story, something else. Oh wait!! Don’t you have something else you’re working on? Like just a chapter or two left? OMG, you do…. Yay!!
Look forward to whatever you write.
ps
Salma Hayek? Nice.
Yes, Salma Hayek. I can’t quite put my finger on it (but I can definitely put my finger in it :p), but I have a thing for slightly older women. Just something about them I can’t get enough of. And thank you for your very kind words, even though they aren’t very subtle. I’ll try to write something or two somethings when I can.
GREAT!!! I know and a like Vanilla Sky (with Tom Cruz and Penelope Cruz) . Vanilla Sky is a Hollywood remake of another great movie – the spanish movie “Abre Los Ojos” (with Penelope Cruz and Eduardo Noriega) And I like so much your story , Invincible with Bette and Tina :))) THANK YOU!!!
Thanks, Leonora! You seem to be one of the few readers who have also seen the movie and bonus points for having seen the original Spanish film!!
I loved this new version of Vanilla Sky,
I saw the movie however vaguely lenbro
some scenes, it would be interesting if you
continue to write its version.
All Stars.