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    It Can’t Get Worse…But it Did

    Story written on May 12, 2005 by Darwinsbrain.
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    James makes a call, Tina panics and what about Bette?

    Is her next of kin coming, he asks me

    Oh that doesnt sound good.

    I called yes. Can you tell me anything? Please. Im the one that found her.

    Mathers sighed, Dear boy it was worse then we originally thought, he remarked putting an arm against my back and guiding me to the lounge area

    How can it be worse than her starving herself to death?

    She didnt starve herself to death.

    But you said…

    She had a heart attack that left her paralyzed, he commented calmly

    Heart attack, I repeat dumbly

    He was nodding his head at this, When the attack happened exactly were not sure. Since no one checked on her during this time

    She starved, I finished for him with wide eyes

    Yes.

    Oh dear lord this couldnt possibly get any worse I think as I rub my temple with two fingers.

    It gets worse, Mathers states as if reading my mind

    I dont see how it could possibly get worse, I state in a tone I know sounds just a smidge over whiny

    I told you that this heart attack left her paralyzed.

    Oh god.

    Yes.

    She is still paralyzed.

    Oh *****.

    She has responded to feelings in her arms and hands though.

    Good.

    …But not her legs or feet.

    Damn

    Um…brain damage. She has to have some right or is the paralysis the damage?

    Mathers looks down at his hands and my heart drops at this.

    You can tell me doc. I can take it.

    I hope anyway and prepare myself for the worst.

    We wont know further until she wakes up. If she wakes up.

    A small sound escapes me and I cant quite tell whether it was a whimper, a moan or a sob, maybe more a combination of the three.

    Can I see her?

    He smiles gently at me, Sure. Go on in.

    I jump to my feet and run into the room coming to a screeching halt beside her bed. She looks so damn pale. She looks dead. I sit down in the chair next to the bed and just stare at her. Ive been with Bette longer than Ive been with any woman in my life. She means so much to me and this is when I let the tears come. The tears I had been holding back all this time.

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    Comments

    1. Just thinking wow. She’d be on a ventilator and heart monitor. Good job… Maybe even have to have heart surgery to repair the damage even. So many direction this can go.

    2. This does sound a lot like a stroke yes, my grandmother had one, but you have to remember that it takes a least a week for someone to starve. During that week brain damage akrewed. This is that. Hope it makes sense.

    12. What? Are you kidding me? Of course, we want you to continue! Please…this is going to be good, I can already tell since you’ve started off with a bang…Hope you post again soon. Thanks!!!!

    19. OK now that is a wild way to take. It makes sense tho. Heart broken and stress. I can’t wait to see where you take this. Just don’t leave it hanging like some other have that tried this direction.

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