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As she approached the highest point, Tina grabbed the hair in her fist tighter and motioned the brunette to move faster. So the pace was picked up with more strength of each stroke. She held her breath, with her mouth open but not a sound coming out, and the orgasm hit her, like a tsunami, stirring the ocean of her inner peace but at the same time, clearing her sky for sunshine to beat down on her.
Bette came within seconds, riding her own fingers fast and hard. But she didn’t let her own climax hinder the progress of drawing out Tina’s orgasm as long as it comfortably could.
The ceiling and the floor crumbled and shattered for a while before they could even grasp a sense on what just happened. And it took even longer for them to relax. Tina lowered herself while Bette withdrew a little to let her sit.
When Bette kissed her, she tasted herself for the first time. Tina had never tried it before, she found it embarrassing and unsanitary. But with Bette, it was everything she never ever imagined, it was sensual, intimate, daring, arousing, yes arousing even though she was so tired out her legs could start cramping at any second. In Bette’s arms, she felt warm and safe, after such an audacious and personal moment.
The shower cube now was filled with spent passion, which was something rare after a shower, but it didn’t bother the women. They were just glad that all of it happened.
“Was it good for you?” Tina asked shyly, resting her head against Bette’s shoulder.
The brunette widened her eyes and chuckled. “Are you kidding me?”
“No…?”
“Was it good for you?” She knew by the sounds the blonde was making that she was good enough.
Tina giggled. “Earth-shattering.”
“Well then you know how I feel.” Bette nibbled on her ear and grazed the flesh in between her teeth as a symbol of punishment. Then she reassured the woman drawing small circles on her back. “You’re an amazing lover, and a fast learner.”
“You sounded surprised.” Tina backed a little to look into the brown eyes and saw the bright glimmer in them. She creased her nose in a way so cute that the brunette just wanted to plant a kiss on it.
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Correction: I dedicate this chapter to Pie, my dear friend! Although…it is NC-17 and a teeny tiny bit inappropriate, but it’s a happy chapter, and a reminder for her to come back soon. She texted me this morning saying that she’s doing better, fighting an infection, but I’m sure she’s gonna kick ass!
And the inspiration of the title was from the song “Gold”, by Wake Owl. It is a really good song.
SO to my twitter family and fanfic readers! Stop by any time and leave me some love ;)
Peace :)
So glad there was some happiness for those two after the brutality. Thanks
Nice Chapter – nice dedication.
Pie seems to be recovering now so hopefully she’ll be back posting soon.
I would be pissed off if someone who supposedly cares for me, would allow someone to shoot drugs into me. I don’t care what the consequences are.
Other then that I really enjoy this story.
This was an awesome chapter… I loved the sexiness and them finally being together truly. But what I truly loved about this chapter was the cuteness factor and the verbal back and forth between them.. I just loved their playfulness!!! Great chapter!!
Wow this was awesome, thankyou!
Such a nice contrast to the violence of the last chapter. Beautiful musings of love and adoration.. Thank you, Rob! Again, Pie would be proud!
Wonderful, sweet and hot loving chapter! Just what we needed after that violence chapter.
It is good to hear Pie_Fair is getting better, she sure will kick ass!
It was a sweet and full of love chapter. It was very relaxing to read, an immense difference to the previous violence chapter.
I loved the playful banter between them.
really liked it. Thank you!
The more you get well soon Pie. and come back to us :)
Rob, it was amazing one NC: 17 pure quality,
my God !! was breathtaking, very sensual, very
romantic, wild and gentle at the same time,
all perfeito.elas simply torched this
history, and there is medicine for my poor heart.
ROB! ALL STARS.
Beautiful chapter amid all this terror!
RT,
I have been following this book and I don’t know if I have left a comment on your previous chapters..
But I couldn’t remember leaving a comment so here I am begging u to please hurry with your next chap coz I am really excited for these two ladies.
Command has been missing but I guess it wouldn’t hurt if you will entertain us with your own version of crime/suspense and full of love fan fiction..
Another achievement for you friend bcoz u are able to make us asked for more. (Wink!)
Thanks for this Chap! We are The Lucky One(s) *ooppss!!!
Oh my sweet friend!..Sorry it has taken me so long to catch up with your story but thank you so much for dedicating this chapter to me. I continue to improve everyday. You have managed to once again dazzle me with your writing and what a sweet chapter compared to the last one….Can’t wait for the next chapter and thank you for all your love and support.
Luv ya!
Pie
I’m so happy you are my friend because when someone ask one day, hey have you ever read one of Robyn’s amazing books? I can say of course I have, she’s a good friend of mines. lol ok I just had to say that…Seriously Robyn every chapter I am amazed by your writing…gosh you suck! ok not really! But truly you are incredible, fucking incredible! Dedicate your first book to me…something like “To the most beautiful, loving friend I ever known Marq***** oh shit almost let it slip. Anyways I love it…obviously! lol