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“Well you were a pleasant surprise.” Bette leaned forward to softly touch her lips to the nose, and then she teased. “And under my superb instruction, I’m sure you’ll be even better.”
“Your superb instruction.” Tina laughed, venturing for another kiss. “Confident in yourself, hmm?”
“Let’s see… someone just said it was ‘earth-shattering’, as I quote.”
It made the blonde blush and laugh harder. She had never anticipated this playfulness from the brunette. “You were a pleasant surprise yourself.”
“Uh-huh, I take it as a compliment.” Bette awarded her one more kiss before she got up. “Come on, we need to get out.” She laid her palms up to show how wrinkled her fingers had become.
They stepped out, dried each other up, and stepped over the clothes lying all over the place. Bette shrugged and decided that they could be left there for a night. She put on a set of pajama and marveled as Tina pulled out one of her shirt. It was two sizes larger and it hung longer over the woman’s bottom, but minimally covering her. She shook her head to remind herself that it was too much for one day, by tomorrow, they’d both be so sore. So she went to snatch some food from the fridge.
However, after snacking on some fruit salad and cheese curds, Tina’s hands were wandering again on the brunette’s body. Of course Bette couldn’t say no to such an invitation. In the luxury the bed provided, she uncaged her raging yearnings that had been kept buried. Once it came out, it had the power to ravage the blonde. But Bette was thoroughly gentle, she was always gentle to Tina, and Tina only.
Through the night, anyone came near their bedroom door would hear the woman squealing and moaning and laughing and whimpering. All kinds of sounds went through the wooden board, they were enough for anybody to blush.
Needless to say, it was a wonderful night.
The lovemaking was new, exciting, and way too good for them to call it a night. Nearly at the crack of dawn, the brunette collapsed down after a long and hard orgasm they shared. Several seconds later, she moved from on top of the blonde to the spot next to her. She scooted in from her behind and tasted the little salty bead of sweat residing on the delicate neck. “Oh my god, we need to stop.” Both of her hands were sore and the muscles in her thighs were convulsing involuntarily. Gladly they were not in the bathroom anymore for she’d slip and fall on her ass.
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Correction: I dedicate this chapter to Pie, my dear friend! Although…it is NC-17 and a teeny tiny bit inappropriate, but it’s a happy chapter, and a reminder for her to come back soon. She texted me this morning saying that she’s doing better, fighting an infection, but I’m sure she’s gonna kick ass!
And the inspiration of the title was from the song “Gold”, by Wake Owl. It is a really good song.
SO to my twitter family and fanfic readers! Stop by any time and leave me some love ;)
Peace :)
So glad there was some happiness for those two after the brutality. Thanks
Nice Chapter – nice dedication.
Pie seems to be recovering now so hopefully she’ll be back posting soon.
I would be pissed off if someone who supposedly cares for me, would allow someone to shoot drugs into me. I don’t care what the consequences are.
Other then that I really enjoy this story.
This was an awesome chapter… I loved the sexiness and them finally being together truly. But what I truly loved about this chapter was the cuteness factor and the verbal back and forth between them.. I just loved their playfulness!!! Great chapter!!
Wow this was awesome, thankyou!
Such a nice contrast to the violence of the last chapter. Beautiful musings of love and adoration.. Thank you, Rob! Again, Pie would be proud!
Wonderful, sweet and hot loving chapter! Just what we needed after that violence chapter.
It is good to hear Pie_Fair is getting better, she sure will kick ass!
It was a sweet and full of love chapter. It was very relaxing to read, an immense difference to the previous violence chapter.
I loved the playful banter between them.
really liked it. Thank you!
The more you get well soon Pie. and come back to us :)
Rob, it was amazing one NC: 17 pure quality,
my God !! was breathtaking, very sensual, very
romantic, wild and gentle at the same time,
all perfeito.elas simply torched this
history, and there is medicine for my poor heart.
ROB! ALL STARS.
Beautiful chapter amid all this terror!
RT,
I have been following this book and I don’t know if I have left a comment on your previous chapters..
But I couldn’t remember leaving a comment so here I am begging u to please hurry with your next chap coz I am really excited for these two ladies.
Command has been missing but I guess it wouldn’t hurt if you will entertain us with your own version of crime/suspense and full of love fan fiction..
Another achievement for you friend bcoz u are able to make us asked for more. (Wink!)
Thanks for this Chap! We are The Lucky One(s) *ooppss!!!
Oh my sweet friend!..Sorry it has taken me so long to catch up with your story but thank you so much for dedicating this chapter to me. I continue to improve everyday. You have managed to once again dazzle me with your writing and what a sweet chapter compared to the last one….Can’t wait for the next chapter and thank you for all your love and support.
Luv ya!
Pie
I’m so happy you are my friend because when someone ask one day, hey have you ever read one of Robyn’s amazing books? I can say of course I have, she’s a good friend of mines. lol ok I just had to say that…Seriously Robyn every chapter I am amazed by your writing…gosh you suck! ok not really! But truly you are incredible, fucking incredible! Dedicate your first book to me…something like “To the most beautiful, loving friend I ever known Marq***** oh shit almost let it slip. Anyways I love it…obviously! lol