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“Like what? You’ve been in for like how long? 18 months? And you couldn’t even let Kroll know that Vincent is a woman.” She regretted this particular accusation at the moment she said it. Henry failed to tell the lieutenant about Bette, but she was no better. For an entire week, it never occurred to her to give this specific piece of intel to her superior, even when detective Sweeney got back to her with Bette’s file showing her that the woman basically vanished after transferring out of her old high school. She knew what it meant, it meant that Bette had been a criminal, a damn good one all along. Yet she didn’t bring up a word about her. Was she protecting her subconsciously? Was she being untruthful as well? She didn’t want to admit it, but the answer to both questions was yes.
“Look I was working at the bottom of the chain. I didn’t even know.” He threw his arms in the air and lied. “I don’t have to take crap from you. You weren’t the one working your ass off to get here. I’m done with you.”
“Maybe I’m not. But I’ll be providing more intel by the end of the week than you’ve ever did.” Tina was enraged by the man’s manner. She could barely keep her voice down. “And I’m gonna report you.”
“Don’t you dare—” He immediately turned around and pressed in on her, gripping her arms in his hands, but then they heard something from the further side of the backyard. Some shuffling appeared and a woman’s figure stole out into the moonlight from behind the plants.
It was Jodi, having collected another victim of Jorge’s.
The two of them instantly jumped apart. They didn’t know whether the woman heard them or not.
But Jodi was equally surprised to see them. “What are you doing here?”
Tina quickly came to her side. “I was looking for you. It’s time to take your meds.” She guided her through the short bushes and glared at Henry before going back to the house.
“You were screwing with Eric, weren’t you.” Jodi scoffed at her nurse. She was secretly glad that this Ms. Kristen Dean was involved with someone else. Imagine how mad Vincent would be to find that out. She snickered to herself. Then… then Vincent would come to her, and she would take good care of her…she would make Vincent hers. “I’ll tell you what, you never saw me with Andres, and I never saw you with Eric.” She pretended to be understanding and sympathetic.
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Ha! Finally put together another post! Hope I’m fast enough for you guys.
Shout outs to the lovely ladies commenting on my stories, SassyGran, bibi, scribe, TN1, els73, cellphone, pikiangelica, doc, lipitora, wkm, simonem, ut, mscully and everyone else reading! Thank you guys! Luv y’all!
Uhhhh I know this post is sad and it’s probably going to be a bit sadder as it progress, but you know I’ll be doing everything to fix this. Have faith in me!
Ok I really need to go to bed now. My GBF is nagging me about my unhealthy lifestyle lol.
Don’t forget to leave some comments and love for me~ Goodnight ladies!
Peace :)
I think bette mouth shut and then we would have an NC-17 history, but I hope it bette undercover cop, expect more kisses and caresses, and thanks for sharing your imagination with your fans.
Good to see I’m not the only one up so late lol.
Wow that was fucking amazing! I love your style of writing and the complete brilliance you bring to a story and I’m not just saying that because you are a friend but because its the truth, you are amazing RT. This was heartbreaking for sure, finding out that Bette had been strung out on drugs is too much for any tibetter to bare but I’m happy you put this in the story because it gives the reader an insight on just how broken she was back in high school and afterwards. So sad for Bette and her life…and for Tina who continues to battle with her emotions and heart, so sad that both women are in horrible predicaments, I’m very exciting to see how this story plays out. Well well well done my friend, keep it coming!
I’m burning the late night oil after changing out of a sweat drenched shirt. And now can’t sleep so I finally got to your story! Very intriguing and intense RT! Bette’s background is particularly sad and Tina fighting her emotions…*sigh*. ..You definitely have a good one brewing here my friend! Very well written! Of course your stories always are!
you know I cried for the Chinese version, I sense that you will make me cry more in the next few chapters.you know the Chinese saying,healthy is the foundament for revolution，so have a good rest!
Well RT you ask me to have faith in you and at the same time promise me more sadness!
I did find this chapter very sad and even though I know you are going to make me even sadder, I will have faith but, please make Bette’s life better asap!
Bravo RT! Sad that Bette has gone through so much hardship – being shunned because of her father led her right down a similar path, and the drugs! – very tragic. Tina is getting in deep almost too fast. Will Bette save her from the darkness? As always, your writing is superb! Thank you for updating so quickly.
It was a great chapter, very well written. despite the fact that my heart is broken!
Bette almost died because of drugs, it was very sad.
and Tina again shattered her heart. but I’m glad that in the end Bette didn’t do anything hurt herself.
I hope Tina give up the struggle against her feelings, I understand that she is a cop and wants to act correctly, but still ….
I’m looking forward to the sequel.
will be even sadder? (help me) :D
What can i say more than the other comments i read.
It is breaking my Tibette heart, this story is so sad and it will be sadder, but i have faith in you to make this better.
Still wondering what Bette’s role is in this drug cartel.
And poor Tina, stuck between good and bad.
I hope you had a good sleep and are able to update soon.
Lots of love for you!
This is sad for them, hope they can find some way to be with each other
So sad but hopefully love will win out.
This time already broke my heart and you me
says it will get even sad, in this case, need
go to the pharmacy to buy my medicine
heart, because that way I will not endure.
Bette not deserve to suffer again already was not
Bette have suffered enough in pasado.
I faith that Bette is not a criminal
after all.
And here to us that kiss was the famous “Footprint Porter”
10 Stars.
Whoa! A new one to obsess about! Hope, Bette is not really part of this corrupt group and just an undercover agent like Tina.
Just read the three chapters in one sitting and if it was already finished I think I’d just keep reading all through the day! I’m loving it, your creativity is just amazing. I’ll look forward to other posts!