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It is a game, a dangerous game
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Tina of course knew she couldn’t trust a single word Jodi said. But it didn’t matter whatsoever. Jodi didn’t hear a thing, and most likely she would go crazy again by tomorrow.
She didn’t know, a shadow on the third floor balcony had been there for a long time.
Bette was watching the blonde from the balcony since she left the garden. She couldn’t hear anything but she was observing the entire time. There were still so many questions, regarding the name change, regarding Eric. She was able to ring up someone and find out that Tina Kennard did graduate from UChicago with a nursing degree and spent three years in medical school, but after dropping out, her records no longer existed. And then she did a little research on the name Kristen Dean, the result showed that not long after dropping out of meds school, she began working at the Chicago Mercy Hospital. The dates, the charts, everything checked out. But still something didn’t feel right. Records could be forged. She would guess that Tina was working as an undercover cop, but Eric seemed to be a bad seed to the deep end of his soul, it didn’t make sense. Besides, even if Tina went to the academy afterwords, she’d be a first year officer. Who would’ve sent a first year on an undercover operation? Maybe she was working for some other people? An enemy of Jorge’s perhaps?
The questions were troubling her. But what troubled her more was the fact that Jorge just declared his affection to her, and the scene she witnessed in the backyard, with Eric. She had no idea what they were talking about, but to her, it seemed like a lover’s quarrel. And she could feel the raging jealousy in her stomach, it almost ripped her apart as she saw the man holding Tina’s arms.
As the blonde walked Jodi back to the house, Bette couldn’t help her impulse anymore but ran downstairs.
Jodi was tired out. Tina was glad that she wasn’t there to hear any of the madness between Jorge and the other guys and Bette back in the garden, otherwise Jodi would absolutely hate her gut. She put the sick woman to sleep before going back to her room with a heavy heart.
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Ha! Finally put together another post! Hope I’m fast enough for you guys.
Shout outs to the lovely ladies commenting on my stories, SassyGran, bibi, scribe, TN1, els73, cellphone, pikiangelica, doc, lipitora, wkm, simonem, ut, mscully and everyone else reading! Thank you guys! Luv y’all!
Uhhhh I know this post is sad and it’s probably going to be a bit sadder as it progress, but you know I’ll be doing everything to fix this. Have faith in me!
Ok I really need to go to bed now. My GBF is nagging me about my unhealthy lifestyle lol.
Don’t forget to leave some comments and love for me~ Goodnight ladies!
Peace :)
I think bette mouth shut and then we would have an NC-17 history, but I hope it bette undercover cop, expect more kisses and caresses, and thanks for sharing your imagination with your fans.
Good to see I’m not the only one up so late lol.
Wow that was fucking amazing! I love your style of writing and the complete brilliance you bring to a story and I’m not just saying that because you are a friend but because its the truth, you are amazing RT. This was heartbreaking for sure, finding out that Bette had been strung out on drugs is too much for any tibetter to bare but I’m happy you put this in the story because it gives the reader an insight on just how broken she was back in high school and afterwards. So sad for Bette and her life…and for Tina who continues to battle with her emotions and heart, so sad that both women are in horrible predicaments, I’m very exciting to see how this story plays out. Well well well done my friend, keep it coming!
I’m burning the late night oil after changing out of a sweat drenched shirt. And now can’t sleep so I finally got to your story! Very intriguing and intense RT! Bette’s background is particularly sad and Tina fighting her emotions…*sigh*. ..You definitely have a good one brewing here my friend! Very well written! Of course your stories always are!
you know I cried for the Chinese version, I sense that you will make me cry more in the next few chapters.you know the Chinese saying,healthy is the foundament for revolution，so have a good rest!
Well RT you ask me to have faith in you and at the same time promise me more sadness!
I did find this chapter very sad and even though I know you are going to make me even sadder, I will have faith but, please make Bette’s life better asap!
Bravo RT! Sad that Bette has gone through so much hardship – being shunned because of her father led her right down a similar path, and the drugs! – very tragic. Tina is getting in deep almost too fast. Will Bette save her from the darkness? As always, your writing is superb! Thank you for updating so quickly.
It was a great chapter, very well written. despite the fact that my heart is broken!
Bette almost died because of drugs, it was very sad.
and Tina again shattered her heart. but I’m glad that in the end Bette didn’t do anything hurt herself.
I hope Tina give up the struggle against her feelings, I understand that she is a cop and wants to act correctly, but still ….
I’m looking forward to the sequel.
will be even sadder? (help me) :D
What can i say more than the other comments i read.
It is breaking my Tibette heart, this story is so sad and it will be sadder, but i have faith in you to make this better.
Still wondering what Bette’s role is in this drug cartel.
And poor Tina, stuck between good and bad.
I hope you had a good sleep and are able to update soon.
Lots of love for you!
This is sad for them, hope they can find some way to be with each other
So sad but hopefully love will win out.
This time already broke my heart and you me
says it will get even sad, in this case, need
go to the pharmacy to buy my medicine
heart, because that way I will not endure.
Bette not deserve to suffer again already was not
Bette have suffered enough in pasado.
I faith that Bette is not a criminal
after all.
And here to us that kiss was the famous “Footprint Porter”
10 Stars.
Whoa! A new one to obsess about! Hope, Bette is not really part of this corrupt group and just an undercover agent like Tina.
Just read the three chapters in one sitting and if it was already finished I think I’d just keep reading all through the day! I’m loving it, your creativity is just amazing. I’ll look forward to other posts!