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I’ve Got You Under My Skin – Chapter 3
Story written on August 30, 2005 by hey_portard.
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Dana: “No, she’s my neighbor, I will ask her.”
Alice: “Why don’t we both go. I want to see what her place looks like. I was thinking about doing an article for L.A. Magazine on how you can learn a lot about a person by the way they decorate their home. Hey! I could interview Tina!”
Dana: (tuning Alice out) “Fine, we will both go.”
Alice: “Well, come on, hurry up. Everyone’s going to be here. The food is going to get cold.”
Dana and Alice walk to Tina’s
Tina has just gotten out of the shower after a long hard day. She is starting to ache from her little tumble this morning and her mind is tired from all of the information overload that comes with a new job. She decides to slip into her favorite tank top and her comfy Capri’s and ventures into the kitchen. Just as she opens the refrigerator she hears a knock on the door.
Knock, knock, knock.
Tina: “Coming.”
Alice: “Oh good, she’s here.”
Dana: “Let me do the talking, she’s my neighbor.”
Alice: “okay, gosh.”
Tina opens her front door.
Dana: “Hi, Tina. Remember us from this morning?”
Tina: “Yeah, it’s Alice and D . . .”
Dana: “Dana.” (Dana thinks to herself, ***** she doesn’t even remember my name. Why do all the girls I am attracted to fail to notice me?)
Tina: “Yes, of course, Dana. You’ll have to excuse me, I have met so many people today and my mind is mush.”
Alice: “New jobs can be like that.”
Tina: “Yeah, I remember that now.”
Alice pokes Dana in the side . . .
Dana: “Oh, ummm . . . we are having the girls over for Chinese right now, would you like to join us?”
Alice: “Yeah, it would be great, we could go through the L.A. Magazine’s I got for you today.”
Dana: “Al, she is tired. Information overload, remember?”
Tina: “Yeah, tonight probably wouldn’t be the night, but thanks for thinking of me. Another time, maybe?”
Alice: “No problem, I understand. Just let me know when you are ready.”
Dana: “We would love to have you come over and eat with us. We all have had hard Mondays and we just thought it would be fun to be together.”
Tina: “I don’t want to barge into your little family.”
Dana: “Nonsense, you wouldn’t be barging because we are inviting you to join us. Kit’s sister is even going to stop by later, so you can meet her too.”
Tina: “I don’t know, I just showered and got comfy.”
Dana: “You look great. Really, really great.”
Alice: “Yeah, (looking Tina up and down) you look really, good. We are a casual group . . . you got to eat, don’t you?”
Tina: “Okay, I probably won’t stay long, I’ve had a really exhausting day. Let me grab some shoes.”
As Alice and Dana wait for Tina to put on her shoes, they both are mesmerized by this beautiful southern blonde. Her smile, her smell, her sweetness . . . it was intoxicating.
Tina enters the room . . .
Tina enters the room . . .
Tina: “Okay, I am ready.”
TBC . . .
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cool post, I found it funny how it seems that every single one of the girls have a thing for tina, I can’t wait to see bette expression when she realizes that Tina is farm girl, this will be really intresting, the thing is i can see tina with either one of the girls, anyway please post soon.
DINNER IS GOING TO BE GOOD…GREAT JOB ..THANKS
can’t wait for Bette to show up
Hey, Portard…(That had to be one of…if not my favorite lines in S1. I used to drive to work with that mantra…”Hey, Portard, how’s your two moms, ya big gaymo?”… LMAO…just to put myself in a good mood…dreading what I was in for…then I’d get to work and nobody knew or could figure out why I was in such a good mood.) I really, really like this story! Even tho’ Bette was a big ‘ho when Tina accidentally ran into her. I can’t wait ’til they meet!! I know you’ll make it really, really good!!
It’s really starting to get interesting can’t wait till she meets bette post soon !!!!!
Can’t wait for the dinner to begin. I like the dialogue you have going between the girls. Good job.
Kit is going to have Bette’s ass when she finds out what she said to Tina. I can’t wait for them to meet face to face.
Damn Alice and Dana are so funny and they all want Tina, and can’t wait to see Bette and Tina meet. Post soon, thanks!
yes yes continue soon!!
The anticipation is killing me. Great story.
“pootie chasing dog” eh? lol. I like when you guys use the lines from the show. anyway Alice and Dana can fight over Tina all they want, but we’ll see what happens when T and B meet officially. I hope B apologizes for being such an ass!
I just love this story – very well written, sooo funny :o)) The B&T anticipation is killing me. Please continue soon…
Bette’s going to want to curl up and die, when she sees Tina, if she even recognizes her. Kit is going to be apologizing for days, to Tina, when she finds out what Bette said to her, and Bette is going to get a earful, when Kit is done with her. This is going to be an interesting dinner. Hope they get done eating, before Bette gets there, otherwise, a few of them may lose their appetite, when Bette and Tina meet. Post soon, please.
K
Great chapter, can’t wait to see what happens when T and B meet.
lets see how Bette will behave around Tina post soon
what the hell. dana, that is nasty on some many levels. and alice wanting everything that moves. please no dana, or alice or shane, or hellno. its all so stuck in my head that any of them with tina makes me break out in hives.
I’m stuck like chuck to this story. Oh well, maybe in the next chapter, B & T will come face to face…..I cant wait.
Please post again soon
dana and tina gross!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!