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***Latin Business… or something else??*** –Chapter21
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“We won’t, promise. But we think YOU should” Said Bette “It’s been too much time, don’t you think?Isabel, look, we only met you 3 hours ago, but we know you’r a fantastic young lady, look all the things you’ve done for her. Do you love her?”
“Yes! Of course I do!But, I’d rather having her as a friend than not having her at all. I’ll just have her as she wants me to”
“And how do you know she doesn’t want you as you want her?”
“I can’t take that risk, girls”Isabel admitted
“Just think about it,ok?”
“Do you think I don’t?!!I mean, my whole life revolves around hers, God damn it!My schedule is adjusted so I can always pick her up, I almost sold my soul to the devil himself to get her all the jobs she has now, i paid a fortune the guy who lived in her place a fortune to move out to aonther place!I was with her all night while she cried her eyes out when her butthead boyfriend broke up with her and dumped her. I love her so much my heart aches every single minute without her!” Isabel confessed, now on the verge of tears, surprising Bette and Alice
“You..um.. you did all that?”Asked Alice
“Yeah… And I’d do it again just to see her smile”She said and sighed “I… I just want her to be happy”
“And don’t you think you might be the one who could make her as happy as she has never been?”Asked Bette softly, embracing her shoulders
“I, I don’t know…”
“She thinks the world of you, Isabel… maybe it is worth telling her how you feel, and maybe she feels the same way about you and all she needs is a little push” Said Alice
Isabel just nodded
“Ok, we’re going to go now. If you need anything, just let us know, ok kid?”Said Bette, hugging her tight. She already loved this girl as a sister
“Yeah, I will… thanks” Replied Isabel, hugging her back
“Take care kid, see you soon”Said Alice, now hugging Isabel “And be prepared because we’ll beat you up in thate dancefloor one of these days, got it?” She said vanishing the tension
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That was a pretty intense chapter. I won’t ask questions, but it definitely sounded like a story that needed to be told.
You really need to write this story. To many young people needs to read this thanks
Wow that was sad for Isabel and can’t wait to see her telling Marisol about her feeling. OK post soon please, thanks!
Wow hun, Umm wow guess I can’t say much on here, but that was intense… Sorry didn’t comment on the other stories, had a wirlwind of a week and yeah… But yeah.. I’ll talk to ya later on on msn maybe. Take care hun. *hugs you*
Hola Isabel….De verdad que tu historia es muy buena….lei como doce capitulos seguidos…la historia me atrapó..muy intensa. A mi me encanta “Valio la pena”, es una de las canciones que siempre le dedico a mi novia. Soy de República Dominicana, me encanta bailar salsa, asi que ya te puedes imaginar que tanto me gusta tu historia…mi e-mail es andreysi@hotmail.com…Me gustaría conocerte más y asi hacer una nueva amiga..!!! And..Post soon, I’ll be waiting!
Wow that was so intense and so sad….but also so full of life. I really hope that by writing this story you’re healing. Thanks for this beautiful and wonderful chapter, I’m looking forward to more, because it’s addictive :o))
true that was intense.great writing.loved it.can’t wait to see the differente couples.I’m looking forward to the next postage