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***Latin Business… or something else??*** –Chapter21
Everyone wanted to ask her more question, but understood that Isabel ddidn’t want to talk about it anymore, not for now, so they played along
“Well, first, the lessons are great!” Said Bette “And I think we can beat you anytime, right Al?!”
“Yeah! Bring it on, mami!!!” She yelled as they high 5′ed, laughing
“Uh, girls, I don’t want to hurt your egos, but this was only your second lesson and Isabel here and myself have been raised with this music” Marisol said, smiling
“Crap, I think we lost this one, Porter” Said Alice, defeated
“I guess”Replied Bette, seriously, before bursting out laughing.
“Mmmm, this is good” Said I sabel, drinking from her cup, a while later
“What did you get?” Asked Bete, peaking in her cup
“Hot chocolate” Answered Marisol for Isabel “She’s such a baby!” She teased, making everyone laugh, and I sabel pouted briefly, before teasing back
“Well, Excuse me, old chamomile lady, but I looove chocolate, ok?” She said, sticking out her tongue. Everyone had a great time. They talked and laughed with Isabel’s antics. Indeed, she was a child, a very mature one, but a child nonetheless. But she seemed proud of it. Somehow, Marisol’s yarn let them know it was getting late. actually it was past 11pm
“Yay! It’s way past my bedtime, ma” Said Isabel, tugging Marisol’s T-shirt, like a child
“Okay, kid, let’s get you tucked in bed,ok?” She replied, smiling swwetly at her “Cos little baby always goes to sleep at 8 o’ clock, don’t you? Yes you do!” She cooed, making everyone laugh, including Isabel. They all got up and walked out of The Planet
“Well ladies, It’s been fun, but we must get going”Said Isabel, leaning to Kiss Bette on the cheek as Marisol did the same to Alice
“Whoa, you didn’t think you’d get rid of us so soon, did you?” Said Alice
“What?” – “Huh?” Was the response she got
“We still are going to take you to your CASAS, seoritas” Said Bette, smiling
“Oh you dont have to, we’re going to take a cab…” Started Isabel
“No, you’re not!” Interrupted Alice “I read an article once about how-”
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That was a pretty intense chapter. I won’t ask questions, but it definitely sounded like a story that needed to be told.
You really need to write this story. To many young people needs to read this thanks
Wow that was sad for Isabel and can’t wait to see her telling Marisol about her feeling. OK post soon please, thanks!
Wow hun, Umm wow guess I can’t say much on here, but that was intense… Sorry didn’t comment on the other stories, had a wirlwind of a week and yeah… But yeah.. I’ll talk to ya later on on msn maybe. Take care hun. *hugs you*
Hola Isabel….De verdad que tu historia es muy buena….lei como doce capitulos seguidos…la historia me atrapó..muy intensa. A mi me encanta “Valio la pena”, es una de las canciones que siempre le dedico a mi novia. Soy de República Dominicana, me encanta bailar salsa, asi que ya te puedes imaginar que tanto me gusta tu historia…mi e-mail es andreysi@hotmail.com…Me gustaría conocerte más y asi hacer una nueva amiga..!!! And..Post soon, I’ll be waiting!
Wow that was so intense and so sad….but also so full of life. I really hope that by writing this story you’re healing. Thanks for this beautiful and wonderful chapter, I’m looking forward to more, because it’s addictive :o))
true that was intense.great writing.loved it.can’t wait to see the differente couples.I’m looking forward to the next postage