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***Latin Business… or something else??*** –Chapter21
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“They don’t need the gross details ,Al, the thing is: get in the car” Said Bette, demandingly
“Fine, fine” Said both of the girls and the 4 girls hoped in. The ride home was fuull of laughter and more talking. They were soon at Marisol’s place.
“This is where you guys live? This is a great place!” Said Alice
“Actually, Marisol lives here, I liv in the next block”Said Isabel, getting out of the car
“Oh” Bette and Alice said, surprised. They assumed that they both lived in the same apartment. Bette opeed the trunk for them as they got out their sportsbag and schoolbag
“Bette, Alice, thanks for everything. We’ll see you on wednesday” Said Isabel after Marisol said her goodbyes
“But I thought you lived in the next block”
“I do, but I’m going to walk her to her door and Then I’ll walk home”
“Why don’t you go upstairs, walk her to her door, and then we’ll take you home” Offered Alice, still wanting to get a little extra info about these two girls
“Uh, are you sure, guys? I mean, I dont mind walking. It’s only one block”
“Totally sure” Said Bette, placing her hands on Isabel’s shoulders, taking her schoolbag off her shoulder. “Now go do your thing and we’ll be down here” She said, looking at Marisol, who now was waiting at the entrance of the building
“Ok, I’ll be right back” She said as she hurried inside. 10 minutes later, they were outside Isabel’s building
“Ok, since when?” Asked Alice
“What?”Asked Isabel, confused
“Since when are you totally head over heels hopelessly in love with her?”
Color drained out of Isabel’s face as she looked from Bette to Alice’s smiling faces, shocked. She stammered “Wha- What? I- I don’t know what are-”
“It’s written all over your face”Said Bette, smiling softly “Especially in your eyes”
Isabel looked down, embarrassed
“Hey, It’s fine”Said Alice, trying to reassure her new friend
“NO! It’s not fine! She’s my friend for Christ sake!” Isabel blurted out
“Since when?” Insisted Alice
“Since the very first time I saw her” Answered Isabel in a whisper, after taking some seconds to calm herself before yelling again”You can’t tell her!” She pleaded “She’ll totally freak out and I can’t lose her!”
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That was a pretty intense chapter. I won’t ask questions, but it definitely sounded like a story that needed to be told.
You really need to write this story. To many young people needs to read this thanks
Wow that was sad for Isabel and can’t wait to see her telling Marisol about her feeling. OK post soon please, thanks!
Wow hun, Umm wow guess I can’t say much on here, but that was intense… Sorry didn’t comment on the other stories, had a wirlwind of a week and yeah… But yeah.. I’ll talk to ya later on on msn maybe. Take care hun. *hugs you*
Hola Isabel….De verdad que tu historia es muy buena….lei como doce capitulos seguidos…la historia me atrapó..muy intensa. A mi me encanta “Valio la pena”, es una de las canciones que siempre le dedico a mi novia. Soy de República Dominicana, me encanta bailar salsa, asi que ya te puedes imaginar que tanto me gusta tu historia…mi e-mail es andreysi@hotmail.com…Me gustaría conocerte más y asi hacer una nueva amiga..!!! And..Post soon, I’ll be waiting!
Wow that was so intense and so sad….but also so full of life. I really hope that by writing this story you’re healing. Thanks for this beautiful and wonderful chapter, I’m looking forward to more, because it’s addictive :o))
true that was intense.great writing.loved it.can’t wait to see the differente couples.I’m looking forward to the next postage