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Lest I Forget (5b)
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We washed each other slowly and lovingly, and by the time we were done the water had gone cold. It didn’t matter, though. We just wrapped ourselves in one of her huge bath towels and held each other for a while, kissing every now and then.
“We’d better get out there or they’ll do something to the apartment just to spite us,” Alice whispered as we stood there. I sighed and wondered how much they’d hate us if we just went out there and told them we’d rather spend the next week in bed together, but I couldn’t even think about suggesting that to Alice. I’d seen the way her eyes had lit up at the mention of Alaska, and although all I really wanted to do was snuggle in bed with Alice for the rest of my life, deep down I wanted to see it too.
It was almost as if she read my mind, which I guess shouldn’t have surprised me. She’d always seemed to know what I was thinking even before I did. “It’s okay, baby,” she murmured into my ear. “It’s not like there won’t be a bed for us on the ship or anything.” I pulled back to protest, but she just laughed at me. “Don’t try and deny it, Fairbanks. I can see those perverted wheels turning in your head.” I shook my head, but she didn’t buy it and kissed me. “Don’t worry about it, baby. I’ll take care of you, okay?” she asked into my ear, and I almost ravaged her right there. I probably would have if she hadn’t stepped away from me and started to get dressed. “Quit looking at me like that and get dressed. Bette’ll kill us if we don’t get out there.”
“Okay, okay,” I muttered resignedly. She just looked at me for a second and smiled, and somehow, that made it all worth it. I was really hoping she wouldn’t catch on to the fact that all she ever had to do to get her way was smile at me.
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“Do you remember that, baby?” I asked now. She was still looking at me, her eyes catching specks of light and reflecting them back to me. She moved her head toward me the tiniest bit, and I don’t think I would have been able to stop myself from kissing her if I tried. I pressed my lips to hers and tried not to focus on how little of a response there was. Throughout all our time together, Alice had always kissed me as if it was the last time she ever would. No matter how intense the sex between us could sometimes be, her kisses were somehow always more expressive. When she kissed me, I could feel all the love she had for me, everything she had buried and tucked away somewhere inside herself, that she kept hidden so no one would break her heart.
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AWESOME! I love how you have Dana being so in-love with Alice, just utterely and completely. That is how I saw it happening on the real show ‘if’ that ding dong IC didn’t knock TV Dana off…ugh it still bugs me, why, okay I can rant on that one forever…back to your story…I truly love this story, so well written you can actually visualize the scenes. And yeah nice touch with the shower, I love it! Nice work!
No, you can’t let her slip away yet, there are years and years of stories to be told … and you must tell it as wonderfully as you have up to now.
I forgot to add this to my comment last night. After watching the Afterellen’s vlog: Worst Lesbian TV Moments where Killing Dana was the #1, I was really bumped out all over again. Then your post came along in the early hours in the morning made me feel a whole lot better. I just wanted you to know that. Honestly, it is this alternative universe of fanfics which gives me a little comfort and plenty of laughs. I cannot stress enough just how much miss DF on the show. Thanks MT and all you Danish writers again.
gasp. But I know you will get Alice back, I just know it. And I love how much in love they were back in the days and still are of course. It’s wonderfully desribed by you. Great.
I agree with MaGoose, this chapter really was a rollercoaster of emotions. I loved the whole interaction with Shane and Bette . And then the kiss Alice gave to Dana right before she slipped back in her coma. Poor Dana. :( I hope Alice will come by for a little while. *keeps fingers crossed*
“So fucking cute”, and Shane was sooo effin’ right! I agree with ACH21, there’s no doubt in my mind that Dana would be consummed body and soul with her love for Alice. It’s very touching, *sigh*. I also have to add that the humor in this story is cracking me up, spot on there MT! I am anxiously waiting to hear more about their life together…
Running out of hot water, fantastic. Bette & Shane’s note was even better. Keeping the passport with the sex toys, LMAO! How the hell do you eat crabs legs with one hand? Ha-ha-haa. S was a real good friend getting D her 3 boxes of seasickness pills. The sunrise scene was perfect. I think this Alaskan honeymoon cruise was just what the doctor ordered. And just when I was having fun reading this update, A might have slipped back into a coma. My heart goes out to D and thank god Charlie and S showed up at the right time. Please let A stay for a little bit longer. Thank you MT for another awesome update. I hope you will be able to post another one before your trip if you have the time.
noooooooooooooooooooooo :'(
Incredible chapter, MT! I started to cut and paste my favorite lines to comment on. However, I realized that it was most of the chapter. What a roller coaster of humor, drama, sadness, romance, sex… I’ve said it before and I will keep saying it: You rock at writing Danish. I trust that Alice will be back from the coma — I know you have a lot more to say about their years together. Thanks so much for the update!!
at last I get a chance to read some stories and I headed straight for yours. This story is fantastic you write so well and are developing the long happy life together that we know this pair could have had beautifully. I expectantly await the next chapter!!!!!