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Let it be – chapter five
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“The next time will be the last time “
“She’s stupid but she’s not stupid – she knows that I am possessive of you “
“You were too busy dancing your ass off but Marina was doing her best to make her jealous – flirting with the new barmaid “
“That’s Marina all over. Francesca is the same – remember the first time we met them – she was all over me like a damn rash “
“And if there is one thing you hate more than me being hit on it’s you being hit on odd given your status as hottest lesbian in West Hollywood“
Tina smiled at Bette for the first time.
“I was out of order last night and I am sorry that I showed you up. I will speak to Marina and Tim – they got the fall out from how badly I am dealing with our fling “
“And does that apology include Jenny?”
“No – I mean it Tina – she gives me the creeps. Call it second sight or lesbian intuition but she is big time bad news. If I never saw her again it would be too soon “
“You really dislike her that much?”
Bette shuddered – “There is something about her – I must ask Marina if she has 666 stamped on her ass “
Tina laughed and took Bette’s hand
“I’ll make us some breakfast and you can ring James and tell him he’s running the ship alone today “
Bette was about to object but she saw the look on Tina’s face and nodded
“Okay –then I will go and get changed “
“Thanks “Tina knew that Bette in her own way was just doing what she thought was right.
In ten minutes they were back at the breakfast table – Bette was wearing a pair of black shorts that showed off her long well toned legs and a pink tee-shirt – she looked like she was dressed for a day at the beach – not the office. Tina placed toast in front of her
“Eat “
“Do I have to?”
“If you eat and have some fruit I’ll give you a couple of pain killers “
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I like when Bette opens up and I like seeing Tina comfort her. Good thing that Tim doesn’t seem to be all too upset at Bette. Jenny is gone…yay!
Ally ummmm just WOW, what else can say:)PPS
I agree with everyone else Ally. I think the talk between B&T and the way Tina used to allay Bette’s fears were just brillant. I suppose that awaited weekend with your loved one has inspired you a great deal, cause even though I always love your writing, I really think that you’ve outdone yourself with this chapter. Well done! Now, don’t we all wish that the end of Jennny Schecter had been as simple and quick as boarding a plan to Whogivesafuck… Thanks for a great update!
This made me happy. Glad Bette both shared her fears with Tina..and really apologized to Tim. I hope you give Tim a nice girl in this fic. I actually really liked him on the show. PPS.
Fantastic, Ally. Love how you’ve addressed Bette’s insecurities and allowed her to accept Tina’s help in disarming them. I’ve enjoyed all your chapters this week and hope that you enjoy your weekend!
that was great, i loved them talking and reconnecting, it was so lovely and sweet, thanks Ally you are amazing honey, post soon.All my love.
This was nice…love when Tina takes charge and Bette listens to her
Oh Ally, you wrote the story that is every Tibette lovers dream and every Jenny haters dream too. very very lovely talk between Tina and Bette., Enjoy your time with your sweetie.
Oh my… I so loved Tina right now. She did a great job calming Bette… Grats Ally… ;)
So does that really put it to rest? Or will it hide in the shadows to nag at the most inconvenient times? Seems Tim is at ease, though.
Ally this is the best stuff I have ever read from you. I so love this story it’s gritty and WOW I don’t know it just seems on another plane. You really have stepped up your game her. Good job.
Another great one AllyE. I really do like this story and the good thing is I started it from the beginning. So happy they talked about what happened, Bette was letting it eat her up inside. Tina is a very wise young woman. Have a great weekend with Cheryl. PPS
That was awesome and good to see Bette open up to Tina and now thing are ok, love the B&T’s talk. Tim seem ok now. Please post more, thanks!
Yaaay! You did it again! You really made B&T work on the demons that were threatening their relationship and went through the whole nightmare till they could see the light at the end of the tunnel. Gorgeous chapter! Now, dear friend, enjoy your weekend immensely and misbehave with C. You both absolutely deserve your time together. We won’t bother you at all. You have given us a lot this week and you should be focused now on your other half. Big Hs & Kisses – Lucero & Marsha
Gosh I really like this story with his different loops and marvellous dialogues. Thanks and looking forward for more.
I truly truly love your story. This chapter’s grrreat!!
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You’re writing of Bette’s fears and Tina reassuring her was so right… And I love the Bette/Tim chat. I’ve never liked Jenny either so I’m just glad she’s going away…
yay!!!! god, I really enjoyed this chap my queen! You are just a genius with fan fic. I’m glad B&T finally talked about that night and about B’s fears. Ok, talk to you soon. Take care and have a nice and lovely weekend.
This was a pretty emotional chapter. Hopefully B&T can move on and there will be no drama involving Pistol Pete (lol). Loved the chat between Bette and Tim and LMFAO@Francesca for setting Jenny’s manushit, er, manuscript on fire! XD
WOW what fantastic chapter!! love how tina takes control and helps bette work though her fears!!! even better when bette went and chatted with tim…