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Let it be – chapter five
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As she had lain awake suffering her hangover at 3am she had finally let those terrors find a voice – she was terrified of losing Tina to a man. And what would make the pain harder to bear was that she had potentially unleashed that demon. She had pushed Tina and Pete Smith into having sex. Despite her famed self control a tear slipped down Bette’s face.
Tina had been just getting comfortable – today she was determined that they were going to work out the problems that Pete Smith had created. Seeing a tear sliding down Bette’s face made Tina’s heart break.
“Babe – please just talk to me. However many hours it takes we have to clear the air – I am not going to let you suffer like this – however hard this is we have to work it out. Our marriage is too important to let what happened screw it up “
Bette’s tears were falling harder – she moved to get up but Tina put her arms around Bette and hugged her
“Please don’t run “she begged
Bette’s every instinct was to run – she could not tell Tina how afraid she was – Tina would be hurt and angry that she thought so little of her that A MAN could come between them. But she was tired of being the strong one – tired of being the one who hide her feelings for the sake of a quiet life and a stress free evening at home.
“I am scared that you want a cock inside you more than you want me inside you”
Bette finally managed to articulate the fear that had been going round her head ever since it happened. Tina wrapped her arms tighter around Bette – as she suspected. She knew Bette well enough – better than Bette knew herself sometimes.
“Its okay –I know honey “Tina whispered resting her head against Bette’s head.
“I don’t want to lose you – I love you so much but I cannot give you what you want and a man – well if you were with a man there wouldn’t be all the month humiliation at the doctors – there wouldn’t be all the farce trying to get good sperm. You’d get pregnant the natural way in private and you would have the family that you want so much. All I have ever wanted was to make you happy T – I can give you holidays and clothes and anything that money can buy but I cannot give you the one thing that you crave “
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I like when Bette opens up and I like seeing Tina comfort her. Good thing that Tim doesn’t seem to be all too upset at Bette. Jenny is gone…yay!
Ally ummmm just WOW, what else can say:)PPS
I agree with everyone else Ally. I think the talk between B&T and the way Tina used to allay Bette’s fears were just brillant. I suppose that awaited weekend with your loved one has inspired you a great deal, cause even though I always love your writing, I really think that you’ve outdone yourself with this chapter. Well done! Now, don’t we all wish that the end of Jennny Schecter had been as simple and quick as boarding a plan to Whogivesafuck… Thanks for a great update!
This made me happy. Glad Bette both shared her fears with Tina..and really apologized to Tim. I hope you give Tim a nice girl in this fic. I actually really liked him on the show. PPS.
Fantastic, Ally. Love how you’ve addressed Bette’s insecurities and allowed her to accept Tina’s help in disarming them. I’ve enjoyed all your chapters this week and hope that you enjoy your weekend!
that was great, i loved them talking and reconnecting, it was so lovely and sweet, thanks Ally you are amazing honey, post soon.All my love.
This was nice…love when Tina takes charge and Bette listens to her
Oh Ally, you wrote the story that is every Tibette lovers dream and every Jenny haters dream too. very very lovely talk between Tina and Bette., Enjoy your time with your sweetie.
Oh my… I so loved Tina right now. She did a great job calming Bette… Grats Ally… ;)
So does that really put it to rest? Or will it hide in the shadows to nag at the most inconvenient times? Seems Tim is at ease, though.
Ally this is the best stuff I have ever read from you. I so love this story it’s gritty and WOW I don’t know it just seems on another plane. You really have stepped up your game her. Good job.
Another great one AllyE. I really do like this story and the good thing is I started it from the beginning. So happy they talked about what happened, Bette was letting it eat her up inside. Tina is a very wise young woman. Have a great weekend with Cheryl. PPS
That was awesome and good to see Bette open up to Tina and now thing are ok, love the B&T’s talk. Tim seem ok now. Please post more, thanks!
Yaaay! You did it again! You really made B&T work on the demons that were threatening their relationship and went through the whole nightmare till they could see the light at the end of the tunnel. Gorgeous chapter! Now, dear friend, enjoy your weekend immensely and misbehave with C. You both absolutely deserve your time together. We won’t bother you at all. You have given us a lot this week and you should be focused now on your other half. Big Hs & Kisses – Lucero & Marsha
Gosh I really like this story with his different loops and marvellous dialogues. Thanks and looking forward for more.
I truly truly love your story. This chapter’s grrreat!!
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You’re writing of Bette’s fears and Tina reassuring her was so right… And I love the Bette/Tim chat. I’ve never liked Jenny either so I’m just glad she’s going away…
yay!!!! god, I really enjoyed this chap my queen! You are just a genius with fan fic. I’m glad B&T finally talked about that night and about B’s fears. Ok, talk to you soon. Take care and have a nice and lovely weekend.
This was a pretty emotional chapter. Hopefully B&T can move on and there will be no drama involving Pistol Pete (lol). Loved the chat between Bette and Tim and LMFAO@Francesca for setting Jenny’s manushit, er, manuscript on fire! XD
WOW what fantastic chapter!! love how tina takes control and helps bette work though her fears!!! even better when bette went and chatted with tim…