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Let it be – chapter five
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“We are out of them “
“Got some in my hand bag “
Bette raised an eyebrow “ Were you a scout ?”
“Bette – eat and just maybe I will take pity on your sorry hung-over ass “
Bette obeyed and began to feel better
“Bette – this will tear you and us apart if you keep dwelling on it “
“I thought I could deal with it “
“And you cannot?”
“I cannot get some of the images out of my head. I have tried but I just keep seeing the same images and its torturing me “
“And last night was the consequence?”
Bette flicked some hair out of her eyes reached for an apple from the bowl on the table. She considered everything.
“All I want to do is make you happy Tina – and my job means that I cannot be with you as much as I want to be. And I know that I get tired and grumpy. I want to be the best wife that you could have and I fall way short “
“Have I ever cheated on you?”
“No “
“All the times that I have been hit on when we have been out have I ever encouraged any of it or shown that I like anyone but you giving me the eye?”
“No “
“So – Bette – I think that is a clue that even though we do have problems I am not bailing out on you – I am still as committed to you and our marriage as I was the day we exchanged vows “
“You deserve better “
“So do you “
Bette looked lost – Tina could see that she was suffering.
“Let’s go and sit by the pool “Tina stood up and offered Bette her hand. Bette took it and followed Tina outside. Even though it was only 10am it was obviously going to be a hot day. Tina got on the lounger and gestured for Bette to sit between her legs. Bette obeyed willingly –she needed to be close to Tina – just to feel or smell her was enough to ease the gradually growing fear that was inside her. What was she afraid of?
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I like when Bette opens up and I like seeing Tina comfort her. Good thing that Tim doesn’t seem to be all too upset at Bette. Jenny is gone…yay!
Ally ummmm just WOW, what else can say:)PPS
I agree with everyone else Ally. I think the talk between B&T and the way Tina used to allay Bette’s fears were just brillant. I suppose that awaited weekend with your loved one has inspired you a great deal, cause even though I always love your writing, I really think that you’ve outdone yourself with this chapter. Well done! Now, don’t we all wish that the end of Jennny Schecter had been as simple and quick as boarding a plan to Whogivesafuck… Thanks for a great update!
This made me happy. Glad Bette both shared her fears with Tina..and really apologized to Tim. I hope you give Tim a nice girl in this fic. I actually really liked him on the show. PPS.
Fantastic, Ally. Love how you’ve addressed Bette’s insecurities and allowed her to accept Tina’s help in disarming them. I’ve enjoyed all your chapters this week and hope that you enjoy your weekend!
that was great, i loved them talking and reconnecting, it was so lovely and sweet, thanks Ally you are amazing honey, post soon.All my love.
This was nice…love when Tina takes charge and Bette listens to her
Oh Ally, you wrote the story that is every Tibette lovers dream and every Jenny haters dream too. very very lovely talk between Tina and Bette., Enjoy your time with your sweetie.
Oh my… I so loved Tina right now. She did a great job calming Bette… Grats Ally… ;)
So does that really put it to rest? Or will it hide in the shadows to nag at the most inconvenient times? Seems Tim is at ease, though.
Ally this is the best stuff I have ever read from you. I so love this story it’s gritty and WOW I don’t know it just seems on another plane. You really have stepped up your game her. Good job.
Another great one AllyE. I really do like this story and the good thing is I started it from the beginning. So happy they talked about what happened, Bette was letting it eat her up inside. Tina is a very wise young woman. Have a great weekend with Cheryl. PPS
That was awesome and good to see Bette open up to Tina and now thing are ok, love the B&T’s talk. Tim seem ok now. Please post more, thanks!
Yaaay! You did it again! You really made B&T work on the demons that were threatening their relationship and went through the whole nightmare till they could see the light at the end of the tunnel. Gorgeous chapter! Now, dear friend, enjoy your weekend immensely and misbehave with C. You both absolutely deserve your time together. We won’t bother you at all. You have given us a lot this week and you should be focused now on your other half. Big Hs & Kisses – Lucero & Marsha
Gosh I really like this story with his different loops and marvellous dialogues. Thanks and looking forward for more.
I truly truly love your story. This chapter’s grrreat!!
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You’re writing of Bette’s fears and Tina reassuring her was so right… And I love the Bette/Tim chat. I’ve never liked Jenny either so I’m just glad she’s going away…
yay!!!! god, I really enjoyed this chap my queen! You are just a genius with fan fic. I’m glad B&T finally talked about that night and about B’s fears. Ok, talk to you soon. Take care and have a nice and lovely weekend.
This was a pretty emotional chapter. Hopefully B&T can move on and there will be no drama involving Pistol Pete (lol). Loved the chat between Bette and Tim and LMFAO@Francesca for setting Jenny’s manushit, er, manuscript on fire! XD
WOW what fantastic chapter!! love how tina takes control and helps bette work though her fears!!! even better when bette went and chatted with tim…