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Let it be – chapter five
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“Thank you – what did you ask me before?”
“Okay –close your eyes “
Bette obeyed and Tina rested her hand on Bette’s waist.
“Describe the other night to me “
Bette’s eyes flew open but Tina stroked her brow reassuring her. Bette closed her eyes and let out a sigh
“What I remember – I remember the whole freaking thing “
“We will see “Tina replied softly.
“He was kissing you – I see him kissing you “
“And I was looking at you and I was focused on your lips- your sweet and loving lips and I was thinking of your lips tasting me and sucking me. All the way through Bette I watched you and I fantasised about you “
“I keep seeing him enter you – he slipped in so easily “
“That I don’t remember – he took several attempts and it was pissing him off. When he entered me I thought about the one and only time you used a strap on. We giggled so much it hurt “
Bette smiled “Yeah – crazy eh “
“Do you remember that time when Alice showed us all those dental dams? “
Bette snorted “And we unwrapped one and Dana came in late and asked if it was cling film “
Tina smiled – this was slowly drawing Bette out of remembering the whole event in such a negative way. It might not work but it was worth a try.
“What else do you see when you picture what happened?”
“I see him coming “
“At that moment did you see me come too?”
“No “
“I have never been able to fake coming. I have pissed you off a few times when despite your best efforts I have remained unsatisfied – I-DID-NOT-COME Bette. I did it to get pregnant – so I can carry and give birth to a child that you and I will bring up as our own. If I am pregnant how are you going to view what happened – are you going to not be able to love the baby because of how he or she was conceived? “
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I like when Bette opens up and I like seeing Tina comfort her. Good thing that Tim doesn’t seem to be all too upset at Bette. Jenny is gone…yay!
Ally ummmm just WOW, what else can say:)PPS
I agree with everyone else Ally. I think the talk between B&T and the way Tina used to allay Bette’s fears were just brillant. I suppose that awaited weekend with your loved one has inspired you a great deal, cause even though I always love your writing, I really think that you’ve outdone yourself with this chapter. Well done! Now, don’t we all wish that the end of Jennny Schecter had been as simple and quick as boarding a plan to Whogivesafuck… Thanks for a great update!
This made me happy. Glad Bette both shared her fears with Tina..and really apologized to Tim. I hope you give Tim a nice girl in this fic. I actually really liked him on the show. PPS.
Fantastic, Ally. Love how you’ve addressed Bette’s insecurities and allowed her to accept Tina’s help in disarming them. I’ve enjoyed all your chapters this week and hope that you enjoy your weekend!
that was great, i loved them talking and reconnecting, it was so lovely and sweet, thanks Ally you are amazing honey, post soon.All my love.
This was nice…love when Tina takes charge and Bette listens to her
Oh Ally, you wrote the story that is every Tibette lovers dream and every Jenny haters dream too. very very lovely talk between Tina and Bette., Enjoy your time with your sweetie.
Oh my… I so loved Tina right now. She did a great job calming Bette… Grats Ally… ;)
So does that really put it to rest? Or will it hide in the shadows to nag at the most inconvenient times? Seems Tim is at ease, though.
Ally this is the best stuff I have ever read from you. I so love this story it’s gritty and WOW I don’t know it just seems on another plane. You really have stepped up your game her. Good job.
Another great one AllyE. I really do like this story and the good thing is I started it from the beginning. So happy they talked about what happened, Bette was letting it eat her up inside. Tina is a very wise young woman. Have a great weekend with Cheryl. PPS
That was awesome and good to see Bette open up to Tina and now thing are ok, love the B&T’s talk. Tim seem ok now. Please post more, thanks!
Yaaay! You did it again! You really made B&T work on the demons that were threatening their relationship and went through the whole nightmare till they could see the light at the end of the tunnel. Gorgeous chapter! Now, dear friend, enjoy your weekend immensely and misbehave with C. You both absolutely deserve your time together. We won’t bother you at all. You have given us a lot this week and you should be focused now on your other half. Big Hs & Kisses – Lucero & Marsha
Gosh I really like this story with his different loops and marvellous dialogues. Thanks and looking forward for more.
I truly truly love your story. This chapter’s grrreat!!
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You’re writing of Bette’s fears and Tina reassuring her was so right… And I love the Bette/Tim chat. I’ve never liked Jenny either so I’m just glad she’s going away…
yay!!!! god, I really enjoyed this chap my queen! You are just a genius with fan fic. I’m glad B&T finally talked about that night and about B’s fears. Ok, talk to you soon. Take care and have a nice and lovely weekend.
This was a pretty emotional chapter. Hopefully B&T can move on and there will be no drama involving Pistol Pete (lol). Loved the chat between Bette and Tim and LMFAO@Francesca for setting Jenny’s manushit, er, manuscript on fire! XD
WOW what fantastic chapter!! love how tina takes control and helps bette work though her fears!!! even better when bette went and chatted with tim…