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Let it be – chapter five
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“No “
“So Einstein Elizabeth Porter – what does that tell you?”
“That you love me and you don’t want anyone else “
“Thank you- that is the correct answer “Tina kissed Bette’s brow “Babe – please stop torturing yourself. You keep talking about me wanting a family – yes I do but I want a family. I don’t want to be a single mom – for me a family is two adults who love each other and who are committed to one another. That’s us – not me and Eric or me and some freaking random man. “
Tina stroked Bette’s hair while she thought about how to placate Bette’s over active imagination.
“Tell me what goes through your head about the other night “
Bette nestled closer into Tina’s embrace.
“I’ll tell you something first. When we started dating I was pretty bowled over by how much I was attracted to you but I was concerned about you being straight”
“That was because I hadn’t met you “
“One night we went for a walk on the beach – it was warm and we held hands – remember ?”
“Yes “
“Well we sat on the beach and watched the waves. First of all I almost never walked on the beach with other women – I just didn’t get close enough. And when I did and we sat on the beach I would always hold the woman. When you and I were on the beach you held me. You held me like you are holding me now. And I felt so safe and happy – I wasn’t twitching about anything – I was just happy with you and very sure that you and I were going to be different. I don’t let my guard down with many people – probably count them on one hand –but I trust you more than anyone else. You see a side to me that no one else ever has or ever will – that scares me and that’s when I do freaking out type things like last night “
“I know that honey – I treasure that side to you that no one but me sees. When someone who has been through as much as you have and you let one person in control of your heart – well that’s one of the biggest honours anyone has ever given me – I treasure your heart Bette Porter. I have never played fast and loose with it and I don’t intend to start now “
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I like when Bette opens up and I like seeing Tina comfort her. Good thing that Tim doesn’t seem to be all too upset at Bette. Jenny is gone…yay!
Ally ummmm just WOW, what else can say:)PPS
I agree with everyone else Ally. I think the talk between B&T and the way Tina used to allay Bette’s fears were just brillant. I suppose that awaited weekend with your loved one has inspired you a great deal, cause even though I always love your writing, I really think that you’ve outdone yourself with this chapter. Well done! Now, don’t we all wish that the end of Jennny Schecter had been as simple and quick as boarding a plan to Whogivesafuck… Thanks for a great update!
This made me happy. Glad Bette both shared her fears with Tina..and really apologized to Tim. I hope you give Tim a nice girl in this fic. I actually really liked him on the show. PPS.
Fantastic, Ally. Love how you’ve addressed Bette’s insecurities and allowed her to accept Tina’s help in disarming them. I’ve enjoyed all your chapters this week and hope that you enjoy your weekend!
that was great, i loved them talking and reconnecting, it was so lovely and sweet, thanks Ally you are amazing honey, post soon.All my love.
This was nice…love when Tina takes charge and Bette listens to her
Oh Ally, you wrote the story that is every Tibette lovers dream and every Jenny haters dream too. very very lovely talk between Tina and Bette., Enjoy your time with your sweetie.
Oh my… I so loved Tina right now. She did a great job calming Bette… Grats Ally… ;)
So does that really put it to rest? Or will it hide in the shadows to nag at the most inconvenient times? Seems Tim is at ease, though.
Ally this is the best stuff I have ever read from you. I so love this story it’s gritty and WOW I don’t know it just seems on another plane. You really have stepped up your game her. Good job.
Another great one AllyE. I really do like this story and the good thing is I started it from the beginning. So happy they talked about what happened, Bette was letting it eat her up inside. Tina is a very wise young woman. Have a great weekend with Cheryl. PPS
That was awesome and good to see Bette open up to Tina and now thing are ok, love the B&T’s talk. Tim seem ok now. Please post more, thanks!
Yaaay! You did it again! You really made B&T work on the demons that were threatening their relationship and went through the whole nightmare till they could see the light at the end of the tunnel. Gorgeous chapter! Now, dear friend, enjoy your weekend immensely and misbehave with C. You both absolutely deserve your time together. We won’t bother you at all. You have given us a lot this week and you should be focused now on your other half. Big Hs & Kisses – Lucero & Marsha
Gosh I really like this story with his different loops and marvellous dialogues. Thanks and looking forward for more.
I truly truly love your story. This chapter’s grrreat!!
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You’re writing of Bette’s fears and Tina reassuring her was so right… And I love the Bette/Tim chat. I’ve never liked Jenny either so I’m just glad she’s going away…
yay!!!! god, I really enjoyed this chap my queen! You are just a genius with fan fic. I’m glad B&T finally talked about that night and about B’s fears. Ok, talk to you soon. Take care and have a nice and lovely weekend.
This was a pretty emotional chapter. Hopefully B&T can move on and there will be no drama involving Pistol Pete (lol). Loved the chat between Bette and Tim and LMFAO@Francesca for setting Jenny’s manushit, er, manuscript on fire! XD
WOW what fantastic chapter!! love how tina takes control and helps bette work though her fears!!! even better when bette went and chatted with tim…