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Let it be – chapter five
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“Has it ever occurred to you in your ivory tower that what I want is to be with you? The one thing that I would change about you if I could it would be your annoying fucking habit of assuming that you know what is best for me without even asking me. I didn’t go to University or have all your fancy pieces of art but I am a strong, intelligent and capable woman in my own right. I know my own mind and I wish you freaking well accepted that “
“Sorry “Bette said in a small voice
Tina sighed “I know that you mean it for the best but you don’t know what is in my head – only I do. I wasn’t brainwashed into leaving Eric – I left him because I fell in love with you. I don’t want a man as a lover any more than you do “
“A man would be a better family “
“NO – NO Bette – please stop doing that. Okay –Eric – he was a lawyer and he was well off and he loved me even though he was an ass-hole at times. He was the safe option – he was the option my family wanted me to take. It would have been safe and easy and comfort and it would have been the death of me. I would have been as bored as fuck. You swept me off my feet – I felt so much for you and when we became lovers – hell man it was just fucking amazing “
Bette accepted a tissue and rubbed her eyes.
“You want to know how it was for me with Eric. I have tried so hard all the years we have been lovers not to talk about my ex’s but you have built my heterosexuality into a huge fucking monolith when it was a pack of cards. “
“You were happy with him “
“Okay – let’s do this logically. I am basically a monogamous gal from the sticks. I don’t do cheating – I was with Eric when I met you. If I had been happy and in love with him – then I would have resisted you. I didn’t – I dumped him and fell into bed with this beautiful and amazing woman. I have been with you for over seven years – during that time I have been hit on by a lot of women and a fair few men as well. Have I dumped you and fallen into bed with them? “
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I like when Bette opens up and I like seeing Tina comfort her. Good thing that Tim doesn’t seem to be all too upset at Bette. Jenny is gone…yay!
Ally ummmm just WOW, what else can say:)PPS
I agree with everyone else Ally. I think the talk between B&T and the way Tina used to allay Bette’s fears were just brillant. I suppose that awaited weekend with your loved one has inspired you a great deal, cause even though I always love your writing, I really think that you’ve outdone yourself with this chapter. Well done! Now, don’t we all wish that the end of Jennny Schecter had been as simple and quick as boarding a plan to Whogivesafuck… Thanks for a great update!
This made me happy. Glad Bette both shared her fears with Tina..and really apologized to Tim. I hope you give Tim a nice girl in this fic. I actually really liked him on the show. PPS.
Fantastic, Ally. Love how you’ve addressed Bette’s insecurities and allowed her to accept Tina’s help in disarming them. I’ve enjoyed all your chapters this week and hope that you enjoy your weekend!
that was great, i loved them talking and reconnecting, it was so lovely and sweet, thanks Ally you are amazing honey, post soon.All my love.
This was nice…love when Tina takes charge and Bette listens to her
Oh Ally, you wrote the story that is every Tibette lovers dream and every Jenny haters dream too. very very lovely talk between Tina and Bette., Enjoy your time with your sweetie.
Oh my… I so loved Tina right now. She did a great job calming Bette… Grats Ally… ;)
So does that really put it to rest? Or will it hide in the shadows to nag at the most inconvenient times? Seems Tim is at ease, though.
Ally this is the best stuff I have ever read from you. I so love this story it’s gritty and WOW I don’t know it just seems on another plane. You really have stepped up your game her. Good job.
Another great one AllyE. I really do like this story and the good thing is I started it from the beginning. So happy they talked about what happened, Bette was letting it eat her up inside. Tina is a very wise young woman. Have a great weekend with Cheryl. PPS
That was awesome and good to see Bette open up to Tina and now thing are ok, love the B&T’s talk. Tim seem ok now. Please post more, thanks!
Yaaay! You did it again! You really made B&T work on the demons that were threatening their relationship and went through the whole nightmare till they could see the light at the end of the tunnel. Gorgeous chapter! Now, dear friend, enjoy your weekend immensely and misbehave with C. You both absolutely deserve your time together. We won’t bother you at all. You have given us a lot this week and you should be focused now on your other half. Big Hs & Kisses – Lucero & Marsha
Gosh I really like this story with his different loops and marvellous dialogues. Thanks and looking forward for more.
I truly truly love your story. This chapter’s grrreat!!
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You’re writing of Bette’s fears and Tina reassuring her was so right… And I love the Bette/Tim chat. I’ve never liked Jenny either so I’m just glad she’s going away…
yay!!!! god, I really enjoyed this chap my queen! You are just a genius with fan fic. I’m glad B&T finally talked about that night and about B’s fears. Ok, talk to you soon. Take care and have a nice and lovely weekend.
This was a pretty emotional chapter. Hopefully B&T can move on and there will be no drama involving Pistol Pete (lol). Loved the chat between Bette and Tim and LMFAO@Francesca for setting Jenny’s manushit, er, manuscript on fire! XD
WOW what fantastic chapter!! love how tina takes control and helps bette work though her fears!!! even better when bette went and chatted with tim…