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Let it Ride- Chapter 13
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Bette knew enough about Helena after their recent interaction to add that she was a loyal, determined friend to Alice and a phenomenal kisser.
Grinning in a satisfied manner, Bette decided that all of that was more than enough to pique her curiosity. Still, a little further investigation couldn’t hurt.
Leaning forward, she brushed her lips across Helena’s neck; smiling when she heard the other girl gasp in her sleep.
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In the next room, Alice’s light snoring caused Dana to wake up. The tennis player smiled as her vision focused on the familiar head of dark hair that was cradled on her outstretched arm; finding herself much happier than she’d been in the last few days.
Placing a light kiss on the back of Alice’s neck, Dana spent a few blissful moments snuggling with her sleeping girlfriend before she gently pulled her arm back and climbed from the bed.
Moving silently to the TV, she bent down and turned off the VCR and monitor, grinning when Alice mumbled, "I was watching that."
Dana smiled and pulled the blanket up around Alice, muttering, "Sure, you were."
As Dana was padding toward the kitchen she walked past Helena’s bedroom; speeding up when she heard a low moan from within.
Safely inside the kitchen, she gathered Alice’s medicine and a fresh glass of juice before heating some soup for Alice on the stove.
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"What the hell are you doing, Alice?"
The tone of Dana’s voice caused Alice to pause in the middle of trying to climb out of bed. Looking up guiltily, Alice seemed torn between whether to fall back to bed in defeat or press on with trying to get out of it. Hovering indecisively between the two in a comical squatting motion proved to much for Alice and her body made the decision for her.
Landing on the bed with a tired squeak, Alice admitted sheepishly, "I was bored?"
Dana sighed and put the tray she was carrying down on the piano bench as she moved forward to help Alice get resituated in the bed.
"Alice, you heard the doctor. In a couple of days you can wander to your heart’s content but for now you have to stay in bed."
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i love this story so much great work!!!!
Thank you for posting earlier. I think there will be a hard cure for my raccoon eyes. I’ll use any excuse not to go to bed. I love staying up late and refuse to sleep until the sun comes up. Talking about bed, “The bed isn’t as fun as it usually is.” I just don’t know how you come up with lines like. I could not stop chuckling. I personally detest people lecturing me while I eat. And there you were, allowing D to reprimand A while A was enjoying her soup. I am sorry and yet I couldn’t stop laughing, “I can’t really remember. The head injury.” A could be such a smart aleck and “karma will get me.” Now they really acted like an old couple with the wife yelling at the husband. It was great though how A quickly turned the situation around. LMAO. So f*cking cute. B & H were very hot. A had to open her big mouth. Now the one week without sex could become 2 or 3. This is another great chapter. btw, I finished Goldrun15’s “Crossroad” today. I totally agree with you about “a natural progression.” Now I understand and sympathize more with Lara. While I was reading it, I could feel her pain. Goldrun15, like you said, did an amazing job. I’ll get to tiff_duke later. Thank you again for telling me about them. Good night.
OOOHHH!!!Who was the movie star??? Anyways, Bette and Helena are steaming things up..I didn’t think that they would be together, but I’m glad that you put the two Alpha ladies together!!! Dana really made Alice feel a little sad after snapping on her just a little, but it was for her own good and she needed to know that she should listen to her body for now on. Anyways, I can’t wait to see what you have in store next, and I’m glad that you continue on to enjoy my lovely story =) Thanks and PPS!!!!!!
Alice the stud, that must be one pretty hot, pretty good kisser of a movie star. hhhmm wonder who though… And it would be nice to think that it was “the” best writers in the city but the people in there were people in college like me or people slightly older than us. Our bowling “coach” used to be a high school english teacher, she’s teaching journalism, history and economics now. She’s pretty smart having to do all that and sometimes she coaches bowling part time just for the fun of it. She got me another group of teammates for the writing stuff. One of whom turned out to be a competitor of mine in bowling we didn’t like each other much before. In fact we sort of hated each other but she ended up holding my hand before we did the broadcasting hihihihi. Nuff about me, LOL I’m also very into the hellcat picasso lovin, and jealous Dana is so cute btw. thanks again for posting :)
Okay, so who is the “her” that Studly Alice made out with? Or did I just miss that entirely? Also, the whole “concussed” thing made me go aww. I heart this and I heart you for posting so damn often, even though you make me look like a damn slacker. And thanks for the (sort of) shoutout!
Hi there!! Well, I’ve been a silent reader of your story until now (sorry!). I usually read anything regarding Danish… but I’ve jonesed for just a few stories; and yours is definitely one of them! Thanks so much for this daily dose (I wouldn’t mind to OD on it!!).
Please realize that I read and savor every chapter — even if I don’t get comments written before you post the next one. Great job with Belena! I know you were concerned about how to handle it and I think you hit it just right. I hope Dana isn’t too upset about the movie star. They weren’t dating at that time. Although I do find Jealous!Dana to be quite hot. Hmmmm… Maybe Dana needs some groupies. ;-D I’m glad Alice is OK but I think Dana let her off too lightly. Can’t wait to see what happens when Dana sees Frank again. BTW: Harking back to an earlier author’s note… None of your chapters have been threadbare. I love the dialog. It advances both the characters and the plot. Thanks again for the great story!