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Let it Ride- Chapter 13
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Scowling, Alice said peevishly, "The bed isn’t as fun as it usually is. And what if I have to pee?"
Dana moved back to get the tray and placed it gently in Alice’s lap as she said, "Tell me and I’ll help you get to the bathroom."
Dana knew that Alice could probably make the short distance to the bathroom without her help but Dr. Lennox had stressed that dizziness could be a problem for Alice in the following days and his gentle lecture had scared Dana into extreme cautiousness.
Alice’s displeasure was forgotten as she looked down at the tray Dana had brought her. Her rumbling stomach had been part of the original impetus to get out of bed and walk to the kitchen. Looking up, she smiled warmly at Dana and said, "Thank you, baby."
Dana watched Alice eat hungrily and took it as the perfect chance to scold the musician for her foolhardy disregard for her own health.
Alice was unaware of the fact that she was about to be reprimanded and continued to shovel the hot, delicious soup into her mouth.
The tennis player said forthrightly, "Alice, I need to talk to you."
The musician looked up curiously and replied through a full mouth, "Can you hand me my glasses then?"
Dana leaned over the bedside table and eventually located Alice’s specs; handing them over to Alice before questioning tersely, "Better?"
Alice nodded happily and the tennis player continued, "Alice, you promised me something before I left. Do you remember what you said?"
The musician felt an unpleasant blush rise to her cheeks and she suddenly felt as though she had an inkling as to what "it" Shane had been referring to earlier.
She replied to Dana’s question in a small voice, "I think I may have said something in regard to possibly not going on stage if I felt sick. But I can’t really remember. The head injury, you know."
Dana sat down cross-legged across from Alice and said sternly, "You’re closer than you think, babe. You explicitly told me that if you knew that you weren’t up to it, you would cancel the show."
Alice stuttered, "Ah. So I did. So I did."
The athlete continued to gaze at Alice in a displeased fashion and said, "You did. You promised me, Alice. And then you went and did it anyway. And see where it got you?"
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i love this story so much great work!!!!
Thank you for posting earlier. I think there will be a hard cure for my raccoon eyes. I’ll use any excuse not to go to bed. I love staying up late and refuse to sleep until the sun comes up. Talking about bed, “The bed isn’t as fun as it usually is.” I just don’t know how you come up with lines like. I could not stop chuckling. I personally detest people lecturing me while I eat. And there you were, allowing D to reprimand A while A was enjoying her soup. I am sorry and yet I couldn’t stop laughing, “I can’t really remember. The head injury.” A could be such a smart aleck and “karma will get me.” Now they really acted like an old couple with the wife yelling at the husband. It was great though how A quickly turned the situation around. LMAO. So f*cking cute. B & H were very hot. A had to open her big mouth. Now the one week without sex could become 2 or 3. This is another great chapter. btw, I finished Goldrun15’s “Crossroad” today. I totally agree with you about “a natural progression.” Now I understand and sympathize more with Lara. While I was reading it, I could feel her pain. Goldrun15, like you said, did an amazing job. I’ll get to tiff_duke later. Thank you again for telling me about them. Good night.
OOOHHH!!!Who was the movie star??? Anyways, Bette and Helena are steaming things up..I didn’t think that they would be together, but I’m glad that you put the two Alpha ladies together!!! Dana really made Alice feel a little sad after snapping on her just a little, but it was for her own good and she needed to know that she should listen to her body for now on. Anyways, I can’t wait to see what you have in store next, and I’m glad that you continue on to enjoy my lovely story =) Thanks and PPS!!!!!!
Alice the stud, that must be one pretty hot, pretty good kisser of a movie star. hhhmm wonder who though… And it would be nice to think that it was “the” best writers in the city but the people in there were people in college like me or people slightly older than us. Our bowling “coach” used to be a high school english teacher, she’s teaching journalism, history and economics now. She’s pretty smart having to do all that and sometimes she coaches bowling part time just for the fun of it. She got me another group of teammates for the writing stuff. One of whom turned out to be a competitor of mine in bowling we didn’t like each other much before. In fact we sort of hated each other but she ended up holding my hand before we did the broadcasting hihihihi. Nuff about me, LOL I’m also very into the hellcat picasso lovin, and jealous Dana is so cute btw. thanks again for posting :)
Okay, so who is the “her” that Studly Alice made out with? Or did I just miss that entirely? Also, the whole “concussed” thing made me go aww. I heart this and I heart you for posting so damn often, even though you make me look like a damn slacker. And thanks for the (sort of) shoutout!
Hi there!! Well, I’ve been a silent reader of your story until now (sorry!). I usually read anything regarding Danish… but I’ve jonesed for just a few stories; and yours is definitely one of them! Thanks so much for this daily dose (I wouldn’t mind to OD on it!!).
Please realize that I read and savor every chapter — even if I don’t get comments written before you post the next one. Great job with Belena! I know you were concerned about how to handle it and I think you hit it just right. I hope Dana isn’t too upset about the movie star. They weren’t dating at that time. Although I do find Jealous!Dana to be quite hot. Hmmmm… Maybe Dana needs some groupies. ;-D I’m glad Alice is OK but I think Dana let her off too lightly. Can’t wait to see what happens when Dana sees Frank again. BTW: Harking back to an earlier author’s note… None of your chapters have been threadbare. I love the dialog. It advances both the characters and the plot. Thanks again for the great story!