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Let it Ride- Chapter 4
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Alice definitively closed the pizza box that sat atop the coffee table and leaned back onto the couch with a satisfied sigh.
Eyeing a blissfully full Helena and a suprememly sated Dana, Alice said happily, "Job well done, ladies. Two pizzas gone in just under forty five minutes."
Dana groaned and shook her head mournfully, "I’m so unpleasantly full."
Helena opened her eyes and said from her chair, "Unbutton your jeans, Dana. It always helps."
Dana had to laugh at such lowbrow advice coming from Helena. Alice grinned at Helena’s comment and said, "You’ll learn soon, Dane. You’ve gotta get some eatin’ pants."
Dana’s eyebrows rose and she repeated sardonically, "Eatin’ pants? Do I even want to know?"
Alice slowly rolled onto her side, sighing as she got into a more comfortable position, before she stated, "Pants with elastic waists. Or drawstrings. Ideally pajama bottoms or scrubs."
Helena lifted her shirt up just enough to reveal a swath of tanned, flat abdomen and a loosely knotted tie and she said, "See? Drawstrings."
Alice didn’t need to lift her shirt, Dana could tell by the polar bears in underwear on her electric blue pants that they were pajama bottoms.
Dana nodded and tried not too look overly pleased when Alice sprawled a little more and her feet snuggled in under Dana’s thighs.
Helena continued to shift channels aimlessly; sighing dramatically with each one she passed. Dana and Alice exchanged looks and stifled laughter at Helena’s theatrics.
It wasn’t more than a few moments later when they heard her soft snores. They both looked over to see that Helena had fallen asleep on her side, with one leg hanging over the edge of the chair.
Alice pretended to be disappointed, saying seriously, "What a lightweight."
Dana prodded Alice gently and questioned, "Don’t you think we should get her to her room?"
Alice feigned shock at the very idea and she jerked her head in Helena’s direction questioningly. "Move the Incredible Hulk? She’s like six feet tall, Dana."
Dana frowned and said sternly, "Alice, she’s five- eight at most and can’t weigh more than 130. I didn’t know you were that averse to phsyical activity."
Alice raised her eyebrows at the challenge, only to be even more taken aback when Dana lifted her own brows and continued pointedly, "It doesn’t bode well."
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frip may I say that I really like this story. I am not really into the Danish couple, even though I liked them, but this is a well done chapter, love it!!!
Okay that last scene was hot and sweet at the same time. I love Shane as she had second thoughts with eating the lobster. Alice’s remark about Helena being The Incredible Hulk was funny. Alice and Dana are f’n hot and adorable in your story. And also, you’re a great writer and never stop writing. PPS.
This story just gets better and better!! Those two are so damn adorable and hot and sexy!! I love what you’re doing with my beloved Danish so just keep it up. And I’ll keep reading.
OMG, you are writing faster than I can read. But I am not complaining that your post twice a day. I am actually elated to be able to read more of your wonderful story. My concern is Danish fiction drought. In late July and early August, there were days when there wasn’t any Danish fics at all. So I thought if you could spread out the posts a bit, at least there will be at least one Danish post a day or 2. Believe me, I too can never have enough Danish. It is just a suggestion. You are the author and please feel free to post whenever. As for this chapter, I absolutely love it. Helena is underrated on the show. I appreciate her genuine friendship with Alice. The show could have elaborate further. Helena is generous, caring, refined and most of all honest. You are right on the dot with those two BBFs. As for Ms. Dana, I was shocked that she made her move on Alice in this chapter. I did not expect Dana to be so forward with Alice in the Cabana. All along I was wondering when they would start making out seriously. I love your humor and the story is simply fantastic. I hope you will go with a happier Danish version. Although a little angst here and there will be all right too. But definitely have a happy ending. We had enough nastiness on the show. Thank you again for writing. I will be waiting for your next post. p.s. It took me over 45 mins to write this comment. I just don’t know how you writers do the things you do. Hats off to all you writers.
there are like 45,000 things i want to say about this. this is so cute, we haven’t had a new danish story in awhile, so i am glad you finally rented the seasons and got the lword bug. but most importantly – i’m glad you decided to write. i love the progression of the story – it is very natural. also the interaction between all of the characters, especially alice and dana is so natural as well. and the story and the dialogue are so very witty and smart. my favorite line was in the 2nd post (i think) with the “you just spelled cosy with an s you dirty brit” or whatever. so funny. i have lots of british friends from work and that is so typical of our conversations. lastly – obviously you are a classic rock fan. love it. and i love all the led zeppelin references. all in all – great job, thanks for posting so many, that are so long, so quickly. dana and alice are super cute and so is this story. i think i will reread it now. post soon – cheers mate.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO you did it again just left it and i really really want to keep reading! you had this posted before i came home from work and for that i love you!lol i think this story is great and i hope you continue it and post it as quick as you have been!
Danish stories are few and dr between. This is brilliant though. ADx
Danish stories are few and far between. This is brilliant though. ADx
Another great chapter – thanks. I love how you’re portraying both Alice and Dana in this story and I agree their interaction comes over as very natural. As far as which direction to go in, a little angst is fine but please don’t go too far down the angst path. We’ve got reruns going on in the UK at the moment of season 3, so we need lots of happy Danish to counteract the sadness!
nice… I like your story a lot! U get a five star rate! Dana doesn’t seem to shy in this one, and I’m loving it