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Let it Ride- Chapter 4
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When Dana emerged from her shower after about fifteen minutes, she found a much more relaxed version of Alice than the one she’d just left.
Tossing her things on the piano bench, Dana climbed onto the bed beside Alice, pulling her knees up to her chest and wrapping her arms around them.
Alice started to move the guitar but Dana smiled and said, "No, can I listen to you for a while?"
Alice smiled, pleased by Dana’s request and not truly ready to stop playing for the night. "Any requests?"
Dana grinned, biting her lip adorably and scrunching her brow.
Alice said decidedly, "You’re gonna try and stump me, but I warn you Dane, that it can’t be done."
Dana looked skeptical and Alice assured her with a grin, "My musical knowledge is unlimited, babe. Try me."
Dana said, "Fine. Play me – play me _________."
Alice frowned. "I don’t know that one."
Smirking at the look on Alice’s face, Dana said, "Do you want to try again? A bonus round?"
Alice reached out and flicked Dana’s bare kneecap. She couldn’t help but notice the tanned, smooth skin of Dana’s legs. Dana was laughing at Alice’s playful gesture when she realized that Alice’s smile was rather dazed.
Letting her fingers rest against the outside of Dana’s ankle, Alice lightly stroked them upward until she was back at Dana’s knee. Dana was watching Alice’s face with wonder and she gasped when Alice asked softly, "Raincheck on the bonus round?"
Dana nodded mutely, leaning forward until she could almost touch their lips together. "Raincheck," she agreed.
Alice leaned forward to bridge the tiny distance between them, the neck of the guitar clutched in her hand as she wound the other around Dana’s waist, drawing her closer.
The kiss was as slow and deliberate as their first had started. Dana half fell onto Alice, her hands tangling in Alice’s hair and clutching handfuls of Alice’s t-shirt.
Alice was in a state of unparalleled uncoordination. The guitar felt heavy in her hands and she was so involved in meeting Dana’s lips and tongue with her own that she couldn’t quite locate the command that would tell her brain to drop the damned thing.
Dana’s weight was pushing her down against the mattress and Alice reveled in the feeling of the tennis player’s body wedged so comfortably against her own. The sound of the guitar hitting the wooden floor with a muffled thump and accompanying discordant twang of strings seemed to shake Dana out of her hypnosis and she pulled away from Alice slightly, confusion written in her eyes.
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frip may I say that I really like this story. I am not really into the Danish couple, even though I liked them, but this is a well done chapter, love it!!!
Okay that last scene was hot and sweet at the same time. I love Shane as she had second thoughts with eating the lobster. Alice’s remark about Helena being The Incredible Hulk was funny. Alice and Dana are f’n hot and adorable in your story. And also, you’re a great writer and never stop writing. PPS.
This story just gets better and better!! Those two are so damn adorable and hot and sexy!! I love what you’re doing with my beloved Danish so just keep it up. And I’ll keep reading.
OMG, you are writing faster than I can read. But I am not complaining that your post twice a day. I am actually elated to be able to read more of your wonderful story. My concern is Danish fiction drought. In late July and early August, there were days when there wasn’t any Danish fics at all. So I thought if you could spread out the posts a bit, at least there will be at least one Danish post a day or 2. Believe me, I too can never have enough Danish. It is just a suggestion. You are the author and please feel free to post whenever. As for this chapter, I absolutely love it. Helena is underrated on the show. I appreciate her genuine friendship with Alice. The show could have elaborate further. Helena is generous, caring, refined and most of all honest. You are right on the dot with those two BBFs. As for Ms. Dana, I was shocked that she made her move on Alice in this chapter. I did not expect Dana to be so forward with Alice in the Cabana. All along I was wondering when they would start making out seriously. I love your humor and the story is simply fantastic. I hope you will go with a happier Danish version. Although a little angst here and there will be all right too. But definitely have a happy ending. We had enough nastiness on the show. Thank you again for writing. I will be waiting for your next post. p.s. It took me over 45 mins to write this comment. I just don’t know how you writers do the things you do. Hats off to all you writers.
there are like 45,000 things i want to say about this. this is so cute, we haven’t had a new danish story in awhile, so i am glad you finally rented the seasons and got the lword bug. but most importantly – i’m glad you decided to write. i love the progression of the story – it is very natural. also the interaction between all of the characters, especially alice and dana is so natural as well. and the story and the dialogue are so very witty and smart. my favorite line was in the 2nd post (i think) with the “you just spelled cosy with an s you dirty brit” or whatever. so funny. i have lots of british friends from work and that is so typical of our conversations. lastly – obviously you are a classic rock fan. love it. and i love all the led zeppelin references. all in all – great job, thanks for posting so many, that are so long, so quickly. dana and alice are super cute and so is this story. i think i will reread it now. post soon – cheers mate.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO you did it again just left it and i really really want to keep reading! you had this posted before i came home from work and for that i love you!lol i think this story is great and i hope you continue it and post it as quick as you have been!
Danish stories are few and dr between. This is brilliant though. ADx
Danish stories are few and far between. This is brilliant though. ADx
Another great chapter – thanks. I love how you’re portraying both Alice and Dana in this story and I agree their interaction comes over as very natural. As far as which direction to go in, a little angst is fine but please don’t go too far down the angst path. We’ve got reruns going on in the UK at the moment of season 3, so we need lots of happy Danish to counteract the sadness!
nice… I like your story a lot! U get a five star rate! Dana doesn’t seem to shy in this one, and I’m loving it