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Let it Ride- Chapter 4
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Alice’s mouth fell open and for once she was speechless. Was Dana suggesting what it sounded like she was suggesting? So far they had only kissed, which wasn’t altogether shocking for the short amount of time they’d known each other. Yet for Alice, most of her "relationships" had already begun and ended after a week. Bette was a notable exception, of course. Was Dana suggesting that she was ready for the next level?
Alice found herself unsettlingly nervous at the very idea. Dana had already moved toward Helena and it seemed to Alice that she hadn’t noticed her strange reaction so Alice soundlessly heaved herself up and went to assist Dana.
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Dana took the pajamas that Alice handed her and smiled as Alice looked around for the contact case that was perpetually MIA. Walking up to the piano, Dana found the little green
case and stretched out her hand to Alice, saying, "Hey, here you go."
Alice shook her head in frustration and said, "Thanks. I gotta start putting this is in the same place."
Dana grinned and agreed that if might be a good idea. "Listen, Al, do you mind if I grab a quick shower?"
Alice looked up sharply, seemingly alarmed at the concept of Dana showering. Probably because it involved Dana being naked less than twenty feet away.
Dana watched Alice’s face with growing curiosity while Alice moved to sit down on the bed. "Sure, I don’t mind at all. Grab a quick shower. Shower away!"
Dana said strangely, "Oookay. Well, I will then. You okay?"
Alice slipped her glasses onto her nose and said cheerfully, "Me? Yep, I’m okay. Great."
Alice groaned inwardly as Dana slipped by her and closed the bathroom door. After a moment, Alice heard the shower turn on and to her dismay, it only made her more nervous. What should she do? Was Dana trying to seduce her? Did she just feel like she needed a refreshing blast of water and a good shampoo?
Alice frantically reached for her guitar and sat down in the corner of the bed. She spent a few minutes quietly strumming and as usual, it calmed her down. Unless Alice allowed herself to get carried away by playing power ballads or other raucous music, playing the guitar generally made her feel much more calm and tranquil.
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frip may I say that I really like this story. I am not really into the Danish couple, even though I liked them, but this is a well done chapter, love it!!!
Okay that last scene was hot and sweet at the same time. I love Shane as she had second thoughts with eating the lobster. Alice’s remark about Helena being The Incredible Hulk was funny. Alice and Dana are f’n hot and adorable in your story. And also, you’re a great writer and never stop writing. PPS.
This story just gets better and better!! Those two are so damn adorable and hot and sexy!! I love what you’re doing with my beloved Danish so just keep it up. And I’ll keep reading.
OMG, you are writing faster than I can read. But I am not complaining that your post twice a day. I am actually elated to be able to read more of your wonderful story. My concern is Danish fiction drought. In late July and early August, there were days when there wasn’t any Danish fics at all. So I thought if you could spread out the posts a bit, at least there will be at least one Danish post a day or 2. Believe me, I too can never have enough Danish. It is just a suggestion. You are the author and please feel free to post whenever. As for this chapter, I absolutely love it. Helena is underrated on the show. I appreciate her genuine friendship with Alice. The show could have elaborate further. Helena is generous, caring, refined and most of all honest. You are right on the dot with those two BBFs. As for Ms. Dana, I was shocked that she made her move on Alice in this chapter. I did not expect Dana to be so forward with Alice in the Cabana. All along I was wondering when they would start making out seriously. I love your humor and the story is simply fantastic. I hope you will go with a happier Danish version. Although a little angst here and there will be all right too. But definitely have a happy ending. We had enough nastiness on the show. Thank you again for writing. I will be waiting for your next post. p.s. It took me over 45 mins to write this comment. I just don’t know how you writers do the things you do. Hats off to all you writers.
there are like 45,000 things i want to say about this. this is so cute, we haven’t had a new danish story in awhile, so i am glad you finally rented the seasons and got the lword bug. but most importantly – i’m glad you decided to write. i love the progression of the story – it is very natural. also the interaction between all of the characters, especially alice and dana is so natural as well. and the story and the dialogue are so very witty and smart. my favorite line was in the 2nd post (i think) with the “you just spelled cosy with an s you dirty brit” or whatever. so funny. i have lots of british friends from work and that is so typical of our conversations. lastly – obviously you are a classic rock fan. love it. and i love all the led zeppelin references. all in all – great job, thanks for posting so many, that are so long, so quickly. dana and alice are super cute and so is this story. i think i will reread it now. post soon – cheers mate.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO you did it again just left it and i really really want to keep reading! you had this posted before i came home from work and for that i love you!lol i think this story is great and i hope you continue it and post it as quick as you have been!
Danish stories are few and dr between. This is brilliant though. ADx
Danish stories are few and far between. This is brilliant though. ADx
Another great chapter – thanks. I love how you’re portraying both Alice and Dana in this story and I agree their interaction comes over as very natural. As far as which direction to go in, a little angst is fine but please don’t go too far down the angst path. We’ve got reruns going on in the UK at the moment of season 3, so we need lots of happy Danish to counteract the sadness!
nice… I like your story a lot! U get a five star rate! Dana doesn’t seem to shy in this one, and I’m loving it