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Let it Ride- Chapter 4
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"Al, you dropped your guitar."
Alice shook her head and said frantically, "I don’t care. I’ve got others."
Dana giggled at Alice’s frenzied explanation and Alice couldn’t help put do the same. She was behaving quite desperately and she could recongnize when she was being foolish. At the moment, she just didn’t give a damn.
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Dana opened her eyes, unsure what had caused her to wake. The shrill, jarring ring of the phone beside Alice’s bed startled Dana and she looked over at Alice to see if it had bothered her. Alice slept on resolutely, her t-shirt riding up around her midriff and her hair standing practically on end, as usual.
Dana slipped out of bed and moved into the bathroom with the cordless.
"Hello?"
"Alice? Al, that you?"
The voice on the other end belonged to a male, maybe in his early thirties.
Dana said guardedly, "She’s sleeping. May I help you?"
The man gave a brisk laugh and said, "I wish. Listen, this is Alice’s brother. Can you wake the kiddo up?"
Dana looked back at Alice, conflicted over the man’s request. Alice hadn’t said a lot about her family, though now that Dana thought about it, she’d talked about her own quite a bit.
Watching Alice sleeping quietly, she was reluctant to wake her up, sensing somehow that the phone call was trouble.
"Can this wait until morning?"
The man didn’t lose his cool but his tone became a little less friendly as he said, "No, it can’t. Sorry. Listen- uh, I’m sorry, I don’t know your name."
Dana sighed and said wearily, "Dana."
Alice’s brother said, "I’m Nelson. And I’d really appreciate you waking, Alice. It’s important."
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Dana walked back to the bed, chafing from Nelson’s imperious attitude. No wonder Alice thought he was an ass.
Sitting beside Alice, she gently rubbed her shoulder and coaxed her awake.
After Dana explained the situation, Alice sat up and took the phone.
Dana sat back against the headboard as Alice listened to her brother.
"Nels, come on. Can’t you get her this time?"
Alice frowned but appeared resigned to whatever her brother was saying.
"Yeah. I know. I know you have a kid but I have class tomorrow and-"
Alice rose from the bed, looking around so helplessly that Dana felt a little heartbroken at the sight. Leaning forward, she found Alice’s glasses and knelt on the bed to place them on Alice’s nose gently.
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frip may I say that I really like this story. I am not really into the Danish couple, even though I liked them, but this is a well done chapter, love it!!!
Okay that last scene was hot and sweet at the same time. I love Shane as she had second thoughts with eating the lobster. Alice’s remark about Helena being The Incredible Hulk was funny. Alice and Dana are f’n hot and adorable in your story. And also, you’re a great writer and never stop writing. PPS.
This story just gets better and better!! Those two are so damn adorable and hot and sexy!! I love what you’re doing with my beloved Danish so just keep it up. And I’ll keep reading.
OMG, you are writing faster than I can read. But I am not complaining that your post twice a day. I am actually elated to be able to read more of your wonderful story. My concern is Danish fiction drought. In late July and early August, there were days when there wasn’t any Danish fics at all. So I thought if you could spread out the posts a bit, at least there will be at least one Danish post a day or 2. Believe me, I too can never have enough Danish. It is just a suggestion. You are the author and please feel free to post whenever. As for this chapter, I absolutely love it. Helena is underrated on the show. I appreciate her genuine friendship with Alice. The show could have elaborate further. Helena is generous, caring, refined and most of all honest. You are right on the dot with those two BBFs. As for Ms. Dana, I was shocked that she made her move on Alice in this chapter. I did not expect Dana to be so forward with Alice in the Cabana. All along I was wondering when they would start making out seriously. I love your humor and the story is simply fantastic. I hope you will go with a happier Danish version. Although a little angst here and there will be all right too. But definitely have a happy ending. We had enough nastiness on the show. Thank you again for writing. I will be waiting for your next post. p.s. It took me over 45 mins to write this comment. I just don’t know how you writers do the things you do. Hats off to all you writers.
there are like 45,000 things i want to say about this. this is so cute, we haven’t had a new danish story in awhile, so i am glad you finally rented the seasons and got the lword bug. but most importantly – i’m glad you decided to write. i love the progression of the story – it is very natural. also the interaction between all of the characters, especially alice and dana is so natural as well. and the story and the dialogue are so very witty and smart. my favorite line was in the 2nd post (i think) with the “you just spelled cosy with an s you dirty brit” or whatever. so funny. i have lots of british friends from work and that is so typical of our conversations. lastly – obviously you are a classic rock fan. love it. and i love all the led zeppelin references. all in all – great job, thanks for posting so many, that are so long, so quickly. dana and alice are super cute and so is this story. i think i will reread it now. post soon – cheers mate.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO you did it again just left it and i really really want to keep reading! you had this posted before i came home from work and for that i love you!lol i think this story is great and i hope you continue it and post it as quick as you have been!
Danish stories are few and dr between. This is brilliant though. ADx
Danish stories are few and far between. This is brilliant though. ADx
Another great chapter – thanks. I love how you’re portraying both Alice and Dana in this story and I agree their interaction comes over as very natural. As far as which direction to go in, a little angst is fine but please don’t go too far down the angst path. We’ve got reruns going on in the UK at the moment of season 3, so we need lots of happy Danish to counteract the sadness!
nice… I like your story a lot! U get a five star rate! Dana doesn’t seem to shy in this one, and I’m loving it