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Let it Ride- Chapter 5
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The girl actually took a step back and she said in a trembling voice, "Are you her bodyguard or something?"
Dana grimaced and said, "Something like that. Now, beat it."
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Dana knew she was in trouble when Alice grabbed her hand and led her off for parts indeterminate.
As they hurried through the house Dana began to obsess over which mistake had most offended Alice? Basically implying that Alice was her property? Or implying that Alice was her property but being unable to back the claim up in public?
Reaching the bathroom, Alice cut to the front of the line, receiving outraged cries and a few muffled sobs as well. Alice said vaguely, "It’s an emergency." Pointing to Dana, she said dramatically, "She’s got alcohol poisoning. I’m just going to take her in there and uh- pump her stomach."
It was a mark of how drunk everyone in that hallway was that they didn’t even question Alice’s ability to pump someone’s stomach.
Inside the bathroom, the door was barely closed and locked behind them before Alice had Dana pressed up against the door with her shirt pushed up past her belly button.
Dana had felt some of the effects of the booze leaving her during her tortured walk of shame but she was far from clarity. Having Alice fitted against her like this, and so suddenly, was a shock to her system.
It didn’t take her long to adjust as she gasped sharply when she felt Alice palm her breast over her bra. Alice pulled one of Dana’s legs up and around her hips as she pressed them closer together until they were both moaning at the contact.
Alice’s mouth slipped from Dana’s and it quickly found a beating, steady rhythm under the skin of her neck. Sucking softly, she grinned as Dana murmured her name delicately.
Taking advantage of Dana’s understandable distraction, Alice slid her hand between them until she cupped the denim that covered Dana’s underwear, causing the tennis player’s hips to jerk forward violently.
A sudden knock at the door caused Alice to moan in frustration and pull slightly away. Dana’s eys were closed tightly but she gripped Alice tighter, unwilling to have their bodies separate.
Alice whispered regretfully, "More later, okay? The native are restless."
Sighing impressively, Dana nodded and followed Alice out into the hallway, Alice praising Jesus for his quick work in saving her friend.
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i cant say enough how much i love this story it just keeps getting better and better and the ending in the words of alice “hot hot hot!” lol please post again soon you rule!!
Great Update! Looking fwd to seeing how they work out Dana not being out! Loved that you posted so soon! Keep up the good work!
Don’t be so hard on yourself; the chapter was far from silly and unfulfilling, you are nicely building the tension. Love how Dana is getting more confident in the relationship, albeit fuelled by the shots. I think they should skip 3rd base and go straight for the home run! Impatient? just a little. Oh and Shane as the Fonz – LOL. Looking forward to the next instalment….
All I can say is- I Love Dana!! She is so sexy when she’s…Oh she’s sexy all the time!!
The end was very hot and sexy. I liked how Dana told that chick off. I so thought that Alice was going to snap or something, but didn’t. I can’t wait for more. PPS
Fripster,I was about to shut down my pc but I did one last check, there it was, your latest post. What are you talking about? Boring? No way, this is another fun filled chapter. Thank you very much. “Shane’s eyes widened at the daring display from the normally conservative Dana” My view precisely. Dana is really getting bold. I like it. I swear A & D seemed to be able to communicate telepathically. Both commented on Shane as “Fonzie” just like on the show about “Ariana Huffington is 50.” They were definitely meant to be together, period. It is great to see the three of them hanging out and looking out for each other too. “It’s not acid, is it”, what a geek? Bodyguard, is she forever so dorky. And finally, I love your “nice surprise” mini cliffhanger. Can’t wait to read more. Again I can’t believe a very bold Dana. It’s good! This is another successful post and the story just keeps getting better. Thank you for this night cap!!!
wow you post so quickly i like it, i like it alot!! loving the story:)
Sure did like the ending, that was hot and Dana was still alert, after all that alcohol,LOL. Great chapter
Another good one, fripster! I did have flashbacks to some of my college parties — that punch is a killer. Thanks again for the frequent posts and great storyline. I look forward to what’s next — even if it does get angsty. Thanks!