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Let it Ride- Chapter 5
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Chapter 5
Shane carefully tweaked a few strands of hair so that they stood out from the crown of her head in a manner that was meant to convey casual disregard. Grinning at the final result, she made a satisfied little clicking noise with her tongue as she continued to peer into the mirror.
Alice was sprawled idly on Dana’s bed, watching Shane prepare for her night with growing amusement. Flipping a page of the tennis magazine she was reading disinterestedly, she said in a bored tone, "I keep waiting for you to give your reflection a thumbs up and go, Eyyyyyy."
Shane grinned and used the aforementioned reflection to shoot Alice an unmistakable finger.
Alice feigned hurt and held up her hands in surrender, saying regretfully, "I don’t think the Fonz would approve of that gesture, Shane."
Shane glared at Alice without turning to face her and said, " Hand me my jacket, Potsy."
Alice shot Shane an arch glance, saying appreciatively, "Touche, McCutcheon."
Alice lifted her ass a mere inch off the bed so that Shane could just barely slide the leather jacket out from under her. The musician chuckled as Shane pulled the jacket over her slim shoulders, refusing to comment further on Shane’s growing resemblance to Henry Winkler.
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Dana emerged from the bathroom looking nervous but hot as hell. She’d spent extra time applying her makeup and she was hoping for some kind of reaction that would make her feel less like an idiot. Awkwardly shufflling into the room, she stood with as much attitude as she could muster and waited for either Alice or Shane to notice her return.
It became clear that Shane was transfixed by her own reflection and that Alice was apparently deeply involved in a magazine article.
Frowning, Dana stepped behind Alice to get a glance at what she was peering at so intently. Dana’s tennis magazines had never held much use for Alice other than to roll up and swat at Shane.
Dana’s frown deepened and her nostrils flared in disbelief when she realized Alice wasn’t reading but gazing rather too interestedly in a fashion spread detailing some shamelessly flimsy outfits that Dana would never even consider wearing. Porn stars would wear those uniforms before Dana would.
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i cant say enough how much i love this story it just keeps getting better and better and the ending in the words of alice “hot hot hot!” lol please post again soon you rule!!
Great Update! Looking fwd to seeing how they work out Dana not being out! Loved that you posted so soon! Keep up the good work!
Don’t be so hard on yourself; the chapter was far from silly and unfulfilling, you are nicely building the tension. Love how Dana is getting more confident in the relationship, albeit fuelled by the shots. I think they should skip 3rd base and go straight for the home run! Impatient? just a little. Oh and Shane as the Fonz – LOL. Looking forward to the next instalment….
All I can say is- I Love Dana!! She is so sexy when she’s…Oh she’s sexy all the time!!
The end was very hot and sexy. I liked how Dana told that chick off. I so thought that Alice was going to snap or something, but didn’t. I can’t wait for more. PPS
Fripster,I was about to shut down my pc but I did one last check, there it was, your latest post. What are you talking about? Boring? No way, this is another fun filled chapter. Thank you very much. “Shane’s eyes widened at the daring display from the normally conservative Dana” My view precisely. Dana is really getting bold. I like it. I swear A & D seemed to be able to communicate telepathically. Both commented on Shane as “Fonzie” just like on the show about “Ariana Huffington is 50.” They were definitely meant to be together, period. It is great to see the three of them hanging out and looking out for each other too. “It’s not acid, is it”, what a geek? Bodyguard, is she forever so dorky. And finally, I love your “nice surprise” mini cliffhanger. Can’t wait to read more. Again I can’t believe a very bold Dana. It’s good! This is another successful post and the story just keeps getting better. Thank you for this night cap!!!
wow you post so quickly i like it, i like it alot!! loving the story:)
Sure did like the ending, that was hot and Dana was still alert, after all that alcohol,LOL. Great chapter
Another good one, fripster! I did have flashbacks to some of my college parties — that punch is a killer. Thanks again for the frequent posts and great storyline. I look forward to what’s next — even if it does get angsty. Thanks!