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Let it Ride- Chapter 5
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Dana sighed, leaning into Alice a little and saying, "You better."
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Half an hour later, Alice and Dana had done the full circuit of the first floor of the house. They’d run into several people they knew from class or in Dana’s case, the gym. Still, there were far more people they didn’t know.
Dana had made the first important discovery about college parties. There is an art to liquor consumption and a delicate balance while it’s being consumed. Just the right amount can make you a best friend for the night. Just the wrong amount and you might have made your mortal enemy; at least until one of you passed out.
So far, Dana had with Alice’s help, had just the right amount. The kitchen had become the site of her major breakthrough. Several Chi Xi’s were standing on chairs, using great wooden ladles to stir the contents of three enormous plastic coolers.
Feeling unusually friendly, Dana had sauntered up and said, "What’cha makin’, ladies?"
One of the girls grinned kindly at Dana and said, "Trash can punch. Did you get a cup when you came in?"
Dana looked back at Alice who was currently mixing a Crown and Coke from ingredients Shane had smuggled in with them. "No. You know what? I didn’t."
One of the girls seemed to find the mistake eggregious and she quickly moved to correct it. Handing Dana a red Solo cup, she said, "Here ya go, honey. This’ll knock you flat in three glasses, guaranteed."
Dana eyed it objectively and said, "What’s in it?"
The girl recited quickly, "The base is just pink lemonade but the fruit is to soak up the everclear. This was our first time to make the punch and the older girls left us a recipe but it just didn’t taste very strong so we used a whole bottle instead of a half."
One of the other girls chimed in helpfully, "And Carrie used some vodka. For taste."
A third girl looked on in confusion and asked, "She did? Well, maybe I shouldn’t have added the gin."
The first burst into laughter and turned back to Dana, saying, "Guaranteed to knock you flat in two glasses."
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During her conversation with the girls in the kitchen, whom Dana was convinced were her newly found, future lifelong friends, Alice was swept a few feet off course by a group of kids wearing A-Okay’s t-shirts.
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i cant say enough how much i love this story it just keeps getting better and better and the ending in the words of alice “hot hot hot!” lol please post again soon you rule!!
Great Update! Looking fwd to seeing how they work out Dana not being out! Loved that you posted so soon! Keep up the good work!
Don’t be so hard on yourself; the chapter was far from silly and unfulfilling, you are nicely building the tension. Love how Dana is getting more confident in the relationship, albeit fuelled by the shots. I think they should skip 3rd base and go straight for the home run! Impatient? just a little. Oh and Shane as the Fonz – LOL. Looking forward to the next instalment….
All I can say is- I Love Dana!! She is so sexy when she’s…Oh she’s sexy all the time!!
The end was very hot and sexy. I liked how Dana told that chick off. I so thought that Alice was going to snap or something, but didn’t. I can’t wait for more. PPS
Fripster,I was about to shut down my pc but I did one last check, there it was, your latest post. What are you talking about? Boring? No way, this is another fun filled chapter. Thank you very much. “Shane’s eyes widened at the daring display from the normally conservative Dana” My view precisely. Dana is really getting bold. I like it. I swear A & D seemed to be able to communicate telepathically. Both commented on Shane as “Fonzie” just like on the show about “Ariana Huffington is 50.” They were definitely meant to be together, period. It is great to see the three of them hanging out and looking out for each other too. “It’s not acid, is it”, what a geek? Bodyguard, is she forever so dorky. And finally, I love your “nice surprise” mini cliffhanger. Can’t wait to read more. Again I can’t believe a very bold Dana. It’s good! This is another successful post and the story just keeps getting better. Thank you for this night cap!!!
wow you post so quickly i like it, i like it alot!! loving the story:)
Sure did like the ending, that was hot and Dana was still alert, after all that alcohol,LOL. Great chapter
Another good one, fripster! I did have flashbacks to some of my college parties — that punch is a killer. Thanks again for the frequent posts and great storyline. I look forward to what’s next — even if it does get angsty. Thanks!