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Let it Ride- Chapter 5c
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Dana couldn’t control a gasp as she felt Alice’s hand sliding over her skin.
The musician said, "Last night was amazing, Dana. You’re incredible."
Dana jerked her eyes up from where they had been studying a small birthmark on Alice’s shoulder. Incredulously, she asked, "Me? Alice you’re the one that’s unbelievable. You’re fucking brilliant! You’re a sex genius!"
Alice’s eyebrows shot up at Dana’s generous praise. She wasn’t unaccustomed to hearing that she was good in bed. But hearing Dana say it so vehemently made her feel understandably smug.
"A sex genius?"
Dana nodded vigorously, continuing, "Alice, you’re wonderful. You made me feel so- so- good. And sexy."
Alice’s smile faded into a serious expression as she said sternly, "Whoa. Hold up. You are sexy. You know that right?"
Dana shrugged and it became clear to Alice that Dana did not particularly agree with Alice’s pronouncement. Sighing, she said, "I’m so boring, Alice. And klutzy. And dorky."
Alice squeezed Dana’s hipbone to grab her attention. "You’re not at all boring." Then the musician paused, pretending to consider the other two descriptions. "Klutzy, maybe. Definitely dorky."
Dana smiled even as she playfully swatted Alice’s shoulder.
Alice was having none of it. Her eyes darkened tellingly as she pulled Dana closer under the blankets. Alice had removed her pants but still wore a pair of black lace panties and her bra from the night before.
Alice said passionately, "Dana, everything about you is sexy, babe. Trust me. I look at you and I can’t even think about anything else except what it would be like to kiss you and run my hands all over your body."
Dana felt her body reacting to Alice’s spirited claims. Alice moved their hips together in a slow, steady rhythm as she continued meaningfully, "Last night, all I could think about was getting you out of those clothes. I even felt a little guilty because I mean, I love talking to you and hanging out with you but last night I would have sold my soul just to touch you."
Alice grinned wickedly at Dana, who was now pumping her hips against Alice of her own volition. Hearing Alice’s low, sultry voice describe how much she wanted her was shocking. It was an awakening.
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OMG be prepared to be Leonored,,,LOL,,,now that was funny!! I liked how you had them go to the groceries, cause Dana likes to eat real food, and I do too,,,,,,and finally to set up Helena with Bette, I just love it…can’t wait to see what happens between them both and with Leonor with Al and co,.,,frip I loved it!!!
You are truly amazing. I am blown away that you can post so frequently and with such strong chapters!. Loved this one. You wrote Dana just right. I was a bit worried about her and her limited experience. Alice handled the situation just right and I’m sure Dana is a quick learner. ;-D Thank you again for the great Danish story!! Can’t wait for the next chapter….
yay! i was hoping you’d hook up bette and helena! and lenoreeee is the best
That was a good combination: Helena and Bette. The morning scene was very hot between Dana and Alice, very sultry..Danish are so f’n hot together and so sexy. Their chemistry together in your story is amazing. Thank you for enjoying my story also. I can’t wait to see what will happen when Lenore comes to make a visit. PPS.
You are brilliant!! I loved the morning scene. That was just so Danish. I can’t wait to get “Lenored”. Keep it up.
Very, very nice and very sweet. And you deserve all the compliments, your story blows all mine out of the water! I’m sitting here waiting to get Lenored.
I must borrowed the quote from Darth Vader saying to Luke Skywalker, ” Impressive, Young one!” Your performance so far reminds me of reading previous Danish stories written by Akiracolorblind, Amanda92688, BoyToy, Brteyes, Caitlin Jayne, ClosetDana, CombatBarbie, CrystalMeth, Debs21221, DeLeishous, Dreiser, Foxfire, Gemzo, Guesswho, Iloveleisha07, Janet Marie, Layla Gray, Mcilwaine, MutedTempest, nbd14. Poopy Sh*t, Portia Only, Purpleswirls, SammyGirl, Sulkygeeks, Suzieb33, Swissmiss24, Twisted Tales & WriteNsurf, just to name a few. Pardon me if I did not type your names correctly. All of you should be inducted into the Danish Writer Hall of Fame (if there is ever one) for your dedication or imagination or story line or beautiful writing style including the accuracy of portraying the characters. All the Danish writers have given me so much joy over the past few months. I thank you all. You mentioned writing Alice & Lara. I have conflicting feelings with the concept. OK, only if it would take place after Dana passed away. It is kind of creepy to have 2 people having the same ex to get together. I feel the same way you do about Alice & Helena as BBF. As for this chapter, it is another winner. 1st, you had prof. Alice teaching student Dana Sex 105 (a little bit more advance than 101). I also love the food shopping scene and their development of their closeness, discovering each other and working out their insecurity. They are just adorable together. Can’t wait to find out what “Lenored” is all about. Thank you again.
Lenore! be prepared… be very prepared hahahah!!! brilliant! I kinda lost this one and i was looking for this everywhere, lucky for me hail was there to help.:)keep it up!!!
frip – please do not apologize for posting quickly. i love that almost everyday this week i received a new update from you. the only thing i am scared of is that you will finish and we will never hear from you again. you MUST continue with new stories after this one. and i won’t be mad if you post them everyday as well. anyway – ah the land of foreplay and reciprocity. sounds nice. this was a great chapter – i am intrigued as to what drama lenore is going to bring in her wake. i love that dana and alice are starting to share more of their feelings and i am glad they are gettin some now. and about the sorority – um i guess i’ll let that one slide. haha just kidding my best friend was in a sorority and it was just as crazy as your girls depicted in here. have a good holiday. later.