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Let it Ride- Chapter 5c
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With a grin, Dana realized that she was "over there" quite a bit. Grabbing another bag of rice cakes, she threw them down the aisle to Alice, who caught them somewhat clumsily.
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They had been walking around the frozen section looking for Bagel Bites when Alice said abruptly, "I think we should set Helena up with somebody."
Dana took her eyes off the tabloid magazine she was browsing through while they walked and asked curiously," Why? I thought she was seeing that girl in the athletic department."
Alice smiled and said dreamily, "Jill Jansen. Now there’s a looker."
Seeing Dana’s unhappy frown, Alice forged on quickly, "Bit of a slut, though. Anyway, Helena’s been kind of casually dating around but I know the Hellcat and I can tell you that nobody is holding her interest."
Dana made a thoughtful sound and Alice continued, "Helena deserves somebody that’ll be good to her."
Dana smiled at Alice’s devotion to her friend. "You’re right, Al. Helena is a wonderful girl and she needs somebody worthy of her."
Grinning, Alice said enthusiastically, "Exactly! I knew you’d get it. Now, who to set her up with?"
Dana shrugged. Aside from Alice, Helena and Shane, and Bette, Dana knew very few lesbians.
Suddenly, Alice stopped the cart, letting go of the handles and turning back to face Dana. The cart continued going until it crashed half-heartedly into a display of macaroni. Oblivious, Alice said excitedly, "I know just the person! We’ll set her up with Bette!"
Dana considered the plan. Bette and Helena were both beautiful, intelligent, cosmopolitan women. They would certainly be a sight to behold if things went well.
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Helena burst into the loft like a woman possessed. Her heart was hammering wildly and her hair was charmingly askew, the only evidence that she’d just run up thirteen flights of stairs.
"Alice!"
Dana heard Helena’s noisy entrance and looked up from the sack of groceries she was unpacking. Concern written over her features, she took in the unusually unpoised appearance of the normally self-possessed Brit.
"Helena, are you allright?"
The brunette nodded slightly and wheezed, "Alice! Is she here?"
Dana nodded and went down the hall to fetch her girlfriend.
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Alice strolled down the hall to find Helena panting heavily, leaning against the back of the couch.
"Helena, what the fuck? Did you run up the stairs?"
Helena said breathily, "As a matter of fact."
Alice shared an amused glance with Dana and said, "Well, what’s up, Hel?"
Finally catching her breath, Helena said, "Your mum. She’s here."
Alice goggled at her friend; all of the oxygen seemed to have been sucked out of the room and she said frantically, "What? Here here?"
Dana looked on in confusion. She knew very little about Alice’s mom, except that she was a TV actress and occasional drunk.
Alice was seemingly paralyzed. The resigned look on her face prompted Dana to move forward and take the musician’s hand in hers, squeezing it gently.
There was a loud knock at the door and Alice said grimly, "Prepare to be Lenored."
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OMG be prepared to be Leonored,,,LOL,,,now that was funny!! I liked how you had them go to the groceries, cause Dana likes to eat real food, and I do too,,,,,,and finally to set up Helena with Bette, I just love it…can’t wait to see what happens between them both and with Leonor with Al and co,.,,frip I loved it!!!
You are truly amazing. I am blown away that you can post so frequently and with such strong chapters!. Loved this one. You wrote Dana just right. I was a bit worried about her and her limited experience. Alice handled the situation just right and I’m sure Dana is a quick learner. ;-D Thank you again for the great Danish story!! Can’t wait for the next chapter….
yay! i was hoping you’d hook up bette and helena! and lenoreeee is the best
That was a good combination: Helena and Bette. The morning scene was very hot between Dana and Alice, very sultry..Danish are so f’n hot together and so sexy. Their chemistry together in your story is amazing. Thank you for enjoying my story also. I can’t wait to see what will happen when Lenore comes to make a visit. PPS.
You are brilliant!! I loved the morning scene. That was just so Danish. I can’t wait to get “Lenored”. Keep it up.
Very, very nice and very sweet. And you deserve all the compliments, your story blows all mine out of the water! I’m sitting here waiting to get Lenored.
I must borrowed the quote from Darth Vader saying to Luke Skywalker, ” Impressive, Young one!” Your performance so far reminds me of reading previous Danish stories written by Akiracolorblind, Amanda92688, BoyToy, Brteyes, Caitlin Jayne, ClosetDana, CombatBarbie, CrystalMeth, Debs21221, DeLeishous, Dreiser, Foxfire, Gemzo, Guesswho, Iloveleisha07, Janet Marie, Layla Gray, Mcilwaine, MutedTempest, nbd14. Poopy Sh*t, Portia Only, Purpleswirls, SammyGirl, Sulkygeeks, Suzieb33, Swissmiss24, Twisted Tales & WriteNsurf, just to name a few. Pardon me if I did not type your names correctly. All of you should be inducted into the Danish Writer Hall of Fame (if there is ever one) for your dedication or imagination or story line or beautiful writing style including the accuracy of portraying the characters. All the Danish writers have given me so much joy over the past few months. I thank you all. You mentioned writing Alice & Lara. I have conflicting feelings with the concept. OK, only if it would take place after Dana passed away. It is kind of creepy to have 2 people having the same ex to get together. I feel the same way you do about Alice & Helena as BBF. As for this chapter, it is another winner. 1st, you had prof. Alice teaching student Dana Sex 105 (a little bit more advance than 101). I also love the food shopping scene and their development of their closeness, discovering each other and working out their insecurity. They are just adorable together. Can’t wait to find out what “Lenored” is all about. Thank you again.
Lenore! be prepared… be very prepared hahahah!!! brilliant! I kinda lost this one and i was looking for this everywhere, lucky for me hail was there to help.:)keep it up!!!
frip – please do not apologize for posting quickly. i love that almost everyday this week i received a new update from you. the only thing i am scared of is that you will finish and we will never hear from you again. you MUST continue with new stories after this one. and i won’t be mad if you post them everyday as well. anyway – ah the land of foreplay and reciprocity. sounds nice. this was a great chapter – i am intrigued as to what drama lenore is going to bring in her wake. i love that dana and alice are starting to share more of their feelings and i am glad they are gettin some now. and about the sorority – um i guess i’ll let that one slide. haha just kidding my best friend was in a sorority and it was just as crazy as your girls depicted in here. have a good holiday. later.