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Let it Ride- Chapter 5c
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Just thinking about touching Alice’s beautiful body in such a loving manner was having an effect on Dana. Yet, there was the insecurity. Alice had pretty much blown her mind and Dana couldn’t imagine living up to that standarad.
Dana remembered what Shane had said the night they saw Alice perform. Alice had been involved with several women. Including the gorgeous Bette, who was no doubt a sexual prodigy, thought Dana bitterly. What if Dana couldn’t compare? Would Alice pity her? Worse, would Alice lose interest if Dana couldn’t keep her satisfied?
The latter thoughts terrified Dana, even as she longed to do nothing more than give Alice an amorous wake-up call.
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Dana spent fifteen terribly indecisive minutes trying to decide if she should wake Alice or not. Perhaps a sunny, playful attitude would distract Alice from her natural lack of seduction skills. But then, maybe if Dana tried to be playful she might go too far and remind Alice of a hyperactive child. Or an excitable schnauzer.
If Dana’s arms hadn’t been wrapped around Alice securely she would have surely been wringing her hands.
Finally, Alice began to stir in her arms and Dana hoped that the question would resolve itself quickly and painlessly.
Turning around to face Dana, Alice gave her a sleepy smile and in what was becoming a morning ritual, Dana gently played with Alice’s flyaway hair until it somewhat resembled an actual hairstyle again.
Dana quietly asked, "Did I wake you?"
Shaking her head, Alice didn’t even try to stifle her smile upon waking to find Dana lying beside her.
"You look beautiful, Dane."
Blushing at the wholly unexpected compliment, Dana said truthfully, "Alice, last night. It was- unbelievable."
Smirking happily, Alice sensed the topic was sliding away from the flirtatious, sexy vibe she was attempting to create. Dana had an uncanny knack for turning things serious with her earnest, heartfelt statements. Not that Alice didn’t appreciate them. In fact, she often found herself pleasantly frazzled by Dana’s genuine compliments and the regard she had for Alice.
Trying to turn up the proverbial heat, Alice watched Dana with a studied, interested gaze while she let her hand slip nonchalantly under the covers until it rested on Dana’s bare hip. Smoothing her fingers over Dana’s nude skin caused Alice’s grin to widen as she felt ridiculously turned on by the fact that Dana had slept totally naked in her bed.
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OMG be prepared to be Leonored,,,LOL,,,now that was funny!! I liked how you had them go to the groceries, cause Dana likes to eat real food, and I do too,,,,,,and finally to set up Helena with Bette, I just love it…can’t wait to see what happens between them both and with Leonor with Al and co,.,,frip I loved it!!!
You are truly amazing. I am blown away that you can post so frequently and with such strong chapters!. Loved this one. You wrote Dana just right. I was a bit worried about her and her limited experience. Alice handled the situation just right and I’m sure Dana is a quick learner. ;-D Thank you again for the great Danish story!! Can’t wait for the next chapter….
yay! i was hoping you’d hook up bette and helena! and lenoreeee is the best
That was a good combination: Helena and Bette. The morning scene was very hot between Dana and Alice, very sultry..Danish are so f’n hot together and so sexy. Their chemistry together in your story is amazing. Thank you for enjoying my story also. I can’t wait to see what will happen when Lenore comes to make a visit. PPS.
You are brilliant!! I loved the morning scene. That was just so Danish. I can’t wait to get “Lenored”. Keep it up.
Very, very nice and very sweet. And you deserve all the compliments, your story blows all mine out of the water! I’m sitting here waiting to get Lenored.
I must borrowed the quote from Darth Vader saying to Luke Skywalker, ” Impressive, Young one!” Your performance so far reminds me of reading previous Danish stories written by Akiracolorblind, Amanda92688, BoyToy, Brteyes, Caitlin Jayne, ClosetDana, CombatBarbie, CrystalMeth, Debs21221, DeLeishous, Dreiser, Foxfire, Gemzo, Guesswho, Iloveleisha07, Janet Marie, Layla Gray, Mcilwaine, MutedTempest, nbd14. Poopy Sh*t, Portia Only, Purpleswirls, SammyGirl, Sulkygeeks, Suzieb33, Swissmiss24, Twisted Tales & WriteNsurf, just to name a few. Pardon me if I did not type your names correctly. All of you should be inducted into the Danish Writer Hall of Fame (if there is ever one) for your dedication or imagination or story line or beautiful writing style including the accuracy of portraying the characters. All the Danish writers have given me so much joy over the past few months. I thank you all. You mentioned writing Alice & Lara. I have conflicting feelings with the concept. OK, only if it would take place after Dana passed away. It is kind of creepy to have 2 people having the same ex to get together. I feel the same way you do about Alice & Helena as BBF. As for this chapter, it is another winner. 1st, you had prof. Alice teaching student Dana Sex 105 (a little bit more advance than 101). I also love the food shopping scene and their development of their closeness, discovering each other and working out their insecurity. They are just adorable together. Can’t wait to find out what “Lenored” is all about. Thank you again.
Lenore! be prepared… be very prepared hahahah!!! brilliant! I kinda lost this one and i was looking for this everywhere, lucky for me hail was there to help.:)keep it up!!!
frip – please do not apologize for posting quickly. i love that almost everyday this week i received a new update from you. the only thing i am scared of is that you will finish and we will never hear from you again. you MUST continue with new stories after this one. and i won’t be mad if you post them everyday as well. anyway – ah the land of foreplay and reciprocity. sounds nice. this was a great chapter – i am intrigued as to what drama lenore is going to bring in her wake. i love that dana and alice are starting to share more of their feelings and i am glad they are gettin some now. and about the sorority – um i guess i’ll let that one slide. haha just kidding my best friend was in a sorority and it was just as crazy as your girls depicted in here. have a good holiday. later.