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Let it Ride- Chapter 5c
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Alice was sitting on the counter with a bowl of vanilla ice cream covered in rainbow sprinkles. Dana had raised her eyebrows skyward upon seeing Alice shake a liberal amount into her bowl but she refrained from comment because though her girlfriend might have had the appetites of a six year old, it certainly didn’t seem to affect her stamina.
Alice had seen her questioning look and said huffily, "It’s rainbows,Dane. I’m just being politically correct."
Dana was now digging through the refrigerator searching for something to eat. Their morning activities had continued well into the afternoon and by the time they emerged from the bedroom it was nearly five o’clock.
Dana would have eaten anything but it seemed that there wasn’t any of that to go round. Alice explained that Helena did the shopping and when Helena was composing, she sometimes went an entire day without thinking to eat.
Dana looked at Alice with such concern that Alice had burst out laughing. "It’s okay, Dane. I don’t starve." Holding up the ice cream container she’d said forcefully, "See?"
Turning her back on the refrigerator, Dana took the bowl from Alice and dropped it into the sink. Ignoring Alice’s affronted cry, Dana took her hand and led her down the hall.
Alice started to pull her shirt over her head but Dana said with good-natured frustration, "We’re not having sex, Al. We’re going to the grocery store."
Alice looked so downhearted that Dana had said in compromise, "We can have sex after, okay?"
Alice said quickly, "Deal."
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Dana watched Alice pile junk food into the shopping cart with growing alarm.
"I don’t know how you’re still alive. I really don’t."
Alice straightened her glasses adorably and dropped a box of Froot Loops into the cart. "I’m just naturally healthy, Dane. Good genes, y’know?"
Dana said dryly, "Didn’t two of your grandparents die of heart attacks?"
Alice ignored the question and tossed a box of Velveeta chesse into the cart purely out of spite.
Dana shook her head, picking out a few things she thought Alice might like and dropping them in on top of the Doritos. If Alice refused to try them at least Dana would have something to eat when she was over there.
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OMG be prepared to be Leonored,,,LOL,,,now that was funny!! I liked how you had them go to the groceries, cause Dana likes to eat real food, and I do too,,,,,,and finally to set up Helena with Bette, I just love it…can’t wait to see what happens between them both and with Leonor with Al and co,.,,frip I loved it!!!
You are truly amazing. I am blown away that you can post so frequently and with such strong chapters!. Loved this one. You wrote Dana just right. I was a bit worried about her and her limited experience. Alice handled the situation just right and I’m sure Dana is a quick learner. ;-D Thank you again for the great Danish story!! Can’t wait for the next chapter….
yay! i was hoping you’d hook up bette and helena! and lenoreeee is the best
That was a good combination: Helena and Bette. The morning scene was very hot between Dana and Alice, very sultry..Danish are so f’n hot together and so sexy. Their chemistry together in your story is amazing. Thank you for enjoying my story also. I can’t wait to see what will happen when Lenore comes to make a visit. PPS.
You are brilliant!! I loved the morning scene. That was just so Danish. I can’t wait to get “Lenored”. Keep it up.
Very, very nice and very sweet. And you deserve all the compliments, your story blows all mine out of the water! I’m sitting here waiting to get Lenored.
I must borrowed the quote from Darth Vader saying to Luke Skywalker, ” Impressive, Young one!” Your performance so far reminds me of reading previous Danish stories written by Akiracolorblind, Amanda92688, BoyToy, Brteyes, Caitlin Jayne, ClosetDana, CombatBarbie, CrystalMeth, Debs21221, DeLeishous, Dreiser, Foxfire, Gemzo, Guesswho, Iloveleisha07, Janet Marie, Layla Gray, Mcilwaine, MutedTempest, nbd14. Poopy Sh*t, Portia Only, Purpleswirls, SammyGirl, Sulkygeeks, Suzieb33, Swissmiss24, Twisted Tales & WriteNsurf, just to name a few. Pardon me if I did not type your names correctly. All of you should be inducted into the Danish Writer Hall of Fame (if there is ever one) for your dedication or imagination or story line or beautiful writing style including the accuracy of portraying the characters. All the Danish writers have given me so much joy over the past few months. I thank you all. You mentioned writing Alice & Lara. I have conflicting feelings with the concept. OK, only if it would take place after Dana passed away. It is kind of creepy to have 2 people having the same ex to get together. I feel the same way you do about Alice & Helena as BBF. As for this chapter, it is another winner. 1st, you had prof. Alice teaching student Dana Sex 105 (a little bit more advance than 101). I also love the food shopping scene and their development of their closeness, discovering each other and working out their insecurity. They are just adorable together. Can’t wait to find out what “Lenored” is all about. Thank you again.
Lenore! be prepared… be very prepared hahahah!!! brilliant! I kinda lost this one and i was looking for this everywhere, lucky for me hail was there to help.:)keep it up!!!
frip – please do not apologize for posting quickly. i love that almost everyday this week i received a new update from you. the only thing i am scared of is that you will finish and we will never hear from you again. you MUST continue with new stories after this one. and i won’t be mad if you post them everyday as well. anyway – ah the land of foreplay and reciprocity. sounds nice. this was a great chapter – i am intrigued as to what drama lenore is going to bring in her wake. i love that dana and alice are starting to share more of their feelings and i am glad they are gettin some now. and about the sorority – um i guess i’ll let that one slide. haha just kidding my best friend was in a sorority and it was just as crazy as your girls depicted in here. have a good holiday. later.