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Let it Ride- Chapter 5c
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Dana’s next words were like a whispered confession. She murmured, "I want you too."
Alice grinned.
Her hand slowly moved away from Dana’s hip until she caught Dana’s hand in hers and she said knowingly, "You’re scared."
Dana nodded, ashamed.
Alice kissed her cheek softly and said, "Nothing to be scared of, Dane. You don’t have to do anything until you’re ready."
Dana sighed in frustration. Alice was being kind but being ready wasn’t the problem. Being afraid was.
Alice sensed Dana’s desire and she decided to ease her into the land of foreplay and reciprocity.
"Dane, can I show you something?"
Dana nodded silently and Alice took her hand, slowly sliding it over her own body until they reached the waistband of her panties.
Dana’s eyes widened but she didn’t move to pull away. In fact, her face showed such blatant desire that Alice’s breath caught to look at it.
Finally, Alice eased Dana’s hand inside her underwear until it covered her mound.
Alice sighed softly as Dana’s fingers made gentle, exploratory motions. Trailing a finger over Alice’s opening, Dana gasped as she came in contact with Alice’s warm, wet center.
Alice said in a strangled voice, "Do you see how much I want you?"
Dana’s voice came out in trembling, "Yes."
Alice said gently, "Don’t ever be afraid of me, Dane."
Dana felt her vision blur as her eyes filled with tears. The mixture of soft and playful in Alice had utterly broken her. Leaning forward, she pressed her lips to Alice’s insistently, moaning when she felt Alice’s hand slide in between her legs.
Dana deepend the kiss as Alice slipped her fingers easily back inside of the tennis player. Soon they were moving as a single unit. Both were moaning into the others’ mouth and rocking doggedly against each other.
Alice actually came first, her voice a muffled cry against Dana’s ear. Hearing Alice caused Dana’s hips th thrust faster as she could feel her own climax looming. Like the night before, Alice manipulated her expertly until Dana came powerfully, her teeth biting down on the bare skin of Alice’s shoulder.
They held each other as they came down and Alice felt Dana’s lips fluttering gently over her face as her eyes closed and she fell peacefully back to sleep.
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OMG be prepared to be Leonored,,,LOL,,,now that was funny!! I liked how you had them go to the groceries, cause Dana likes to eat real food, and I do too,,,,,,and finally to set up Helena with Bette, I just love it…can’t wait to see what happens between them both and with Leonor with Al and co,.,,frip I loved it!!!
You are truly amazing. I am blown away that you can post so frequently and with such strong chapters!. Loved this one. You wrote Dana just right. I was a bit worried about her and her limited experience. Alice handled the situation just right and I’m sure Dana is a quick learner. ;-D Thank you again for the great Danish story!! Can’t wait for the next chapter….
yay! i was hoping you’d hook up bette and helena! and lenoreeee is the best
That was a good combination: Helena and Bette. The morning scene was very hot between Dana and Alice, very sultry..Danish are so f’n hot together and so sexy. Their chemistry together in your story is amazing. Thank you for enjoying my story also. I can’t wait to see what will happen when Lenore comes to make a visit. PPS.
You are brilliant!! I loved the morning scene. That was just so Danish. I can’t wait to get “Lenored”. Keep it up.
Very, very nice and very sweet. And you deserve all the compliments, your story blows all mine out of the water! I’m sitting here waiting to get Lenored.
I must borrowed the quote from Darth Vader saying to Luke Skywalker, ” Impressive, Young one!” Your performance so far reminds me of reading previous Danish stories written by Akiracolorblind, Amanda92688, BoyToy, Brteyes, Caitlin Jayne, ClosetDana, CombatBarbie, CrystalMeth, Debs21221, DeLeishous, Dreiser, Foxfire, Gemzo, Guesswho, Iloveleisha07, Janet Marie, Layla Gray, Mcilwaine, MutedTempest, nbd14. Poopy Sh*t, Portia Only, Purpleswirls, SammyGirl, Sulkygeeks, Suzieb33, Swissmiss24, Twisted Tales & WriteNsurf, just to name a few. Pardon me if I did not type your names correctly. All of you should be inducted into the Danish Writer Hall of Fame (if there is ever one) for your dedication or imagination or story line or beautiful writing style including the accuracy of portraying the characters. All the Danish writers have given me so much joy over the past few months. I thank you all. You mentioned writing Alice & Lara. I have conflicting feelings with the concept. OK, only if it would take place after Dana passed away. It is kind of creepy to have 2 people having the same ex to get together. I feel the same way you do about Alice & Helena as BBF. As for this chapter, it is another winner. 1st, you had prof. Alice teaching student Dana Sex 105 (a little bit more advance than 101). I also love the food shopping scene and their development of their closeness, discovering each other and working out their insecurity. They are just adorable together. Can’t wait to find out what “Lenored” is all about. Thank you again.
Lenore! be prepared… be very prepared hahahah!!! brilliant! I kinda lost this one and i was looking for this everywhere, lucky for me hail was there to help.:)keep it up!!!
frip – please do not apologize for posting quickly. i love that almost everyday this week i received a new update from you. the only thing i am scared of is that you will finish and we will never hear from you again. you MUST continue with new stories after this one. and i won’t be mad if you post them everyday as well. anyway – ah the land of foreplay and reciprocity. sounds nice. this was a great chapter – i am intrigued as to what drama lenore is going to bring in her wake. i love that dana and alice are starting to share more of their feelings and i am glad they are gettin some now. and about the sorority – um i guess i’ll let that one slide. haha just kidding my best friend was in a sorority and it was just as crazy as your girls depicted in here. have a good holiday. later.