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Let it Ride- Chapter 6
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Lenore was saying mirthfully,"She used to run around naked except for a pair of high heels when Nelson and Jo had friends over."
Stifling a laugh, Alice said, "You make it sound so tawdry. I was like, three, guys."
Lenore grinned at Alice’s discomfort and said in a mock whisper, "It was darling. And Alice had the cutest little birthmark right on her little ass."
Alice groaned as Dana piped up suddenly, without thinking, "Oh, yeah! She does!"
If possible, Dana’s face grew redder than Alice’s and Helena lost whatever dignity she had left from her impromptu scramble up the stairs when she visibly choked on her drink, spraying some out onto the coffee table.
Encouraged by the laughter, Lenore said, "Another time I had some people over for drinks after work, Alice must’ve been two or three and we were all out on the patio smoking and having a laugh. I seem to recall that Farrah Fawcett had brought Lee Majors. Or maybe it was Ryan O’Neal. Anyway, we were so caught up, nobody noticed that little Alice had woken up and come down stairs. I don’t know where your father was, sweetie. I suppose Nelson was watching you. Anyway, Alice comes outside and falls in the pool."
She paused to take a sip of her drink, oblivious to the shocked gazes of Dana and Helena. Alice was looking intently at the tops of her shoes, refusing to acknowledge the fact that her mother was actually telling this story in public.
"Mm, where was I? Oh, you were in the pool, dear. Anyway, when everyone finally realized what was going on Lee Majors himself had jumped in the pool to rescue her. Can you believe that?"
Alice’s cheeks were burning in shame and Dana’s hand instantly coiled around one of Alice’s clenched fists. Helena tried valiantly to diffuse the situation, saying, "Lenore, do tell me about your encounter with my uncle Alistair. I’d be very interested to hear about it."
Alice got up from the sofa and said in a voice nearly strangled with forced cheer, "I’m getting another drink."
Lenore barely looked up as she held her glass aloft and asked, "Freshen mine up too, darling?"
Dana stood, intercepting the glass with a tight smile and saying, "Sure, I’ll take care of it."
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Poor Alice!! I would probably curl up into a ball and die if my mother did that to me. At least she had Dana there with her fir support. So how long before Alice starts to grow tired of having to hide being with Dana? You can already see guilt of it all is eating Dana alive. But what about Alice? Do we get to see how she really feels about it all? Anyway I can’t wait for next post since you left us dangling there at the end. I just love a drunk Dana.
Not a drop of Danish tonight until you showed up at 3am EST. I was about to go to bed. What can I say? You are amazing! Thank you for your comment and analysis. I totally agree with you about ED’s & LH’s. If weren’t for their outstanding performance, I do not think I will be so hooked on reading all these Danish stories and writing comments at 4am. I thought I too came across a story or 2 about A & L. But I did not read them. So if you happen to know, please tell me then I shall broaden my horizon. You have Lenore down perfectly. Thanks a lot Lenore, “Seems like I just met the last one”; Charlie’s angel? (Like Jaclyn Smith and hope is not Kate Jackson); “and the six million dollar man came along”. Poor Alice. I couldn’t stop laughing while reading this chapter. You are just a natural and your timing is perfect. Sitting in the booth scene really hit the whole staying in the closet issue. Good job. Btw, you are way to humble about your success. I am still laughing as I am typing this. Bravo! And I did not have one drop of alcohol. Like I was telling Akiracolorblind earlier. Danish stories make the best night cap. Hope you have a happy weekend & looking forward to your next post.
Hey frip, I must say that I ahve always liked Leonore and wish she would be back on the show. You really got her pegged down and Al is so different wieh she is around. I feel that Helena and Dana got more than they wanted w/Leonore and see why Al is the way she is IMO. Great chapter frip!!
oohhh… leave us hangin right there huh? again, LOVE IT! I logged in two seconds after I got home! hahah I can’t wait for the next chapter
you are z best frip!!this story is beyond good loving it and no do not mind the quick posts look forward to my daily danish can always count on you making it delicious;)
Another excellent chapter! The drama was nicely offset with the humor and love between Dana and Alice. I hope the next installment picks up in the bathroom. And you can be my wingman any time….
HEY!!!! I do really agree wih you about ED & LH. I don’t think the story would be great if it wasn’t for their wonderful performance on the show! I love the Top Gun reference: that was cute. I love the story about lil’ Alice getting rescued by the Six Million Dollar Man. I felt sorry for Alice about her mother, but what mother doesn’t have an embarassing story about their child? lol anyways great job..PPS!
Awww. This chapter was a little hard to read. I had a rough childhood, so Lenore’s blatant disregard and condescension toward Alice bring back a lot of memories. Poor thing. I’m glad Dana was so supportive, though I kinda wonder why Shane wasn’t moreso. Oh well. And as toward me being Yoda, yeah right. I’m thinking you could teach me a thing or five about writing, so hush. This is great, can’t wait to read more.
hey! i love this story, its so cute & funny! i totally agree that ED & LH played the relationship soooo well on the show & that is what made it so interesting. looking forward to the next post :)