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Let it Ride- Chapter 6
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Dana snuggled in beside Alice on the couch, intertwining her fingers with Alice’s as they listened to a wonderfully silly story Helena was explaining about her own family.
Leaning in to Alice, Dana whispered softly, "I didn’t know Helena had a brother. Have you ever met him?"
Alice nodded, a slight blush coloring her cheeks as she said with surprising evasiveness, "Yep. Met him."
Dana, suspicious of Alice’s curious reaction, questioned further, "Baby, why are you blushing? Did you have a crush on him or something?"
Alice’s flush seemed to spread and she tugged at the collar of her shirt as if airflow was becoming a problem.
Dana’s eyes narrowed and then widened so fast that Alice would have laughed if she hadn’t been so busy trying to escape Dana’s scrutiny.
The tennis player whispered fiercely, "You slept with your best friend’s brother?"
Alice looked frantically toward Helena and Lenore. Mercifully, neither had seemed to hear and Alice whispered back, "I didn’t know he was her brother. We met at a concert of Helena’s a few months ago. And I mean, Dane- I know you’re a total lez but the man is gorgeous! He’s like Helena, but taller and more muscular."
Alice groaned as she realized that her statement had kind of made it seem as though she found Helena more than empirically attractive.
Dana looked displeased. Her lips had thinned considerably and Alice said desperately, "That didn’t come out right. But, I mean come on Dane. You know she’s hot."
Dana conceded the point and she allowed herself to ask the important question, "Does Helena know you slept with- with- what’s his name?"
Alice said quietly, "Alexander. And yes. She said she never wants to have it mentioned in her presence again, though. Which is understandable, I suppose."
Dana was in complete agreement as she said, "That goes for me too. It gives me the willies."
Alice frowned. "The willies? I thought you were supposed to be insanely jealous at the thought of me with someone else."
Dana grinned, saying, "That too. Do I have to remind you about the other night when I almost clocked a girl for getting a bit to close to my own personal rock star?"
Alice was smiling now too, grinning insanely at her girlfriend. "My hero."
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Poor Alice!! I would probably curl up into a ball and die if my mother did that to me. At least she had Dana there with her fir support. So how long before Alice starts to grow tired of having to hide being with Dana? You can already see guilt of it all is eating Dana alive. But what about Alice? Do we get to see how she really feels about it all? Anyway I can’t wait for next post since you left us dangling there at the end. I just love a drunk Dana.
Not a drop of Danish tonight until you showed up at 3am EST. I was about to go to bed. What can I say? You are amazing! Thank you for your comment and analysis. I totally agree with you about ED’s & LH’s. If weren’t for their outstanding performance, I do not think I will be so hooked on reading all these Danish stories and writing comments at 4am. I thought I too came across a story or 2 about A & L. But I did not read them. So if you happen to know, please tell me then I shall broaden my horizon. You have Lenore down perfectly. Thanks a lot Lenore, “Seems like I just met the last one”; Charlie’s angel? (Like Jaclyn Smith and hope is not Kate Jackson); “and the six million dollar man came along”. Poor Alice. I couldn’t stop laughing while reading this chapter. You are just a natural and your timing is perfect. Sitting in the booth scene really hit the whole staying in the closet issue. Good job. Btw, you are way to humble about your success. I am still laughing as I am typing this. Bravo! And I did not have one drop of alcohol. Like I was telling Akiracolorblind earlier. Danish stories make the best night cap. Hope you have a happy weekend & looking forward to your next post.
Hey frip, I must say that I ahve always liked Leonore and wish she would be back on the show. You really got her pegged down and Al is so different wieh she is around. I feel that Helena and Dana got more than they wanted w/Leonore and see why Al is the way she is IMO. Great chapter frip!!
oohhh… leave us hangin right there huh? again, LOVE IT! I logged in two seconds after I got home! hahah I can’t wait for the next chapter
you are z best frip!!this story is beyond good loving it and no do not mind the quick posts look forward to my daily danish can always count on you making it delicious;)
Another excellent chapter! The drama was nicely offset with the humor and love between Dana and Alice. I hope the next installment picks up in the bathroom. And you can be my wingman any time….
HEY!!!! I do really agree wih you about ED & LH. I don’t think the story would be great if it wasn’t for their wonderful performance on the show! I love the Top Gun reference: that was cute. I love the story about lil’ Alice getting rescued by the Six Million Dollar Man. I felt sorry for Alice about her mother, but what mother doesn’t have an embarassing story about their child? lol anyways great job..PPS!
Awww. This chapter was a little hard to read. I had a rough childhood, so Lenore’s blatant disregard and condescension toward Alice bring back a lot of memories. Poor thing. I’m glad Dana was so supportive, though I kinda wonder why Shane wasn’t moreso. Oh well. And as toward me being Yoda, yeah right. I’m thinking you could teach me a thing or five about writing, so hush. This is great, can’t wait to read more.
hey! i love this story, its so cute & funny! i totally agree that ED & LH played the relationship soooo well on the show & that is what made it so interesting. looking forward to the next post :)