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“Was that a quick enough kiss,” Bette asked. Her voice was betraying the feelings that were starting to bubble up inside her.
Tina silently brought her hands from Bette’s shoulders to gently hold her head still.
“Too quick,” Tina replied. Her thumb moved over Bette’s full lips, barely open, as if her body was hoping to find the strength to stop what her mind couldn’t admit she wanted.
Their noses touched yet again. Lips grazed. Hands frozen on the body of the other.
“You can tell me to stop,” Tina whispered the words into Bette’s mouth. The hard consonants of Tina’s statement sent a subtle vibration to Bette’s lips that of course created sensations elsewhere in her body.
Their lips met fully, only slightly open. Tina let her arms fall back down to Bette’s shoulders as she let herself melt into the contact. She felt Bette’s tongue trace the edge of her top lip and then curl back as if it was never there…or as if it was a mistake to be so bold.
They mutually pulled away, both breathing in a way that demonstrated what such an encounter did for them.
Bette let her hands fall and stepped back.
“Okay then,” she said before taking another deep breath.
“I hadn’t forgotten how much I like kissing you, but…” Tina’s sentence trailed off.
“Yeah,” Bette agreed. “I’m going to go check on Angelica.”
Tina grinned. Bette never was one to deal with her emotions. She had to process on her own before discussing it with anyone else – if indeed she ever got to the point of discussing it with someone else.
By the time Bette returned, Tina had a few things in her small backpack to go home.
“Fast asleep,” Bette reported back.
“I thought she would be,” Tina said with a smile.
“Are you going for Sunday brunch tomorrow at the Planet?” Bette asked.
“Yeah, I am,” Tina replied.
“I guess I’ll see you there,” Bette offered.
“See you tomorrow.”
Tina turned the door knob and exited, closing the door quietly behind her.
Bette leaned back against the door and closed her eyes.
“I guess it’s never just a kiss with Tina,” she said quietly to herself.
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Tina paused outside the front door to gather herself before making her way down to the car. With one strap from her backpack slung over her left shoulder she used her hands to smooth her hair and tuck it behind her ears.
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Oh my God!
I am so happy that you are back!
I love your stories, i read them more than once over the years.
But i don’t have time to reread this story, have to work very early in the morning , but i hope to read it when i am back tomorrow. I am looking forward to it!
You are a incredible writer and i do hope that you will find the time to write more! For now, thank you again for returning!
I was so happy to see your name again, I love your stories, off to read now,, but please continue to post more stories.,, please post soon.
Thanks for the shoutout! You’re an incredible writer with a natural style that pulls the reader in and makes one sorry when the chapter/story ends. Your writing demands rereading many times. It’s just that enjoyable. :-)
Brilliant, thanks so much for this. 62 Pages of pleasure.
Enjoy your stories which are good to read more than once.
Look forward to keeping on swimming :-)
I love this story, as I always enjoy reading your work!
Loved it, thanks so much. You are such a good writer!
Glad you are back,I love your stories.
I certainly remember this story and I love it more now. Thanks for updating the language so the profane language is present. It’s not that I am a complete potty mouth but let’s be realistic. Several of the stories that have transferred over have blanks or asterisks instead of the actual language. In my opinion, when this happens, the stories lose some of their authenticity and the characters lose their edge. I realize that it takes effort to fill in the blanks especially in longer stories. So thanks for doing that.
I find stories harder to read with the asterisks inserted…it’s like a jolt of reality interfering with my escapism. I had to get to the task of editing them out. I do plan to work on more stories; some easier than others because of where the files are. This story was first posted almost 10 (!) years ago, so the digital file was more challenging to retrieve. I’m not much for cursing, but the occasional well placed F-bomb can really get someone’s attention.
@JKS I can’t believe this story is almost 10 years old! It reads now as fresh as it did then. I really love your stories because they are so well written with realism, humor, sarcasm and authenticity. It also helps that for us ORs (Original Readers), it follows canon for the characters and storylines. :-)
WOW, what a fabulous surprise seeing you back here, JKS! So glad you found your way back here and have even edited! Let me know if you have any questions or need any help!
Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing again!
Thanks for your effort of editing and for giving us this wonderful story again.
It’s still as beautiful as I remember it from reading your story for the first time a few years ago.
Finally I managed to finish reading!
I was slowly reading this story.
And I confess that it was a great trip.
Pretty and wonderful.!
And to think that have passed since the 10 years, but
It remains very current.
The entire universe.
Don’t remember seeing this before and it was wonderful, took me back a ways. So great to have you back giving us something to read from you. Wish other former writers would come back to us, all of you are valued and missed greatly. So many of the stories are not completed, would be so nice if they were. Again welcome back, looking forward to more. Thanks.
Loved this! I love your writing. I’m so glad I’ve come across your stories, be it years later but better late than never lol