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“Okay, I can do this,” she encouraged herself. “It’s just a short drive.”
She turned her upper body around quickly to bring the pack forward so that she could dig her car keys out as she walked down the stairs. But her keys were nowhere to be found.
She recalled pulling things out when she was changing in Bette’s bedroom.
“Shit,” she muttered under her breath. “Well, I have to get my keys.”
She turned back and walked up the stairs before she softly knocked on the door. She didn’t want to wake up Angelica because of her absent-mindedness.
She patiently waited for Bette to answer the door.
Bette heard the knocking from the master bedroom. As soon as she walked in, she had spied the keys at the foot of the bed and knew it wouldn’t be long before Tina returned to get them. She gave them a little nudge so that they were just slightly more concealed before catching her reflection in the mirror. Just as quickly she turned away to go answer the door.
She opened the door and looked at Tina quizzically.
“What’s up?” Bette asked.
“I must have dropped my keys somewhere,” Tina explained.
“Any idea where?”
“I think likely the bedroom,” Tina hesitated.
“Let’s go have a look,” Bette said, trying her best to be nonchalant. She opened the door wider and wordlessly invited Tina inside. Tina set her bag down by the front mat and felt Bette’s hand in the small of her back directing her toward the bedroom.
A wave of familiarity swept over Tina. How many times had she felt Bette’s gentle touch on the small of her back as they made their way toward the bedroom? Tina pushed the door open and glanced around the room. She started to remind herself where she had been to try to remember where the keys could possibly be.
“I came in, and set my backpack at the foot of the bed,” she said quietly, trying to remain focused.
“Did you go into the closet or the bathroom?” Bette asked as she took a couple of steps closer to where Tina stood.
“No, I just grabbed the shorts out of the dresser…” she glanced over, hopeful of seeing her keys on the top of the bureau. Nothing. “Damn,” she said under her breath.
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Oh my God!
I am so happy that you are back!
I love your stories, i read them more than once over the years.
But i don’t have time to reread this story, have to work very early in the morning , but i hope to read it when i am back tomorrow. I am looking forward to it!
You are a incredible writer and i do hope that you will find the time to write more! For now, thank you again for returning!
I was so happy to see your name again, I love your stories, off to read now,, but please continue to post more stories.,, please post soon.
Thanks for the shoutout! You’re an incredible writer with a natural style that pulls the reader in and makes one sorry when the chapter/story ends. Your writing demands rereading many times. It’s just that enjoyable. :-)
Brilliant, thanks so much for this. 62 Pages of pleasure.
Enjoy your stories which are good to read more than once.
Look forward to keeping on swimming :-)
I love this story, as I always enjoy reading your work!
Loved it, thanks so much. You are such a good writer!
Glad you are back,I love your stories.
I certainly remember this story and I love it more now. Thanks for updating the language so the profane language is present. It’s not that I am a complete potty mouth but let’s be realistic. Several of the stories that have transferred over have blanks or asterisks instead of the actual language. In my opinion, when this happens, the stories lose some of their authenticity and the characters lose their edge. I realize that it takes effort to fill in the blanks especially in longer stories. So thanks for doing that.
I find stories harder to read with the asterisks inserted…it’s like a jolt of reality interfering with my escapism. I had to get to the task of editing them out. I do plan to work on more stories; some easier than others because of where the files are. This story was first posted almost 10 (!) years ago, so the digital file was more challenging to retrieve. I’m not much for cursing, but the occasional well placed F-bomb can really get someone’s attention.
@JKS I can’t believe this story is almost 10 years old! It reads now as fresh as it did then. I really love your stories because they are so well written with realism, humor, sarcasm and authenticity. It also helps that for us ORs (Original Readers), it follows canon for the characters and storylines. :-)
WOW, what a fabulous surprise seeing you back here, JKS! So glad you found your way back here and have even edited! Let me know if you have any questions or need any help!
Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing again!
Thanks for your effort of editing and for giving us this wonderful story again.
It’s still as beautiful as I remember it from reading your story for the first time a few years ago.
Finally I managed to finish reading!
I was slowly reading this story.
And I confess that it was a great trip.
Pretty and wonderful.!
And to think that have passed since the 10 years, but
It remains very current.
The entire universe.
Don’t remember seeing this before and it was wonderful, took me back a ways. So great to have you back giving us something to read from you. Wish other former writers would come back to us, all of you are valued and missed greatly. So many of the stories are not completed, would be so nice if they were. Again welcome back, looking forward to more. Thanks.
Loved this! I love your writing. I’m so glad I’ve come across your stories, be it years later but better late than never lol